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Old 12-28-2006, 02:02 AM   #1
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ok so im a shitty lyricist, but im tryin to get better, so who's some guys i should check out to devolop?
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Old 12-28-2006, 02:03 AM   #2
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Old 12-28-2006, 03:35 AM   #3
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Fuck that. Just write your own shit. Start paying more attention to the lyrics when you bump whatever you usually bump, and you will pick up on different rhyme schemes, verse structure, wordplay etc. But keep it original. Don't try to write like anybody else.
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Old 12-28-2006, 08:24 AM   #6
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At least your honest... Check out interviews with the Gza he talks about watching Discovery or the History Channel for ideas and writing whole sentences that rhyme; whole ideas . Also you might look at lyrics from MF Doom on Madvillainy as he uses alot of multies. Just try to draw from your own experience and create an honest picture that other people might relate to. Just start writing about something you feel passionate about and you will have an easier time writing.
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Old 12-28-2006, 09:11 AM   #7
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I dont really rap, but I think I still have some ideas that may help.

Dont start writing looking for the perfect rhyme/flow, I would start off writing something that expresses what your feeling for that song, and then "fine tune" so to speak and explore different options.

This may be bad advice, since I am no lyricist.
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Old 12-28-2006, 11:09 AM   #8
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ok so im a shitty lyricist, but im tryin to get better, so who's some guys i should check out to devolop?

What i do to better my lines, because if your a emcee your never fully satisfied with your rhymes. and your always trying to perfect ya style, so for you i suggest looking at the world around you and rhyming what you find influential! I used to sit bumping beats for hours and just free-styling til' i couldn't anymore.And i use to free-style til' i fell asleep.
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