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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Sheol
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This thread is a display of the gems that I am occasionally blessed to receive. Your judgment is what I desire most. Elevation only comes through criticism and correction, so I appreciate any words that you are willing to leave.
Lyrical Lariat: I got more cold cuts than delicatessens, teach you a helluva lesson/ the majority of cyphers is simply celibate sessions sellin digression/ a literal circle of lyrical virgins attemptin to sell an impression/ me? I would rather accelerate affection or just tell of my blessins/ use my bars to ask relevant questions that develop progression/ rip fellas in sections wit a vocabulary deeper than pelicans restin/ now I’ve finally found shelter from hell and the devil’s tempest/ when the tempter attempts to tempt this I turn to Jah for defenses/ diablo’s defenseless against this intense prayer warrior’s senses/ my message is inexpensive if only you would just pay attention/ stay attentive as jury benches cuz the truth gets buried in trenches/ this hurtful violence is endless, the church’s silence is senseless/ celebrities smile for lenses, paparazzi pry in private parties for pensions/ drugs delve deadbeat daddies down demented devilish dimensions/ drunk drivers in S10s bring station wagons down deadly dead ends/ dead friends is what tends to send men to follow suicidal trends/ jumpin street medians, the media’s teachin us to be greedy and tedious/ our TV is misleadin us, mistreatin us, our seeds is what’s needin us/ I’m never mad whenever pens and pads is my needed ingredients/ my mic is my medium, your attention is what’s needed immediate... I Forgive You (verse one) My pain--migrates--like migraine aches/ my strain’s--wide placed--like five great lakes/ touchin a number of states, confusion included/ secluded in a dungeon til someone intruded/ imputed purity to my ventricles from verticals/ surged verges of vertigo since I burst from the cervical/ like spiritual surgicals, had emergency transplants/ flashbacks of urgency was purgin me past that/ pack rats ain’t concernin me, burnin up Black packs/ these wack cats in backpacks ain’t half as abstract/ can you match that classic rap amidst pop singles/ pockets of hot nickels, cold as popsicles wit block lingo/ the single king of neo-soul wit sprinkles of rhyme/ I’m not tryna put a hot iron to this wrinkle in time/ no regrets, holdin vets to they bets, child support debts/ it’s treacherous but yet I gets naughty by nature on the set/ that ain’t even my best lest distress dares me to stop/ Midwest declare me the best, this sess compares me to Pac/ every single compliment boosts my confidence/ I abhor cockiness, I stay abstinent from obstinates/ I’m a optimist, positive I won’t be stopped by obstacles/ clear cataracts in my opticals wit a whole box of Optimos/ Picasso is better than ever, never ever under the weather/ sever the feather soft, yes, the successor of Nebuchadnezzar… Metamorphosis: Time to rock the boat and ride the ripples, rhymes that’s simple/ get crippled in my mental whenever I’m high off indo/ spit flows from my temple that’ll make yo’s decrescendo/ assemble cymbals as the kickdrum make yo chest tremble/ yes, I’m dead broke, ain’t tryna make no friends, though/ but if you breakin bread, then you made one to the end, joe/ my pencil is my utensil to stencil my credentials/ at the central of heathens kept from reachin my potential/ prudential since knockin out windows in my residential/ providential, droppin gems so pretend you comprehend those/ I’ve conceived rhymes so deep, you wouldn’t even believe/ even if you seen me and heard em breathed between my teeth/ I roll wit thieves, smokin leaves seems to be my lone reprieve/ I teach my boy to read, so my seed come half as dope as me/ he’s only three--- wit affection to me sweet as potpourri/ reason enough to bleed, decry greed, and live soberly/ follow authority, stop disorderly thoughts that lower me/ plan trips overseas, speak Portugese wit African minorities/ this vision seem lofty, but too oft we tend to think softly/ now I’m awfully close to gettin this lost mindstate off me/ thank Jah... |
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dope.
