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Old 07-02-2005, 10:47 AM   #1
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yo, like John Cena ya'll can't see me/
I iz sicker than a hippie on DMT/
When S-Man steps up in da place/
I lean back checkin out da fear in ya face/
Big up London wit da soufside crews/
fuck wit us, ya bound ta lose/
packin mad gats, n wearin vests/
ma crew rulez over tha rest/
yo, i iz aggressive man, don't piss me off/
i'll leave you suicidal like a Goth/
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Old 07-02-2005, 11:36 AM   #2
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nice drop man, but I would like to see some more creativity go into you're line's, think a lil deeper with the rhyme man, don't just rhyme word's, make the 2 sentence's that you're rhyming connect, keep on droppin line's man, you'll only get better and better, peace.
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Old 07-02-2005, 12:09 PM   #3
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when u rhyme about packin heat n shit, sounds like you are when most arnt, but u might be wearing vests n shit liek that but besides that i felt your bar pattern
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Old 07-02-2005, 12:23 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by S-Man
yo, like John Cena ya'll can't see me/
I iz sicker than a hippie on DMT/
When S-Man steps up in da place/
I lean back checkin out da fear in ya face/
Big up London wit da soufside crews/
fuck wit us, ya bound ta lose/
packin mad gats, n wearin vests/
ma crew rulez over tha rest/
yo, i iz aggressive man, don't piss me off/
i'll leave you suicidal like a Goth/
soun like you jus startin out......keep elevatin an if you reppin london come correct bruh......

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