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Old 07-01-2005, 05:54 PM   #1
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Post check my rhyme style

All things that happen to me are never for the worst/
I can still get respect wit out havin to cusre/
never back for the first or last time ever/
you cant beat me cause ima better competitor/
Illmatic magnetic drug free creation/
I dodge the blows you throw wit a quik evasion/
Kick it evry style drop the beat and go acapella/
Im too dope for evry label even roc-a-fella/
skip superman this time im the hero/
of a world that counts startin wit negative zero/
tainted mind in a bind its so twisted/
so cross my path if you think you can risk it/
evry thought just pops into my head in like an instant/
Ya future will never happen cause its so distant/
purposly throwin off ya equalibrium/
creatin a language only known now as an idiom/
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Old 07-01-2005, 05:56 PM   #2
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this is a dope verse aint it.
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Old 07-02-2005, 12:48 AM   #3
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at first, i was thinkin' this sounded like a 13 year old wrote this, and then i realized: a 13 year old did write this... so i guess you're where you should be... LOL

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Old 07-02-2005, 05:32 AM   #4
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Cool and simple, i suppose you were busting. Keep posting!!!!!!!!!!!!!With time you will find you style and improve on it

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