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Old 01-20-2007, 06:04 PM   #16
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ok unseen gets my vote because it was nice and eazy...no theatricals, it was straight to the point killer, still rusty as hell but, my pick.

and at the end of the day, the bolding and shit gets played cuz if the verse is good enuff u dont have to stress what rhymes, but no offense at all cuz ur verse was still good, also the flow was a little over the top...lessen the amount of words in a line....good battle...1
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Old 01-20-2007, 06:30 PM   #17
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Old 01-20-2007, 07:38 PM   #18
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flow: czar
punches: tie
personals: czar
multis: czar
vocab: unseen
enjoyment: czar

vote: czar.

soz got confused by all this name change....and i always read the verses btw, it aint a hard thing to do. peace!
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Old 01-20-2007, 11:34 PM   #19
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Thanx for doin yo vote over, 2-1 me
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Czar/dead president


Fuck wit me, i'll flip on u like little kids gettin shots (vaccine shots)
Yo fagness shows in yo lines, u give so much head u "spittin" cock//

Ight mediorce bar here nothing spectacular but not too bad either.

U got a none-inch "drumstick", but you "pound" eight "drums"?
Son, yo mother swallows so much, i heard she piss straight cum//

Ight 1st line was a lil weird but nice follow up with the 2nd line.

I spit so much drug game rap, on my doors, fed's bangin
If yo peoples try to shake my hand, i'd leave'im "dead hangin"//

this was more of a boast to urself then dissin him. safe


They lames man, why you associate wit these gwop lackers
Yaw so fake, yaw could be writers for a movie called "block actors"//

gwop? wtf is that haha anyway this bar seemed out of place. not likein it


Why u steppin in my ring talkin shit, when my fans sniff coke lines
Before you could even throw a punch, u hit the canvas fo* times//

Again could be re-worded to feel the full effect of the punch. but average bar here

Keep fuckin around, u'll fight the force of real killers, we'll make u toothless
You could be on life support, i'm still iller, quit fake'in ruthless

Ight good flow here, nice multi'z and wat knot. above par bar..
U ina love "triangle", and i'm doin yo bitch from "acute" fuckin angle
While u gettin pimped, I smash her till the poop's up in her brain yo

seems like ur creativity is runnin low a bit. not feelin it really
An i don't giva fuck, if these eight bars, leave great scars
B ain't hard, I can already hear his crew yo, "he raped ours!!"

Average Closer, nothign too fancy at all. just a plain bar.

Overall:Just alot of average and sum not so good bars. seems like u kinda rushed it a bit and didn't think too hard on ur bars.

CZAR/DEAD PRESIDENT: 6/10



Dead president, resident of an early grave,
All the money's spent this bitch isn't gettin saved

Ight nice flow to the opener. no real punch tho. but effective sumhow


Paved a path to his destruction,
50 piece deposited and his soul's the deduction

ight str8 punch. nothign too fancy again. safe

Rhymes under construction like the Big Dig in Boston,
couldn't finish shit off without it really costin

NO

Don't want none with this emcee from Austin,
I stay grindin like Eric Koston

NO

The only thing kids grindin is his asscheeks in prison,
Killing kids only when he spits out his cell mates jizm,

Ight feelin this. was nice

Fake fuck couldn't be hard if he was the curb on the boulevard
In the prison yard he throwin peace signs like he rolled with Piccard

Ight Decent again good flow n all

Pussy don't want none like a nun who's celibate
He'd have to get an Aids injection to ever come hella sick

Ight played bar but still decent

Now watch him fall like Berlin walls the way this bitch represents
Next time you battle fucker, you should duct tape in that dick

Umm..below avearage closer wasn't feelin it..

Overall: U should have warmed up a bit b4 battleing but i guess this was ur warm up? no bars were really hard hittin and nothing worth mentioning seems like u rushed it even faster then Czar/Dead.

Overall: 5/10

MY VOTE: Czar/Dead CLOSE battle
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Good shot on the vote, i got lucky cuz i came soft wit that verse.3-1, battle over.
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Old 01-21-2007, 10:59 AM   #22
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isnt it till 5 once its 3-1?
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Old 01-21-2007, 11:04 AM   #23
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Shit i don't know, i just started battelin on this site, we agreed on a 3 vote knock out, if its to five then this battle will take years
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Old 01-21-2007, 01:57 PM   #24
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yep, game over haha, gotta get that sword sharper here, haven't battled in months, respect though Czar, peace
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