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Old 07-05-2005, 10:46 AM   #1
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Take a look at me, Iím twice the MC youíll ever be
After your fall, I spit on the grave after delivering your eulogy
Kick a verse, Freddy canít perform what ďI doĒ
Every rhyme puts whack MCs through combines with two-inch verticals
On to you, I smack that fake grimace off your face
Very dangerous to those that attempt to invade my space
Enter the dragon, I breathe fire at weak rappers
Reckon that God added a subnote to the 5th Commandment afterwards
Yank you straight outta your knock-off Tim boots
Outta sight, outta mind, like Pablo Escobarís narcotic truths
Ubiquitous with this, Iím omnipotent with a sixteen
Renderiní you unconscious, Vinne Paz-style, transplant ya spleen
Correct ya hunchback with a Louisville Slugger bat
Rippiní you a new asshole, Iím not ashamed to smack cats on a track
Every time you try and make me fold under your industrial rule
We pull a Al Capone, and TAKE OVER YOUR CREWÖ
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Old 07-05-2005, 12:22 PM   #2
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Default Re: Acrospit 2

Whatup X! I like this verse a lot. I can see that you've really improved since i last read your shit. There are a lot of good lines in here. My faves are these
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Kick a verse, Freddy canít perform what ďI doĒ
Every rhyme puts whack MCs through combines with two-inch verticals

Enter the dragon, I breathe fire at weak rappers
Reckon that God added a subnote to the 5th Commandment afterwards
Nice stuff man keep it up. Peace.
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Old 07-05-2005, 01:30 PM   #3
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You know I like the message in a verse style PEACE
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Old 07-06-2005, 01:10 AM   #4
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Default Re: Acrospit 2

Interesting rhymes, like the way you worked it out. I could quote some noteable parts but it was nice. Nice verse.Although towards the end it seemed to involve a lot of references.

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Old 07-06-2005, 02:08 PM   #5
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is this the one u pmed me about if so


NICE WORDPLAY AND RHYME SCHEME

WORK ON UR MULTIS CUZ U GOT NOINE AND THATS WHAT I LOVE

NO REAL PUNCHES


BUT VER NICE COMMANDING LINES


BUT NO REAL PUNCHES

UR GETTIN GOOD THO
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Old 07-06-2005, 02:26 PM   #6
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Always likin this kind of rhymin

keep postin n gracin us wit lyrics

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