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Join Date: Jun 2005
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we each have two verses
who's goin 1st |
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Ronin Ninja
Join Date: Mar 2004
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JNINE: dude, you 36 and are on a website rap battling teenagers................get a job!
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aint it your bed time boy
u dont know what i do |
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i worked for my computer i aint sittin on mommies and daddies or even my friends and check out alot of these ages dummy they aint all as young as you
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ghost i'll get back to you tomorrow if you wanna spit a verse feel free
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Alcoholic Author
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Bermuda Triangle
Age: 62
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i'll do mine when i get to the crib......
ghost
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![]() You find yourself surrounded by woodland creatures... Lighting matches under my hat...Ghost Pirates... Frosty mug of rum.....Ol' Los Angelos heroin epidemic, i bust slugs that love to figure skate through me, we had a merry war turned emcees to cabin boys i carved Wu-Tang in his hive, you heard the stabbin noise, rawhead rex, snake eater from dungeoun, a web of dead bodies in the sewers underground london.. |
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Alcoholic Author
Join Date: Jul 2005
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you 36 but it doesnt make you invinsible, i'm an all around better lyricist, it's a basic principle
i told butter he got my vote, i knew your shit was going to suck like everything else you wrote, you just aint cut out for this, so when i'm done teaching you this lesson, it's greeneyes dismissed, i'm going to make you feel so little people wont even know that you exist, i'm just that cold, and like the dust in a hidden chamber you rhymes are just that old, they're played out , this is survival of the fittest not no boy scouts, what are you doing here we're some engineers, rhymes so complexed, you're scared to volunteer, no dissaprear you aint nothing, acting like your something, nigga stop frontin, because i am real i dont deal wit fakes, so you tripped up like steppin on banana peels, you're just a peasant and the only reason you're alive is because i presented you your life as a wedding present, aint i pleasant, yeah i know i'm nice if you cross my path again, on killing you i wont think twice, i wont be sentimental i will murder you so bad the doctors wont be able to trace your dentals, let's leave it at that get at me dawg let's see if you can fuck wit that.... Ghost
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![]() You find yourself surrounded by woodland creatures... Lighting matches under my hat...Ghost Pirates... Frosty mug of rum.....Ol' Los Angelos heroin epidemic, i bust slugs that love to figure skate through me, we had a merry war turned emcees to cabin boys i carved Wu-Tang in his hive, you heard the stabbin noise, rawhead rex, snake eater from dungeoun, a web of dead bodies in the sewers underground london.. |
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Alcoholic Author
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Bermuda Triangle
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dissapear******
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![]() You find yourself surrounded by woodland creatures... Lighting matches under my hat...Ghost Pirates... Frosty mug of rum.....Ol' Los Angelos heroin epidemic, i bust slugs that love to figure skate through me, we had a merry war turned emcees to cabin boys i carved Wu-Tang in his hive, you heard the stabbin noise, rawhead rex, snake eater from dungeoun, a web of dead bodies in the sewers underground london.. |
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I'm dangerous.. lyrics poison like ivy
ya lyrics need help look up Phsycolinguistics written by michael spivey fuck the ghost pirate you couldnt test my flow because of the physcological realism heavy damage protected with hospital bandages breakin down slang with conceptual semantics scare tactics for these mc's be serial killin antics i cause death with common amounts of house appliances open ya skull with a kitchen knife and insert knowledge like neuroscience i've come forward to get the best of yall mc's i stalk rappers at night with unheard of murderin tendincies i shout out like hollow tip bullets that come forth ammo disinegrates no evidence left in ballistic reports fuck up get thrown 6 feet deep under the ground you spittin all this shit wheres your complexity now your right my first verse sucked but why dont you check out open battle now i'm gettin the votes not butter you stupid fuck man wheres your vocab yo i expected a challange and man i dont slip on nothin with this impecable balance |
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Veteran Member
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i forgot all about this battle i got many goin on right now
and if you can try and get people to vote that would be cool |
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The Predator
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: in the aLL female nudist colony - Spying
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weLL,,,,you've been doing better greeneyes, keep it up dude.......
uh vote = ghost........ nothing you writ can touch this...... you're just a peasant and the only reason you're alive is because i presented you your life as a wedding present, aint i pleasant, yeah i know i'm nice if you cross my path again, on killing you i wont think twice, i wont be sentimental i will murder you so bad the doctors wont be able to trace your dentals... WoW.........am i right or am i mistaken???? OmO < Idiom
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no disrespect to ghost but thats a common topic........i think i dunno if it is or its just me but ive used it before.....well the dental records part is
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I'll Fuck You Up
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![]() "Cartoon characters slip on bannana peels, Thats why I stay real" My line... But I still vote for you you came raw, your flow was real hot real on point. GreenEyes you had the vocab and shit but it wasn't directly aimed in some parts and it didnt flow right in some areas either, I like to see a consistent rhyme scheme na mean? Lot of people when they write they battles they don't spit to see if it fits on beat, they just assume the flows on point. |
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Da Butcher
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: hollywood, florida
Age: 33
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greeneyes took this all the way for me, his word play was on point, he used some crazy words i never even seen in rhymes and brought it all together, my vote goes to greeneyes, peace......oh and by th way, i didnt even notice that 15 year old punk ass kid commenting that u are too old, 36, when u 15 and rhyming u got no direction, when u are older and wiser, u spit that intellect, anyways peace to u both
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