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Old 05-12-2007, 11:15 PM   #16
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These are some pretty nice flows. Most these verses would present well in audio. I like the style used. Seems to be mostly loose, unconnected subject matter. Just flows. I like these verses because although they don't seem to have a direct focus, they're still compiled of interesting references and content. Good work.
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Old 05-14-2007, 06:56 AM   #17
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respect 4 the feedback...i can tell why dudes would think the subject matter is not connected but if you read very carefully youll see what iam on about, but even if catz do i doubt they will be able to decipher, i just write rhymes that i know I understand....i should post more "structured lyrics" from my archive..

anyway ill break my a rhyme down for you lot

Extended communication server(a device used to contact a wide array of tagged offenders in seconds) - an illuminated murder( there has been a "stand-out "homicide)
the machinery(E.C.S) cant contact this devil inflated learner(the ecs cant even contact the tagged killer which shows the killers hiding power, and he is drivin by the power of the devil)
so we resort to acid, chemicals and bunsun burners (nothing can catch him so we bring out some chemicals and tools of that nature)
a catylist cocktail of blood spiller gut churner(we make a lethal killing potion)
planted in the mouth of the killers slut cum slurper (planted a vial of it in a hooker who reguarly fucks the killer)
she sucked his dick "circa' 8.00am - till it turned purple(she sucked his cock from 8.00 oclock and allowed the posion to go on his dick and turn it purple)
but not cuz she sucked it mad hard(.......)
but because the cocktail melted his innards like lard( i turned purple cuz his innards were dicentigrating)
a coke slinger in past, moved on to rapin hoes n spittin darts(the killer is dead, now the inspector is talking about his past, a coke slinger moved on to raping and rapping)
but then he got bored and went all out,(.......)
knifein muthafuckas like a "beanstalk" sprout(he got sick of raping and moved on to killing people, beanstalk sprout - the chinnese vegatable that is very thin and moist)
meantalk ended, time for real action clout(he had enough of organised murder, and moved on to pychopathic shit)
challenging civillians to a 3 round death bout( like jumping at random people and fighting them in a death bout)

so its basically a story of a mas killer from his last murder to his death
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Old 05-15-2007, 06:46 AM   #18
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omega faction be at the release party
no captions just snobby half deceased arty
manz,.... hollerin at katz to conform
to a media system that leaves them empty and torn
we said "man we here to make real music'
he systematicaly replied 'when you got power you abuse it"
misuse it,.. to the point of no return
thats when we jumped out and took a sudden u turn
out the district, the area,and location
made a pact to never deal with a seedy cocasion
they got no patience for a brother with skin colour
just smother with money banter, weights n bother
my fate aint lookin pituresque
sell my shit myself for less....... then it took to make
dreams of fame, money and a world with no hate
funny dreams like a child to a star
sunny beams guide god to my heart
and i wake up and realise it was all fiction
a boulder off my shoulders and less resistance and friction
in the kitchen i see my mama gleamin smilin and understand
all i need is her meaning and kindness
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Old 05-16-2007, 02:33 PM   #19
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complex symmetery, geographical contours
shake the earths state, like a flock of condors
deflate the birth rate, like a mutated transponder
"constipateded" fakes, behold redemption yonder
the lyrical sonar, infecting daydreamin stoners
your the black tongue owner, and iam the organ donor
ill give you a "taste" but the decesion is yours to pondor
when you put pen to paper, youll relise it flows like vapour
the instigated maker of crafted blasted masses
smash this class of spazes, with solid forms and liquid gases
light flashes, inspiration comes in baches
and then "catches" my mind like burning thatches
"burning" smashes, lash and dash with silent slashes
my task be like stashes of hash, it keeps stackin
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Old 05-16-2007, 04:17 PM   #20
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ill shit sk as always keep it up..
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Old 05-20-2007, 01:53 PM   #21
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yo yo yo

flourishing leaf farm
brandishing the heat palm
its neat and calm, like the guerillas of vietnam
rolling cess with the lotion of palm
your flow are disarm, with a corrosion bomb and bleak charms
ring the burglar alarm, and bring your third arm
word son, sing along with my song
that echoes falling blades dug from the grave of saddam
mental temple firearm, free rental of dire stance
i git to you free with a bag seedz spars
slang art, hood shoot apart
brothas who appeal, evil deals with fallen dartz
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Old 05-21-2007, 01:19 PM   #22
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flourishing leaf farm
brandishing the heat palm
its neat and calm, like the guerillas of vietnam
rolling cess with the lotion of palm
your flow are disarm, with a corrosion bomb and bleak charms
ring the burglar alarm, and bring your third arm
word son, sing along with my song
that echoes falling blades dug from the grave of saddam
mental temple firearm, free rental of dire stance
i git to you free with a bag seedz spars
slang art, hood shoot apart
brothas who appeal, evil deals with fallen dartz

Haaa! Nice
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Old 05-24-2007, 07:14 AM   #23
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yo yo yo

treestyle.......

