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Old 07-14-2005, 06:15 PM   #1
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a verse and chorus for a mixtape me and my boy doin

ill tear your face of cuzzin/
leave you lookin like you went chain saw jugglin/
sray bombs, see the napalm bublin/
got my axe lookin like an insane paul bunyan/
i dont see your lyrics, like i was ray charles/
prolly pink in its appearence, covered in gay sparkles/
carry a knife, im a scarry guy so/
ill pull the plug on your life, like you was teri shivo/
im spittin these horror hits/
leave you hangin from your balls like christmas tree ornamnets/
its collesum time/
sceaze your life, i rock the carpe diam mind/
leave you lookin like barney, purple and green/
my knife infects with termanil disease/
slice necks with surgical ease/
diced heads hang from vertical beams/

we intellegent heavenly/
you remeber us like you had an elephant memery/
make more inscions in your body/
were like something out the horror visions of Ghotti/
we psychological crazy/
so when we say that we'll skin you its a possible maby/
we got closets of babies/
chek outside your window we been stalking you latley/
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Old 07-14-2005, 06:34 PM   #2
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i like it it's good
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Old 07-14-2005, 06:37 PM   #3
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thanks, feed back is always appreciated
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Old 07-14-2005, 07:18 PM   #4
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I liked it, it was some good shit
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Old 07-14-2005, 09:22 PM   #5
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thanks man
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Old 07-14-2005, 10:12 PM   #6
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decent... some good lines (though played out) and some filler... some good multies... spellin' was terrible, but i'm picky like that... keep practicin', and you'll definitely get better...

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Old 07-14-2005, 11:11 PM   #7
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decent... some good lines (though played out) and some filler... some good multies... spellin' was terrible, but i'm picky like that... keep practicin', and you'll definitely get better...

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haha, ya i dont usually spell chek my verses... thanks for constructive critisism, i gotta long time to practice and im using every second...
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Old 07-15-2005, 05:17 AM   #8
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Decent shit bro, keep it up
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Old 07-15-2005, 09:17 PM   #9
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haha, ya i dont usually spell chek my verses... thanks for constructive critisism, i gotta long time to practice and im using every second...
that's what i like to hear...

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PS. spellcheck is your friend... LOL
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Old 07-16-2005, 04:32 AM   #10
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It was a decent verse, i suppose you were busting. Ya your speeling was not checked. Your content was not creative as i think you are able to . You must improve


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