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battles i bring
with stylistic schemes in full length strong and ultimatley skillful to greens strength mc's styles from gorge i still smoke more clowned you and yours i got more head from the state than mount rushmore yo i leave heads dead and fold'em like bed spreads kick open doors i'd say consider the realest mc but that's only droppin dead metaphors and i dont do that especially with them cracks on the wax but watch my filanges cuz these fingers way too happy for triggas jack breakin down forts as i stalk gees wars i thwart with emcees my wordplay strate unheard of like a hetrosexual dude sportin caprees all that i see is gettin green even if it means puttin a kid in a hearse and if my mother got money stashed i'm snatchin from her purse so let me know what you think everybody in the world gotta eat but green 63 neva settles for chinks just somethin short i made up real quick let me know what you think if you need me to explain something i'll try my best |
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Fuck, I Have Like 1 Years Worth, Wu Corp,methical,ins.net......^thats Cool
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check it, the best of the best/ stay strapped with tephlon vests/ protectin the chest/ with this foes can't bet on my death/ i keep a wes in my waist ready to be drawn out/ stash a back up in my ankle plus a razor inside of my mouth b4 i go out i gotta go cleanse my dentals/ but just to be safe i still wear a helmet to save my mentals/ i'm neva jello or gelatin garmets/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/this be the droppers drama/ hiroshima of nuclear bombers/livin life on the street corner sellin drugs to pirahnas/
just a quick sumthin i made up on the spot tell me what you think and if i should finish???? it should be noted that i was listening to last dayz by onyx while typing....peace and feedback please aint that great but i feel like doin it |
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anybody?????????
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that shits cool man...dope
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thanx man....i prolly edit it and maybe add more
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check it, the best of the best/ stay strapped with tephlon vests/ protectin the chest/ with this foes can't bet on my death/ i keep a wes in my waist ready to be drawn out/
Cool ^ transition from rhyming vest,best to drwn out mouth, the flow is cool cleanse my dentals/ but just to be safe i still wear a helmet to protect my mentals/ i'm neva jello or gelatin garmets/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/ ^ that would sound dope on a track peace
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i added about 2 bars at the end
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any1 else????????
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feedback?????
i dont want this goin to the back yet |
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I'll Fuck You Up
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thanx man i might add another verse or 2 to the same beat....i wanna get a damn mic for audio
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any1 else
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its MF, MFers
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i was feelin that for sure. it felt so easy for me to rap. like the flow was so easy to find without even hearin you do it. i liked your transition like sicka said before. i like to do that in my raps too, but you did it better then i have.
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appreciate it holmes...any1 else
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