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Hunger Pains..
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ok im up for battling anyone, prefrebly someone who ive never battled before but its all good.
bring the pain. first to 3-5 votes i dont care, 20 lines, no dickriding. peace.
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: The staircase
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listen up close
fake styles i burn yo if you really still hungry i'll butter your toast dope mc's annoy me i turn for the hose this battle was open but now it's been closed homie fuck bringin the pain i carry the death so whenever a faggot steps he just increases my rep cuz they.... loose quick i hit dudes quick and if i cant get the job done with a gun i break out the tool kit i'm ruthless whenever my trigga finger itches i murder a couple of prostitutes and even sum cute bitches cuz i dont giv a fuck i wont follow the rules i neva do hell i mite rape a couple of bitches even the ones dressed in penguin suits rite now u get riped jack sit back and relax spit a verse so i can spit one back butters a faggot god type some lyrics i'll try to listen but i dont speak faggot talk |
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Hunger Pains..
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ok here goes.
As i disperse my battle verse its hard to tell which came first/ Was it your ass or your mouth you spilled those shit based words/ 36 and you still net rhyming im 17 and still out-shining/ every word i spit is coated with a silver lining/ another one ranting and raving about makin a killin/ a 36 year old man stuck in a fantasy land dreamin of makin a million/ i should just big myself up or even battle myself/ with your rhymes still in stores at the back of the top shelf/ i dont wanna go on before i get to greedy/ sorry man you stop here this forum needs me/ im still old school and i kick out the new (thats you)/ im a vet even though i had to rejoin in june/ lay the line ready for my next chapter/ this was only the beginnin you'l be lucky to see from here on after/ that was wack its to early. bring the next verse and ill get heated on my second.
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Join Date: Jun 2005
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17 years old out shinin what with what glory/
that's right i could base my words on shit and still out-battle your life story/ talkin about throwin raps when its shit you disperse/ talkin about silver lining i keep paint thinner inside of my verse/ you tickle my fancy with your beatable vibe/ your whole verse was wack filled with simple plain lies/ i'm sorry to burst ya bubble but oldschool aint nintey-five/ little boy... give up your battelin shit/ thinkin your lyrics hot?.no it's just ghost on your dick/ congratgulations your a vetran for wu-tang corp/ that aint shit mothafucka try fightin in desert storm/ i'm a literal soldier remembered enemies i was gunnin/ greenman already got his break butter leave the station cuz your train aint comin/ fuck faggot mothafuckas spittin styles that's cute (thats you)/ flowin ridiculous shit for ghost to give you a vote or two/ i didnt know my fantasay was reality yo/ i dont have a million yet but you aint even close/ i hope your 2nd verse is worth it god/ but dont be talkin about my green i'm not like u savin up to get a mouse pad with a minimum wage mcdonalds job/ you cant kill me i am dead/ youre right i'm wastin my time battelin a kid who aint even man yet / |
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Hunger Pains..
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time to bring fire hot enough to expand the air in your ego/
your so pathetic your job title is an 'out of work peado'/ you couldnt add up my lyrics if you playin with a calculator/ only time you fuckin is when you and your hand play 'chronic masterbator/ for someone who claims intelligence, you sure are simple/ you still rap younger than a new born baby's ass dimples/ most the shit you said, already been used many times before/ only reason you got a wife is because you been fuckin with blind whores!/ take a trip to the rhyme store/ oh shit we used yours to wipe the bathroom floor/ i usually done say that shit thats not true/ thats why i got a book written after me called 'fuck you'/ but if theres one thing i dont do, is give a fuck/ i was in your house slappin your wife for makin chicken clucks/ i dont feed of other peoples verses its all fluent/ you went to an all boys school and never played truent/ with that stuff you come out with, you been sippin from a sewer/ you dont replace a septic tank, you just clean it so it looks brand newer/ now we all know where you get your rhymes from/ i spwaned from a meteor shower cause by a time bomb/ i need practise. vote 5 votes whatever, leave reasons explaining. peace.
