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Livin Blade · 07-05-2005, 05:05 AM

Ma rhymes,ma technik,makes ya feel agony.
Cause ya now a victim of ma tyranny.
Make ya feel pain for all eternity.
Cause Im an ancient evil divinity.

Ma order,the Black Shadow Disciples.
Rip thru ya rhymes jus like ur principles.
cause they weak like beyond compare.
And that weakness make ya feel despair.

We use shurikens and ninja swords,
as if we were Deadly Ninja Lords.
Pray to ya god for protection,
Bitch,now u in need of Divine intervention
Cause ya aint gonna survive the infection,
caused by our venom sword intersection,

Here come the Shadow Shogun,flyin silently
The weapon of choice,the Livin Blade,cuts efficiently
Leavin ya in the dust,a dim worthless memory
Victim to deadly Ninjutsu weaponry.

Pls comment on this cuz i need help!

crastuf · 07-05-2005, 07:24 AM

it's straight, I felt it could have grabbed more attention though

GuardianOne · 07-05-2005, 08:42 AM

You have a wild imagination!!!!!!!!!!!
But it was cool,simple. Keep posting.

Peace

Racailla · 07-05-2005, 08:43 AM

To be honest, I'm feeling at best the last 4 lines

You need to check if words really rhyme, you know what I mean?

Livin Blade · 07-05-2005, 08:45 AM

yea, i dig ya dawg

07-05-2005, 05:05 AM	#1
Livin Blade Disciple of Shadow Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Temple of Darts Age: 28 Posts: 38 Rep Power: 0	Enter the Shogun Ma rhymes,ma technik,makes ya feel agony. Cause ya now a victim of ma tyranny. Make ya feel pain for all eternity. Cause Im an ancient evil divinity. Ma order,the Black Shadow Disciples. Rip thru ya rhymes jus like ur principles. cause they weak like beyond compare. And that weakness make ya feel despair. We use shurikens and ninja swords, as if we were Deadly Ninja Lords. Pray to ya god for protection, Bitch,now u in need of Divine intervention Cause ya aint gonna survive the infection, caused by our venom sword intersection, Here come the Shadow Shogun,flyin silently The weapon of choice,the Livin Blade,cuts efficiently Leavin ya in the dust,a dim worthless memory Victim to deadly Ninjutsu weaponry. Pls comment on this cuz i need help!

07-05-2005, 07:24 AM	#2
crastuf Ronin Ninja Join Date: Mar 2004 Age: 23 Posts: 394 Rep Power: 10	Re: Enter the Shogun it's straight, I felt it could have grabbed more attention though

07-05-2005, 08:42 AM	#3
GuardianOne Taoist Saint Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Zambia Age: 32 Posts: 1,271 Rep Power: 10	Re: Enter the Shogun You have a wild imagination!!!!!!!!!!! But it was cool,simple. Keep posting. Peace __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/artist/6/guardianone_music.htm www.zimvibes.com www.audiozim.com

07-05-2005, 08:43 AM	#4
Racailla Neb-maat Ra Join Date: May 2004 Location: Chinguetti Posts: 238 Rep Power: 0	Re: Enter the Shogun To be honest, I'm feeling at best the last 4 lines You need to check if words really rhyme, you know what I mean? __________________ Look at my nephew, he jumped at the window just to see you (The Sun - Ghostface, Rza, Raekwon and Slick Rick) http://www.myspace.com/racailla

07-05-2005, 08:45 AM	#5
Livin Blade Disciple of Shadow Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Temple of Darts Age: 28 Posts: 38 Rep Power: 0	Re: Enter the Shogun yea, i dig ya dawg __________________ Divine intervention aint a protection against Ninjutsu poison pen infection

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