meet me at the battlefield COME ON THEN BLOODYHOOKZ

[AcidPhosphate69]

Nah it's just we get a lot of the big word fanatics. Granted, when used properly they're amazing but it does get overused sometimes. Either way, as much hate as your getting for being cocky, you still got some nice shit but there is definitely room to grow.

[SID]

aight i feel that for sure, thats why iam postin on this site to get better at battlin.

peace

[bloodyhookz]

fuckin' chronie, I should have you beaten, tortured and starved/
forcefully scarred, my jail goonies'll leave your corpse in the yard/
morbidly hard to digest, my rhymes is sicker than sars/
when I clap the toaster you can you catch a closer picture of Mars/
lift your feet up like ballerinas when the heater's in use/
I'm wit ya chick while you be contacting Cheaters for clues/
straight stressin' to Joey Greko how your lady's a skeez/
while givin' bj's in the pj's, gittin' paid on her knees/
I'm all up in ya cipher fully/
it's the dispicible, critical, one and only, the original lyrical cyber bully/
beat you breathless wit a billybat buddy you leavin' bloody soaked/
your momma giving birth to you son,... that was an ugly joke/
fuckin' chump, git suckapunched, snuffed, stabbed and shot/
tryin' to crawl up out the bucket where nuff crabs git dropped/
I know you touch fags with cock and give brains for a quarter/
I'll use your fam's corpse to transport this cain through the border!

[Bigot Hitman]

^^^you gonna leave the kid with no more of his little ego if u keep on droppin verses that he can't respond to

[bloodyhookz]

yeah I feel you, homie has a nice vocab system going on but he can't fuck with me in a text or a freestyle battle, I can pull the most complex words out of my ass if I wanted, but I passed that stage when I was 13!

[SID]

The north west street scientists appear In no statistics
We go forth with iron vests, spittin crystal clear verbal ballistics
You an illiterate loner typin from the other side of the pacific
Sendin your barz to be translated lets call it lyrical logistics
Your simplistic and empty, call me to battle an tempt me
To leave you wheelchair bound with a blood drip till ya late twenties
Come at me steady, ill leave your ego un-developed like new delhi
Gut your pork belly, Stinkin shity an smelly, like“oh my god they killed Kenny"
You die from various deadly medleys, I got slay methods in the plenty
One for each of your fam…. calculate mentally, like convertin kilos to grams
Iam enviromentelly friendly, let you die like a man, then process your body to organic fresh spam, you have no clan, like no water in a dam - empty with no result, like hits on girls an high school exams, ive seen more vocab from a decapitated lamb,
Your Encapacitated jam has no dimesions or span
I slit you, hit you, clip you, with the scientific slang, you a cat with no fangs
A crip with no gang, a fraudster with no scam, a soldier who chose to die in vietnam!

[SID]

big you a twisted muthafucka, you 16 and talk big to your elders, i should jump through this screen an puncture all your vital organs......punk ass bitch

[SID]

i passed spittin average rap, when i was 13

[SID]

look at the verse above..... thats original

[adedwutang]

dam hookz i read that last verse and u fuckin merked it, how bout me and u go at it for some sparrin, talkin some classic battle shit. get at me ayt
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[SID]

lets get in the last votes for mine and hookz last verses


peace

[bloodyhookz]

I'll drop one more verse, it will make the battle even, you spit 4 verses and I only spit 3, but later on, right now I'm going to sleep!!!!

then we get some votes and have whoever is the moderator to clean up the thread and edit it down to the verses only!!

[Sleep Sinatra]

both ya r raw but man bloody hookz mercin em son...oh yeha hookz this is sleep from tha midwest crooks wutss poppin beanz?

[bloodyhookz]

aight, ya homie, myspace, I remember, yall reppin from Nebraska right?, much love G and keep blessin!

[Sleep Sinatra]

yea yeah dunny haha middle of tha map u keep doin ya thang man...