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Join Date: Mar 2003
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ok first of all, this battle was not that hot.
nobody had any HARD punches and your wordplay was decent. nothing really made me go "damn, did he just say that?" but yo, green, some of ya bars where entirely too long. I know this isn't audio but having a uniform flow to ya text joints just makes it hit that much harder. butter, I see ya potential kid but a lot of your lines where what I consider throw aways. them shits was wack. I had to deduct for wackness and unecessary dick riding. Ghost.. your votes are suspect. Ya man didn't come that strong. and he knows it. my vote= greeneyes
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Hunger Pains..
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yeah i feel ya i wasnt on point.
1-0 to green.
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I'll Fuck You Up
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Fuck that shit pat yourselfs on the back, the first verses especially in green eyes case were offpoint but the second verses were fire.
Lol I feel bad for greeneyes every battle he in he get wrecked on for being 36. Since the first verses weren't really nething to go off of, I'ma go with the second verse and say greeneyes cuz he went straight for the throat. My vote = Green Eyes.... Peace to Both Emcees and if you see an open battle I got vote plz, I think bring your swords is open. |
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Join Date: Sep 2004
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17 years old out shinin what with what glory/ that's right i could base my words on shit and still out-battle your life story/ talkin about throwin raps when its shit you disperse/ talkin about silver lining i keep paint thinner inside of my verse/ you tickle my fancy with your beatable vibe/ your whole verse was wack filled with simple plain lies/ i'm sorry to burst ya bubble but oldschool aint nintey-five/ little boy... give up your battelin shit/ thinkin your lyrics hot?.no it's just ghost on your dick/ congratgulations your a vetran for wu-tang corp/ that aint shit mothafucka try fightin in desert storm/ i'm a literal soldier remembered enemies i was gunnin/ greenman already got his break butter leave the station cuz your train aint comin/ fuck faggot mothafuckas spittin styles that's cute (thats you)/ flowin ridiculous shit for ghost to give you a vote or two/ i didnt know my fantasay was reality yo/ i dont have a million yet but you aint even close/ i hope your 2nd verse is worth it god/ but dont be talkin about my green i'm not like u savin up to get a mouse pad with a minimum wage mcdonalds job/ you cant kill me i am dead/ youre right i'm wastin my time battelin a kid who aint even man yet / ^^ ouch!! Butter time to bring fire hot enough to expand the air in your ego/ your so pathetic your job title is an 'out of work peado'/ you couldnt add up my lyrics if you playin with a calculator/ only time you fuckin is when you and your hand play 'chronic masterbator/ for someone who claims intelligence, you sure are simple/ you still rap younger than a new born baby's ass dimples/ most the shit you said, already been used many times before/ only reason you got a wife is because you been fuckin with blind whores!/ take a trip to the rhyme store/ oh shit we used yours to wipe the bathroom floor/ i usually done say that shit thats not true/ thats why i got a book written after me called 'fuck you'/ but if theres one thing i dont do, is give a fuck/ i was in your house slappin your wife for makin chicken clucks/ i dont feed of other peoples verses its all fluent/ you went to an all boys school and never played truent/ with that stuff you come out with, you been sippin from a sewer/ you dont replace a septic tank, you just clean it so it looks brand newer/ ^^lol at that one Butter ... you sayin' my man spits shit ... lol now we all know where you get your rhymes from/ i spwaned from a meteor shower cause by a time bomb/ Based on the 2nd verse alone, I'd have to say it's a draw for me. I read em both 3 times and I just can't decide ... sorry. Peace
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- butter-"full time peado" lmao
green- 95' aint old school" clever shit. i dont like that feeding shit cuz its hard to vote on. u fed off every line green but your lines were hot. shit gets confusing when u do that tho cuz i cant tell how original you really are. draw so far, u guys should do one more round, cancel the last verses and just do a finale with all new original shit. peace
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Kung Fu Alter Ego
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ILL!!!!
Go get them Luther.
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Join Date: Jul 2005
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both mc's were not at their best here, but luther large stod out to me bcuz his topics were kinda crazy, ill vote with luther
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Join Date: Sep 2005
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Vote=Luther
this battle was somewhat boring, but had some nice moments |
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Veteran Member
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do we still use house rules or do these count?????
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