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07-02-2005, 01:51 PM
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theorists
just a quik 16
something that was on my mind u hear me on the mic but u dont understand it buildin 7 detonated from inside i dont understand it jus like september 11th the towers were built to withstand it they crumbled like granite the greatest monument on the planet illuminati planned it it was a conspiracy so the nutcases were caught who believe in the sordid theories turn there backs on reality but they still had there queries but were afraid to ask questions cos the answers were eerie now that they call it ground zero its a fukin tragedy dismembered body parts plummetin wit the help of gravity but obviously im infinte like sexual depravity and hard hittin like the rules of relativity at the beginnin of it all there was two supreme powers that came to this world eruptin like volcanic showers the cold blooded killers and the ones that devour every single human soul who in there hearts are cowards As always criticism appreciated Bless, 1
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07-02-2005, 02:08 PM
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Re: theorists
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07-02-2005, 02:14 PM
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Re: theorists
aight kool
surreal Bless, 1
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my style and flow is dark like afghanistan dungeons// im about to blow up like seven parts of central london - Khrome Khaliba You beatin me is physically and psychological impossible// like paraplegic patients dreamin of walkin horizontal - Khrome Khaliba fuk a pregnant bitch my dicks so quik it makes sparks// dipped my dik in acid and left the baby with a birthmark - Khrome Khaliba |
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07-02-2005, 03:07 PM
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Re: theorists
I Liked This Verse Too, It Made Some Sense To Me
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07-02-2005, 03:58 PM
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Re: theorists
decent from off tha top....keep em cummin......
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07-03-2005, 04:10 AM
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Re: theorists
Tight verse , quite some knowledge there, few would dare to express in such a manner, and well place also- not the general stereo type kind !!!
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07-03-2005, 04:18 AM
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Re: theorists
Pretty Good, id say work on smoothin out the flow some.. some of the lines need more or less words... You did stay on topic tho.. not to bad overall
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07-03-2005, 10:58 AM
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Re: theorists
it was just something that was in my head at that moment
Bless for the criticism Bless, 1
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