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07-07-2005, 01:10 AM
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Sunday
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Day Of Rest Moonlight Sets The Tone Story Told Endless Scripts Unfold From The Dome Purest Form Killah Bee Storm Swarm The State Checkmate Cast The Winds Take The Glimpse Wirlwinds Portal To Different Areas Soak In Life Ill Meet U At The Top Of The Clif Telescope At The Star Revolves Around Me Astronomy New Discovery Winds Chilly Portrait Like Davinci Winds Drift Gravity Feel My Body Drop Back To Earth Reality Verse Slash Opponents Afterlife Components 3rd Planet From The Sun Evolutionary Energy Force The Sword Swing Strikes Devils Off Course MY SOURCE OF UNITY DIVIDES SANTUARY GATHERINGS LIGHT BEAMS FLASH THE INTENT TO SACRIFICE MIRACLES HAPPEN WITH MENTAL STIMULATION HEAL THE WORLD WhERE FACING NO ERASING HISTORY IS THE TIMELINE LIFELINES BLOOD PUMPS LIFE TO AN INSTANT REVELATION TO THE LAST CRIES OF BABIES BORN FIRST BREATH ALREADY SCORNED MILITARY UNIFORM PERFORM FORMS OF HYBRID TRANSFORM DIVIDED LIFES TORN TRUMPETS BE THE SIGNS 4.4.4 BE THE RYME
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07-07-2005, 01:52 AM
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Senior Member
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Re: Sunday
i always like that absract direction you take it to, nice drop...peace and 1
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07-07-2005, 02:36 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2005
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Re: Sunday
Your verse seemed not well placed (or organized), but i think thats just the fact about it. It continues to flow in some disbanded effort. All the words seem to be expressing something whilst they (th words ) are joined. Nice though. Hey what would happen on sunday?
Peace PS: Keep posting |
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