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DVSK · 08-19-2007, 02:42 PM

16 a piece, ....get at me.

ckretwon · 08-19-2007, 10:14 PM

yo what up son, hope you learn how to walk soon
it's gonna take the best of you to battle my platoon
i'm bound to die with silver spoons
walking with a fork like zeus
with the force of a hundred typhoons
speaking the truth like god and heres the proof
i conduce minds like satan penetrating
vacant minds spectating
levitating conciousness to alternated states of existence
persistence rivals my shiftiness
as a terrible witness i spit this
plentifull nutrition
aimed at ya vision
unreliable superstition chases you down like satelite dishes
conforming mentalities
it's a fraction of combined fatalities
fragments of assassins die the fastest
from spasmatic acrobatics climbing the fastest
spraying ya blood on the canvas
whose art comes the fastest
only god has the answer to this
but the secret shall be revealed
through whispers that are consealed
in the ocular distances to divine presence
there is no match for his persistance
cleanliness and emptiness leads to his holy rememberance
understanding my dimension
is similar to christs' assention into heaven

game over

ckretwon · 08-19-2007, 10:16 PM

damn secretwon your the dopest how did you come up with that?

ckretwon · 08-19-2007, 10:18 PM

i don't know how i do it, i just do it.

DVSK · 08-19-2007, 10:26 PM

ok, ill gt at u tomoro even tho u di d more thn 16, im on my wii so i cant now....juan.

DVSK · 08-20-2007, 11:44 AM

i sense fear in your heart disguised by over confidence
due to the fact your new to the Rap, unknown anonymous
but fuck bones, im piercing skin hittin ya vital organs
like bible orphans in churches singin bout how nice the lord is
ya life is horse shit, bitch ill strike you quick
light the wick, bring ya crew and ima fight ya dogs like Michael Vick
i hold the title, its attached to abdomen, the fact is im cancerous
in the sense that i attack til your pants are pissed
u think u stand to piss? bitch ill ram a stick in ya stomach
then after kick, and have you thinkin masochistic in public
and if u love the pain, ill put a crown of blades above your brain
flood ya vains, shoot you from the strain til zues becoms ya name
excuse me if i gave the illusion this was a game
if it is fucker, get put in a trunk like Chris Tucker
bitch what up?, wanna give me your life? the cost is valid
i thought ya name was ckrewton, your probly like tossin salads...

even tho u wrote more than supposed to...lets get some votes.

Classic · 08-20-2007, 12:48 PM

if it's two rounds then don't we need the 2nd round?
if not, i'll drop a vote by tonight.

DVSK · 08-20-2007, 01:28 PM

im sorry i didnt mean two rounds..lemme edit it out.

DVSK · 08-20-2007, 08:53 PM

votes.

Classic · 08-21-2007, 01:44 AM

Everything - Dusk.
seriously, wanna know why?

"yo what up son, hope you learn how to walk soon
it's gonna take the best of you to battle my platoon"

that was the ONLY punchline in ckrew's verse.
and it sucked.
the rest was just bragging & filler, and it wasn't even structured good.
you really need work dude, not to be offensive.
this was a damn mudhole stomping.

Vote - Dusk.

it's seriously clear why.
ckrew, you need some serious work.

DVSK · 08-21-2007, 09:56 AM

i just didnt want to leave it untouched...seem like a pussy, so i left him a lil somethin...good looks classic.

ckretwon · 08-21-2007, 03:48 PM

yall niggas hatin. i'm not a punch line punk anyway.
lets get some real votes. i vote me cuz this niggas rhymes got no substance. style is just plain and simple.

this niggs dickriding vote doesn't count unless he wanna battle

ckretwon · 08-21-2007, 03:50 PM

i'm not hatin though yall just don't understand this shit. shorties.

ckretwon · 08-21-2007, 04:31 PM

i got niggas changing they minds after one verse
wack niggas cant quench my thirst
don't count me out until i lay down my 2nd verse
you scared to go first
but fuk it i took the sacrifice
like a roll of the dice and defeated you twice
heres the curse 4 horse men rushing in
pumped up with adrenaline
on a steady diet of vitamin mescaline
open up ya minds eye so that u
can c kings and pharoahs slowly
sever ya arterys, veins and capilaries
ya life force is outa ballance son
niggas like you are scared of violence son
holla at me and i'll drop some science son
don't hate me cuz you lost this one
thank me cuz i'm the ckretwon
bringing you to the light so that you can see the son

ckretwon · 08-21-2007, 04:35 PM

ckingrealeternaltruthwithoutnegativity
figure it out bitches

now like i said. game over.

08-19-2007, 02:42 PM	#1
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,189 Rep Power: 65	Dusk Vs. whoever.... 16 a piece, ....get at me. __________________ Last edited by DVSK; 08-20-2007 at 01:30 PM.

