Metal Fist Vs. WARPATH

[WARPATH]

Alright I made the thread, you made the challenge. I'm not gonna baby sit this thread so just send me PM after you drop or just wait for me to check back. You challanged the GOD so I'll wait for you to drop. 2 verses each...... I'll go first for the second round to make it fair.

[Metalfist]

warpath's not going to get up when my sword slash
he's style is tore back, play this bitch like a door mat
smash ya face with Thor's axe you can't compete with hardcore cats
smoke a ounce of meth and I'll still sleep on his board raps

he wont leap like a frog so let me even the odds,
he screaming he is a god but I don't believe in you dog,
this aint beefing this is metal fist seeking a fraud,
your boss is fired up and you aint keeping ya job,

my style's bold, flow so cold I'm dispatchin blizzards,
this chump is twenty nine years old with action figures,
I'm blastin triggers at ya dome, legs, chest, back and liver,
No point for you to be on the throne if you can't deliver,

WARs rap is bitter and more played out than cadillacs with spinners,
I eat mcs for breakfast, lunch and now I'm back for dinner,
you can't match with winners, it's a lack of inner,
conscience my contents blow you off the map like twisters,

[WARPATH]

Good shit man.......here's mine....

They call her metalfist because her palms be callous-
she's got a grip and I'm not naming who's phallus-
she can tell us though with her hips, lips and thighs
because fucking with WARPATH bitch you must be high.-

So I'm here to give baby doll some foreplay-
cut out her tongue to stop that corny ass sword play-
then scissor her pussy and show her my porn face-
fucking with GOD kid you need wheaties bran corn flakes-

I gotta warn fakes comin in my house of daggers with a style like STORM-
titty twisters is the only action your figure gets in the dorm-
fucking with Xaviers most talented and gifted-
will only leave this bitch orgasmic and mentally lifted-

Wet from the way my knives cut through your spleen-
then scalp this bitch and leave her dome in the fashion of Mr. Clean-
saying WARPATH made you cream is the only way you can shine
and I got the whole WU-Corp screaming child molestation is a crime...

[Poetic Wun]

damn... this was some good shit.

both your second 4 were the weakest.

flippin the action figure line, playin off on warpath with the scalpin- nice lines there.

Metal came in swingin with thor's axe n shit... ill

overall ima roll with Metal,
you stepped your game up and came with the inner rhyme scheme n shit.
this was a close one imo but i just wasn't feelin the "metalfist is a girl" theme of warpaths.

vote Metalfist
paece

[Metalfist]

Originally Posted by Poetic Wun

damn... this was some good shit.

both your second 4 were the weakest.

flippin the action figure line, playin off on warpath with the scalpin- nice lines there.

Metal came in swingin with thor's axe n shit... ill

overall ima roll with Metal,
you stepped your game up and came with the inner rhyme scheme n shit.
this was a close one imo but i just wasn't feelin the "metalfist is a girl" theme of warpaths.

vote Metalfist
paece

Thanks but there is one more round left.
"Good shit warpath"

[Poetic Wun]

haha my bad i thought it was one

[Metalfist]

...

[WARPATH]

Sorry man, didn't have time to really sit down and give this battle the attention it deserves...


It's the WARPATH but after this you'll refer to me as WAR CHIEF-
because my punches will leave metal's face like hamburger, then he'll know "what's beef"-
this pussy couldn't come funky if he queefed, and I got wu-corp asking "who farted?"-
so I called in some sympathy votes for the mentally ruhtarded-
I really should've mentioned this before.....
Thor doesn't rock an axe, it's a hammer you fucking whore-
um....sorry I'm mean outstanding young man, I didn't really mean it-
because apparently to win battles you have to assume your opponent has a penis-
sorry, writer's block had to get that off my chest-
let's invite poetic one over and i'll sqeeze on both your breasts-
then you can confess- how much you adore me during pillow talk-
and how I bring the pain with a ginormous burning dildo cock-
admit it WARPATH is the best at what he does with rubber gloves-
metalfisting both you little bitches just to show you how I love-
and rub this nut in your face and sprinkle it with glitter-
take some pictures then post them....fuck it you can seem them on my twitter.

