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New track I wrote the other day here it is. Currently isnt finished but ill give you what I have
UP LATE NIGHTS THINKIN CRAZY THOUGHTS LIFES OPPOSITE OF RIGHT NOTICIN TIMES I FOUGHT DRAGGED MY LIFE UNCONTROLLABLE TO MAINTAIN CONSEQUENCE ENDS IN STRIFE FEELIN ENORMOUS PAIN ALWAYS COMPLAIN BUT I CANT EXPLAIN WHY DAY AFTER DAY IS DRIVIN ME INSANE CANT PREDICT MY LIFE BUT I FORSEE AN ENDLESS CAMPAIGN RUBBED AGAINST LIFES EDGE CAUSIN EXTREME FRICTION STRIVIN FOR MORE IS LIKE AN ADDICTION NO CONNECTIONS IT ALL ENDS IN A CONTRADICTION I OBSESS OVER THIS BULLSHIT STRESS I FEEL CONSTANTLY BECAUSE I HAVE NO CONTACT TO CARESS THRU THE MESS MY PROGRESS HAS BEEN A FAILED SUCCESS MY LIFES DEFINITION IS FULL OF FUCKEN COMPETITION CANT MAINTAIN AN AMBITION I RECIEVE LITTLE RECOGNITION FROM BEING HELD IN THIS SUBMISSION IN THE END I FEEL LIKE GRABBING AMMUNITION AND DESTROYING YOUR FUCKEN LIFE LIKE DEMOLITION NO RELAXATION ALWAYS HIT BEIN PARANOID FEEL GONE LIKE IM VOID BUT I CANT AVOID WHEN I DONT LIFE KEEPS ME DESTROYED I CANT REMEMBER THE LAST LOVING MOMENT I ENJOYED I KNOW SEEING IT AROUND CONSTANTLY KEEPIN ME ANNOYED WORSE DEPRESSION SEEIN OTHERS AT SUCCESSION BLANK FACIAL EXPRESSIONS LEAVES PEOPLE WITH A REPETITIVE QUESTION Thats all I have so far. Peace 1 luv |
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Taoist Saint
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It seems it was more sided to loneliness. Though it shows you were trying to express something but not fully explaining it.Or you are trying to explain it. I don't know correct me if iam wrong?I suppose it goes with the title.
Peace PS: Keep posting |
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Fuckin' Left
Join Date: Jun 2005
Age: 25
Posts: 860
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Loneliness is a form a depression..if your just depressed for no reason, then there somthing wrong in your head.....depression comes in many forms....anything can get u depressed...such as death, loneliness, sarrow, grief, ect ect..
..no where to go but up...unless you let yourself fall....... |
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