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Old 05-06-2007, 10:39 AM   #16
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that was pretty good ss i was feelin that flow
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Old 05-06-2007, 12:11 PM   #17
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good lookin on tha feed sidious *daps uppin for more feedback
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Old 05-06-2007, 07:11 PM   #18
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sum thought provoking written ish...feedback plz


a pecimist wit an attitude shitty /
sumtimez i feel like tha worlds tryna get me/
rimin gritty my mission is 2 rid tha city/
of pity punks who'd rather listen 2 diddy/
than a real nigga old skool like tha 50's/
i was born in tha golden age/
were battles were on stage instead overseas wit grenades/
it sickens me how that times forgotten/
now evrybody talkin ice,gear n body rockin/
bitches jockin niggas cuz they whips b flossin/
all im tryna do is get a lil name but often/
niggas squabbin over chains steadil mobbin/
I REALIZE WE CANT EVOLVE WIT OUT CONFLICT BUT 2 B HONEST WUT THA FUCK WE GON ACCOMPLISH?/
its nonsense but thas all that there's ever been/
cryin bout losses but how can we ever win?/


put alotta thought into this one feed back appreciated..
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Old 05-07-2007, 12:29 AM   #19
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Like the images and flow were crazy 8/10
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Old 05-07-2007, 07:05 AM   #20
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ight good lookin out *daps uppin for more feed
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Old 05-08-2007, 05:45 PM   #21
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aight just sum shit kinda pissed gotta let my emotions out sum how....



feel like i need 2 puff tha trees as my knuckles bleed/
scuffle mc's 2 skeletal ashes enemies plottin my demize/
as if they minds were telepathic it could get tragic/
fuckin wit a war torn soldier /my soul hell scorned wit hate but yet still colder/
than tha waters of tha artic /fatherin my foes man eatin on sum shark shit/
im in tha darkness and in need of a light/
followin paths of my elders endless struggles despite/
tha fact that trife niggas still yappin/
my brain patented(sp?) encoded wit mysterious magic/
life liquid drench tha tablet and savage/
attempts at punk ass bastards tryna act sick/
is all tha cause of this madness which i speak wit/
defeat all oppenents leave the arena wit a beast's grin/

feedback welcomed...suaze
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Old 05-10-2007, 10:43 PM   #22
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nutha joint i did in tha freestyle thread...


i perpatrate wit tha professionalism of a jewel thief/
jerks-who-hate get wrecked-from-da-wisdom of tha tool speech/
i move-streets a behemoth walkin tha lands gritty/
sands of time shift as i handle-mines swiftly/
40's of mickies blunts of da diesel keep my head gone/
reflectin "shells" like "mario wearin teflon"/
respect-don or get ya whole fuckin crew-wet-son/
forget-non factual niggas wack shit gettin slept-on/
kept-bombs as if i was werkin 4 "bin laden"/
bashin niggas on tha domes untill they shins-poppin/

FEEDBACK PLLLZZZ...suaze
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Old 05-12-2007, 10:43 PM   #23
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uppin for at least a LIL bit of feed.....
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Old 05-12-2007, 11:05 PM   #24
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sum thought provoking written ish...feedback plz


a pecimist wit an attitude shitty /
sumtimez i feel like tha worlds tryna get me/
rimin gritty my mission is 2 rid tha city/
of pity punks who'd rather listen 2 diddy/
than a real nigga old skool like tha 50's/
i was born in tha golden age/
were battles were on stage instead overseas wit grenades/
it sickens me how that times forgotten/
now evrybody talkin ice,gear n body rockin/
bitches jockin niggas cuz they whips b flossin/
all im tryna do is get a lil name but often/
niggas squabbin over chains steadil mobbin/
I REALIZE WE CANT EVOLVE WIT OUT CONFLICT BUT 2 B HONEST WUT THA FUCK WE GON ACCOMPLISH?/
its nonsense but thas all that there's ever been/
cryin bout losses but how can we ever win?/


put alotta thought into this one feed back appreciated..
I read this verse. It was pretty cool. Very straight forward and to the point. Simple but effective. Sounds like you were using the pen to release some genuine thoughts and frustrations. Good stuff.
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Old 05-13-2007, 02:34 AM   #25
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yea u couldnt b more on point yo *daps uppin for sum more feedback...
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Old 05-15-2007, 12:55 AM   #26
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sum thought provoking written ish...feedback plz


a pecimist wit an attitude shitty /
sumtimez i feel like tha worlds tryna get me/
rimin gritty my mission is 2 rid tha city/
of pity punks who'd rather listen 2 diddy/
than a real nigga old skool like tha 50's/
i was born in tha golden age/
were battles were on stage instead overseas wit grenades/
it sickens me how that times forgotten/
now evrybody talkin ice,gear n body rockin/
bitches jockin niggas cuz they whips b flossin/
all im tryna do is get a lil name but often/
niggas squabbin over chains steadil mobbin/
I REALIZE WE CANT EVOLVE WIT OUT CONFLICT BUT 2 B HONEST WUT THA FUCK WE GON ACCOMPLISH?/
its nonsense but thas all that there's ever been/
cryin bout losses but how can we ever win?/


put alotta thought into this one feed back appreciated..
not bad man, not bad
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Old 05-15-2007, 06:41 PM   #27
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good lookin out yo *daps b droppin sum more shit in a min uppin 4 more feed...n yall should vote on that battle me n sidious got gainst big n mx1...suaze
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Old 05-16-2007, 04:29 PM   #28
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my psycosis get-u-ghosted spit wit venomous potions/
grip-tha-pen-an-flip-oceans wit flows of tsunami's/
my-crew-nonchalantly makin moves on u soft bodies/
im shakin dukes til they bones-break-an spew/
tha-forsaken-few-who-chose 2 walk my path as allies/
shall penetrate any force wit grace as tha shells fly/
of-course-tha-hate is expected meditatin wit ghetto monks/
learnin valuable lessons pals-who-is stressin will test they-fate-wit-pumps/
40 cals-an tha wessuns- b my weapons of choice/
overstep ya boundries an im poundin-till-ya-head-is-moist/
ultrakinetic-voice poised in position so nigga listen/
if i gotta get urs 2 get mines then im gettin/
slick lines wit no lubricant added fools-will-get-blasted/
messin wit my troop if we smashin i boom-wit-a-passion/
of collectin tha franklins lost in an addiction dunny cant escape them/

feedback pllllzzzz....
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Old 05-18-2007, 07:52 PM   #29
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from da freestyle thread 5-18-07


slashin throats on u savage-folks this nigga got tha anti-dote/
my camp'll-"blow holes" like moby dick u know-me-pricks/
tha kinda dunny thatll leave u in sum frozen-shit/
rollin-wit-tha-coldest-cliques-i-"bomb"-on-sum-explosive-tip/
throw ya body out tha ride just 2 see if u can "ghost tha whip"/
my flows-is-sick im tha closest 2 a human virus/
roamin-wit-goons-4-diamonds all my dukes is hungry god/
fuck-a-fraud my gats is "looney tunes" bugs an daffy b/
crunch-a-rapper-these-cats-im-snuffin-faster- see/
act-ually i snap-ya vert-a-brae-exactly/
semitrical wit ya testicals when im clappin heat/

feedback appreciated...suaze
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Old 05-20-2007, 12:02 AM   #30
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bump 4 feed...
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