[Metalfist]

I didn't post a deadline so were all good!!

(round two)
It's seems Warpath did his research on Thors facts and still came back more crap,
I'm leaving blood and gore splats on his T-shirt for ya weak verse I couldn't ignore that,
like nine eleven I take flight, my rhyme weapon give you stage fright got your mind stressin,
The god shine and bless em with lyrics to shatter your spine in a second,

I thought you resigned from the session because I make kids surrender quick,
my second verse strive for perfection, your still on that same gender diss,
bring the heat in the middle of December bitch make em remember fist,
put you on the ingured list, your brian may take months to render this,

soles I captivate, when foes activate the throne I have to take,
my flow lacerates swinging the guiliotine and domes dicapitate,
you lack the verbals im blazing this bitch quick with rap infernos,
good shit like crack that burns slow, keep sending you back to journals,

next time you try to spit dont be rappin soft,
stupid bitch you should learn to spit instead of slackin off,
this battle is unbalance and your ass will get tossed,
someone give me a challenge it's a fact you lost.

[Metalfist]

good battle !!!votes please!!!

[TeknicelStylez]

Metal barely took the first verse, CS was defintely close behind with the humor this line had me dying.

I gotta warn fakes comin in my house of daggers with a style like STORM-
titty twisters is the only action your figure gets in the dorm-

well put together, but metals rhyme scheme is just off the chain everything clicked like magic in that verse, and the vocab definitely took the pie. Mira Eso

my style's bold, flow so cold I'm dispatchin blizzards,
this chump is twenty nine years old with action figures,
I'm blastin triggers at ya dome, legs, chest, back and liver,
No point for you to be on the throne if you can't deliver,

nice multi's for sure... If your verse was just a little more complicated on the flow I wouldve gave it to you CS out off the sheer disrespect you was dishing.

2nd verses

I was definitely dissapointed with CS's verse, seemed like you weren't all that into it and you just popped it out quick, it's all good fam it happens. Wasn't that bad though, always a laugh... you still got that crazy style

then you can confess- how much you adore me during pillow talk-
and how I bring the pain with a ginormous burning dildo cock-

Metal fist you started coming hard and the end was real weak but the strength of the opener carried the rest of the verse into the winner spot. This was sick...

soles I captivate, when foes activate the throne I have to take,
my flow lacerates swinging the guiliotine and domes dicapitate,

vicious rhyme scheme, your multi's are real sick

only complaint I have with metal is I'm concerned the bars are a little stretched, how would it fit in a 4/4 you might be huffin and puffin by the 3rd line... you pushin 17 syllables on some of them... shrink em down and you'll be a beast for real

I'm going to have to give this to Metalfist

Good battle yo

[Metalfist]

Thanks for the much needed feedback and vote as well.

[The Ghost]

I felt like Metalfist took this one easy. Warpath did make me laugh with "this pussy couldn't come funky if he queefed" though. Overall Metalfist came in with strong wordplay and syllables.

Originally Posted by TeknicelStylez

only complaint I have with metal is I'm concerned the bars are a little stretched, how would it fit in a 4/4 you might be huffin and puffin by the 3rd line... you pushin 17 syllables on some of them... shrink em down and you'll be a beast for real

I agree with TeknicelStylez with that point also.

[Metalfist]

Originally Posted by WARPATH

Alright I made the thread, you made the challenge. I'm not gonna baby sit this thread so just send me PM after you drop or just wait for me to check back. You challanged the GOD so I'll wait for you to drop. 2 verses each...... I'll go first for the second round to make it fair.

you didn't announce a vote #

[BambinoTTT EgWest]

I like Warpath's verses and his sexual referrences were pretty fuckin funny but overall lyrically Metalfist took it, especially the second verse, my vote goes to Metalfist, both competitors were dope as fuck though PEACE!