08-19-2007, 10:26 PM	#5
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,189 Rep Power: 65	ok, ill gt at u tomoro even tho u di d more thn 16, im on my wii so i cant now....juan. __________________

08-20-2007, 11:44 AM	#6
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,189 Rep Power: 65	i sense fear in your heart disguised by over confidence due to the fact your new to the Rap, unknown anonymous but fuck bones, im piercing skin hittin ya vital organs like bible orphans in churches singin bout how nice the lord is ya life is horse shit, bitch ill strike you quick light the wick, bring ya crew and ima fight ya dogs like Michael Vick i hold the title, its attached to abdomen, the fact is im cancerous in the sense that i attack til your pants are pissed u think u stand to piss? bitch ill ram a stick in ya stomach then after kick, and have you thinkin masochistic in public and if u love the pain, ill put a crown of blades above your brain flood ya vains, shoot you from the strain til zues becoms ya name excuse me if i gave the illusion this was a game if it is fucker, get put in a trunk like Chris Tucker bitch what up?, wanna give me your life? the cost is valid i thought ya name was ckrewton, your probly like tossin salads... even tho u wrote more than supposed to...lets get some votes. __________________ Last edited by DVSK; 08-20-2007 at 01:36 PM.

08-20-2007, 12:48 PM	#7
Classic Next God of War Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Mount Olympus Age: 25 Posts: 332 Rep Power: 0	if it's two rounds then don't we need the 2nd round? if not, i'll drop a vote by tonight. __________________ Classic - "Disciple of Ares"

08-20-2007, 01:28 PM	#8
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,189 Rep Power: 65	im sorry i didnt mean two rounds..lemme edit it out. __________________

08-19-2007, 10:14 PM	#2
ckretwon Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 120 Rep Power: 0	yo what up son, hope you learn how to walk soon it's gonna take the best of you to battle my platoon i'm bound to die with silver spoons walking with a fork like zeus with the force of a hundred typhoons speaking the truth like god and heres the proof i conduce minds like satan penetrating vacant minds spectating levitating conciousness to alternated states of existence persistence rivals my shiftiness as a terrible witness i spit this plentifull nutrition aimed at ya vision unreliable superstition chases you down like satelite dishes conforming mentalities it's a fraction of combined fatalities fragments of assassins die the fastest from spasmatic acrobatics climbing the fastest spraying ya blood on the canvas whose art comes the fastest only god has the answer to this but the secret shall be revealed through whispers that are consealed in the ocular distances to divine presence there is no match for his persistance cleanliness and emptiness leads to his holy rememberance understanding my dimension is similar to christs' assention into heaven game over

08-19-2007, 10:16 PM	#3
ckretwon Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 120 Rep Power: 0	damn secretwon your the dopest how did you come up with that?

08-19-2007, 10:18 PM	#4
ckretwon Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 120 Rep Power: 0	i don't know how i do it, i just do it.

08-20-2007, 08:53 PM	#9
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,189 Rep Power: 65	votes. __________________

08-21-2007, 01:44 AM	#10
Classic Next God of War Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Mount Olympus Age: 25 Posts: 332 Rep Power: 0	Everything - Dusk. seriously, wanna know why? "yo what up son, hope you learn how to walk soon it's gonna take the best of you to battle my platoon" that was the ONLY punchline in ckrew's verse. and it sucked. the rest was just bragging & filler, and it wasn't even structured good. you really need work dude, not to be offensive. this was a damn mudhole stomping. Vote - Dusk. it's seriously clear why. ckrew, you need some serious work. __________________ Classic - "Disciple of Ares"

08-21-2007, 09:56 AM	#11
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,189 Rep Power: 65	i just didnt want to leave it untouched...seem like a pussy, so i left him a lil somethin...good looks classic. __________________

08-21-2007, 03:48 PM	#12
ckretwon Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 120 Rep Power: 0	yall niggas hatin. i'm not a punch line punk anyway. lets get some real votes. i vote me cuz this niggas rhymes got no substance. style is just plain and simple. this niggs dickriding vote doesn't count unless he wanna battle

08-21-2007, 03:50 PM	#13
ckretwon Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 120 Rep Power: 0	i'm not hatin though yall just don't understand this shit. shorties.

08-21-2007, 04:31 PM	#14
ckretwon Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 120 Rep Power: 0	i got niggas changing they minds after one verse wack niggas cant quench my thirst don't count me out until i lay down my 2nd verse you scared to go first but fuk it i took the sacrifice like a roll of the dice and defeated you twice heres the curse 4 horse men rushing in pumped up with adrenaline on a steady diet of vitamin mescaline open up ya minds eye so that u can c kings and pharoahs slowly sever ya arterys, veins and capilaries ya life force is outa ballance son niggas like you are scared of violence son holla at me and i'll drop some science son don't hate me cuz you lost this one thank me cuz i'm the ckretwon bringing you to the light so that you can see the son

08-21-2007, 04:35 PM	#15
ckretwon Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 120 Rep Power: 0	ckingrealeternaltruthwithoutnegativity figure it out bitches now like i said. game over.

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