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Psycho? Just a little bit, disclaimed by my ancestry/
Darkness draws like a moth and only the light can answer me// Bullets flying from the mouth, like the climax from Matrix Revolutions/ Beat impossible odds, King David’s Evolution// The pure rage intoxicates my conscious behavior/ Zombie-like, bubonic plague shit, I’m no savior// I fight back against the storm, step in the middle of a cyclone/ My rise is a story forlorn, shadow hounds ripping me bone by bone// God’s light has left me blinded, early comprehension of my potency/ You had me in the dust grinded, paying your pension by my fiery tendency// I’m never coming back, that’s already evident/ Once I reach those halls I’ll destroy your residence// Offer no reverence; fuck this fake hierarchy/ Get off me so I can escape this earthly lethargy// Descent? Happened a long time ago, I won’t pretend// I wear these battle scars proudly, the devilish dancer, God’s time is over, I’m that underworld cancer// feedback?
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feedback anyone?
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...............anybody...........
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pretty good son
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THE DIFFERENCE
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LyRiCaL sHiNoBi
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lmao ummm thanks i guess?? but w/e its to state ur thoughts on my piece i guess thxs for the feed
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THE DIFFERENCE
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lmfao what a dumb fuck
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akaTRIFE TYSON~spitboxer
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yo homie im feelin ya style
keep that threa goin son that tuco guys a fuckin herb
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fa sho thanks for the feed man.
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I KILL PEOPLE
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it was aight
some nice lines in there some of the lines didnt make sense to me ya style needs a little work but you got potential keep at it homie practice makes perfect
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Peace
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I sew... beautiful seeds that sprout flowers that’s deeply rooted your weak style-diluted with concepts that’s so polluted my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ... -- Dae Ja Nae http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503 |
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LyRiCaL sHiNoBi
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fa sho homie, thanks for the feed
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ill shit bruv , keep it up
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