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Old 07-29-2005, 03:25 AM   #1
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From Then On, Every Scripture And Rhyme I Spit Will Be Laced With A Mache 5 Turbo Auqa Gauge
You Fuckface, I'll Shove Your Head Back In Place, Rewind Your Days, And Turn You Back To Your Microscopic State
For Heavens Sake Forsake Your Fate, Hang You Upside Down In Space For Hell's Bate
My Best Trait, My Thoughts Travel At A Furious Rate, Display A Mirror And Double Till It Breaks
This Shit I Create, Is Beyond Your Beef, To Good For A Plate, A Fuckin Miriacle That'll Make Your Mind Ache
A Tension To When I Speak, Makes The Air Vibrate, More Of That Then An Earthquake
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Your Shits Shrap, I'll Mesh Your Trash, Paybacks A Bitch, In Fact If You Have Brains You Know Better The To Snitch
Quit Actin Like You Stack Bricks, Only Powder You've Seen Is The Kind Your Mom Smacks Your Ass Wtih
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Old 07-29-2005, 03:28 AM   #2
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My Thoughts Travel At A Inferior Rate
dude u know what inferior means, shiiit son, thats goin in tha sig lil brotha
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Old 07-29-2005, 03:29 AM   #3
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i thought it meant unstoppable, i think i mean furious then
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Old 07-29-2005, 04:42 AM   #4
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inferior is like unwanted, not good
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Old 07-29-2005, 04:44 AM   #5
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inferior is like unwanted, not good
yeh..many terms, i thought Inferior was like a verb for furious, I WAS WORNG, drop it,

i wanna hear some real feed please
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Old 07-29-2005, 04:46 AM   #6
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lol, i was just saying, but imo the rhymes are good the first line is the best to me
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Old 07-29-2005, 07:38 AM   #7
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lyrically it was good. the first 3 lines were tightest, i could find the rhythm easily. the only problem with your verse (and i've noticed it with other ones too) is that its hard to really pick up the rhythm or flow because your lines are very long. it makes it hard to figure out where one bar finishes and the next one begins. this is especially confusing considering some of your verse structure. no diss, this is just constructive criticism. keep up the good work.

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Old 07-29-2005, 08:03 AM   #8
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i thought it meant unstoppable, i think i mean furious then


HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH CLASSIC!!!

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Old 07-29-2005, 08:06 AM   #9
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dude u know what inferior means, shiiit son, thats goin in tha sig lil brotha
haha no doubt....hope u dun mind me doin tha same

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Old 07-29-2005, 08:12 AM   #10
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lyrically it was good. the first 3 lines were tightest, i could find the rhythm easily. the only problem with your verse (and i've noticed it with other ones too) is that its hard to really pick up the rhythm or flow because your lines are very long. it makes it hard to figure out where one bar finishes and the next one begins. this is especially confusing considering some of your verse structure. no diss, this is just constructive criticism. keep up the good work.

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well, my bar pattern is different the norm i guess, wehn i rap it in my head, its like my brain produces its own beat to go perfect with bar pattern, lol, i switch it up too also, yeh it hink i need to type it better, but when im freestlyin i dont pay attention how i type......

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Old 07-29-2005, 08:37 AM   #11
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nice verse. reminds me of copywrite.
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Old 07-29-2005, 08:52 AM   #12
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LOL i was listeing to Theme Music then a Jakki track when i wrote this....
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Old 07-29-2005, 09:11 AM   #13
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Ha hahaahaha ...You Sonned ya self
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i know what i meant tho..! XD
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LOL i was listeing to Theme Music then a Jakki track when i wrote this....
thats a copywrite track, GET IT RIGHT!
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