fuck these wack dudes
buck back the drill and screw
tuck tack tape round the cold crime clues
clap slaps on the dime time tools
stripes of blue, like tribal warfare, lagoon
coco maroon, compute fondou, iam on you
with weed flow overview, attidude
mass decreasing of altitude, its kinda rude
cuz my art me raw and crude, cellulite prune
dimples and spoons, fat assses and goons
ya fam description...untouched and true
i clutch your crew, dice slice R.A.G.U
bite ice in the cocaine saloon, slow brain salute
acid saliva, rancid dilute, prance with the runes in tune
boom bap kaboom
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Old 05-24-2007, 07:34 AM   #24
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ill shit sid fureal..yo u do audio now right? we should collab on a joint 2gether pm me if u interested ...
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Old 05-24-2007, 10:21 AM   #25
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ill shit sid fureal..yo u do audio now right? we should collab on a joint 2gether pm me if u interested ...
iam gonna record on the weekend with my homie, i might do a collab, but i need to hear you first.. naa mean
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alloy pipes, leather gloves and mouthscarf
"drought laugh", bout 1- death by paragraph
hospital discharge, gut stuck steel staff
tape reel barge, ya slut got fucked-semen marsh
seamen march, with katana blades and illegal arms
cerebral scars, boxcar bizzare, blizzard wizard
lethal royalty czar, shake your guitar
evil needle memoir, catch sars from crossbow barz
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Old 05-28-2007, 03:41 PM   #27
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a story of a fiend

arms and legs strapped, a dying fiend on tha scene
pslams on the regs-rapped to the tune of fallen dreams
it was all coke and c.r.e.a.m, picturesque portraits, gourmet cuisine
there no way he could see, his routine caused delusion n mental gangrene
the penalty was foreseen but could not be doged-baby at sixteen
added to the smoke screen and a reminder of what his life could,ve been
robbin clinics for keys of undiluted medical morphine
shottin up the codeine, transferrin rotting themes in his genes
checking out the marines, only to be turned down cause: lack of hygiene
it sent him down a slope of depression searching cures n vaccines
for his detramental disease- high off dope his only serene
state of mind unclean, back in crack ally with the junkies
back with wack hobbies, robbin old folks for there jewellery and G,s
no ladies, shootin up with the slap of sea breeze
praying to a god he thought had his soul siezed, gaping entries
chasms and gullies - the terrain of his brain- conflicting armies
one side barmy and the other calmly, no matter who won he got as high as marley
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Old 05-29-2007, 05:04 AM   #28
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^^any feedback for that last verse would be much appreciated...

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link lost lines to their relevant rhymes
like linking severed nerves to your spine, technique-turbine
complete tweaked carbine, blows your last lifeline
your confined to a quarter of you mind
multiplied by the diameter of your "waistline"-------(WASTEline)
the baseline hears your shit to no avail
like a hailstorm in the pale desert vale
your intrails get sliced,severed frail
your blood gets drained in the chalice and grail
my malice is "full-scale" more "kilos" then sperm whales
you,ll learn who fails, gets implaled with verbal rails
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deceitful devils in any form on diffrent levels
tearing the earth to pieces for diamonds oil and precious metals
i boil a kettle watch the water bubble and boil
one stage to another like flowers grown from sun water and soil
i toil in my sleep i awake shake violenly and contemplate
my fate in the millenium of hate petroleum leakege as they excavate
newly dug reserves draining our core iam losin my nerves
goin crazy endlessly spittin verbs smokin herbs
walkin down the dark desolate curbs of the city of pity
down and dirty so gritty unpretty the only surviors are the snakey and witty
shacked an shitty so many milli-ions of megatons of opium crumbs
injected in the skin by the unwise and dumb
brain capacity the size of thumbelina and tom thumb
iam stunned and shunned at this unsolvable uncontrolable sum
read and attempted to solve with a shot of rum feelin numb
at the thought of future generations
illicit infactuactions mind control experimintations
unholy situations trapped in a devils nation
facin the music with a heated conversation to the primeminister or presdent
battlin time sinister with courage an heaven scent
fightin a fight in myself over wasted time spent
friensships lent needing permisssion or concent
to do what was meant to be done a long time ago
i flow to and fro a rap my rap slow
to show infinite possibliites summinin storms like aurora munroe
superslidin in the snow cold and hard like william dafoe



magical manipulations require complete concentration
no hesitation just justification for mental invasion
utter decleration of psychoological suffocation
of the C.E.O or freemason its like havin only three raisens
in the desert with an obnoxious cocasion no water no shelter no station
no patience erase em with my freezing flowering flow
one stage to another backside slam followed by a low blow
my foes is crows and crows are foes you know
i grow with everyday like i sow everyway
in my life i failed now iam not playin gonna set sail
defy the hail follow my destinys trail
achieve undisputed vicory were i fail
send a letter of my achievement to my mams in the mail
like i found the holy grail
too many brothas chasin their tails stoppin the habit then endin up in jail
lift the veil covered over ya eyes look past the lies
and try for the sake of all humanity lost in insanity
dont hush the profanity of vanity calamity follows all in the concrete valley omalley
hear one speach from the ghezawi rally take a truthseaking info breeding tally
queenspark to cali sumaria to sally but sadly were madly votin for shit gladly
like tony killed manny crazy like mixin the word hitler with tranny
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