stupid dope. beautiful work picasso- pzapeace- |
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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Sheol
Age: 29
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I’m droppin this for the populace inside my spiritual metropolis/
lyrical mafias, Hoffas and Khadafis which spit lava so obvious/ Hip Hop lobbyists whose hobby is craftin bars far above par/ jars of stardust marred with tar mold emboldened avatars/ speak life thru they existent art imparted from many distant parts/ in instants persistence manifests monarchs, princes and czars/ no assistance for the shadiness, my babies strayed me from the craziness/ I now avoid the outer radius of a argumentative athiest/ those close minded homo sapiens scared of Jews and Arabians/ I choose a faith in which came from the southern Mediterraneans/ my mouthpiece is heinious, I spit radiance straight out the craniums/ my album is solid titanium while I’m aimin straight for palladiums/ I mainly come to have the life of a Man like Christ at half the price/ get high as satellites twice as I ignite White Owls wit candle lights/ I’ll sacrifice a Saxon knight, rebuke Sadducees and Catholic whites/ I travels light on passive flights, but I’ll set up shop in the afterlife/ ignore traffic lights whenever I choose to soar at massive heights/ it ain’t ignorance of sight, it’s just the type of plight I hafta fight/ pass the sight of anutha life destroyed, replacement souljahs deployed/ youngstas are employed dealin granite inside of the trapezoid/ I've toyed wit the notion to avoid creatin such explosive noise/ I did enjoy the silence but violence is what preserves my poise/ void paranoid delusion, visions of a pair of boys diluted/ from the exploits of intrusions mixed wit media pollutions/ it was me and Michael Borum, we cyphered daily at the forum/ but separation tore em, so distant memories I store em/ ignore em til I’m explorin my past history thru flow/ remembrance of Marion and tenth, when we was ballin in the cold/ joe, I hope he remember me, cuz there’s plenty me to go around/ reminisce whenever he blow a pound, I know he cleverly hold it down/ and drown in the recollections of the essence of our adolescence/ but even if you don’t remember me just don’t forget my message... |
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^who iz this dude?
sunn could be on 'the offering' sunn could be on '8 diagramz' P, you THAT nice with yourz- i now avoid the outer radius of an argumentative athiest thoze cloze minded homo sapienz scared of jewz and arabianz- mad ill- |
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yo crazy shit son...do u b recordin an shit ..yo if not u DEF SHOULD shit is ill
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Sleepyheaded Nonsense
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Offside
Age: 25
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lovin' it..
pea2e
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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
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I appreciate the props. It ain't me, it's Jah in me. I'm in the process of recording, I just wanna make sure it's flawless before I put it out there. Here go a short gem:
Lyrical Levitical: I need to write sumthin--to try sumthin new and triumphant/ I’m comfortable in conversation, yet my company’s like nuthin/ my compass points up north like joints, my aura borders callous/ abhor malice, study Torahs in my palace, shine like Aurora Borealis/ thunder rumbles over Yukon tundra, I mumble street sermons/ dedicated to the escalated, the rest can take suburban excursions/ they pack up at night and white flight to the quite cosmopolitan/ but the hypes is followin, hollerin for tolerance to wallow in/ swallowin knowledge and walkin rhythms of the wisdom of Solomon/ envision the sovereign, I’m fatherin moderate modern conglomerates/ marryin revolutionaries that swing lower than sweet chariots/ sangin canaries is as scary as a variance of aryans carryin lariats/ contrarions alienate humanitarians from local to global epochs/ these rocks got clucks like ewoks in knee socks, reeboks, needin detox/ why don’t we walk wit God like Enoch, I’m tryna bypass death/ but til my last breath I’m left in the cleft of this mess, refusin to rest... |
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God Of WAr
Join Date: May 2003
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Record that shit man, u repping New Jewz u on fire!
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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
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Here go a piece called "Pure Bread"
1st verse: I can’t seem to quench this worst case of a thirst taste/ I been searchin for first place inside this cursed race/ this deserted place is as dry as the skull of a bull/ the pull of the unknown wasteland attracts the gullible/ my mind is full of sand dunes attuned to the asphalt/ as for my thoughts, they caught in cobwebs in the vault/ faultlines in the Elk's Heart split the wicked terrain apart/ spit from the heart, take all art wit a grain of salt/ I talked wit teachers taught and stalked wit bengal tigers/ the sabre-tooth incisors shine like sunrays offa mica/ I’ve fought forces and walked courses wit Trojan horses/ had long chats wit infamous voices and made choices/ drank poisons, heightened the effect wit dank ointments/ made appointments wit friends that end in disappointment/ every emotion I’ve experienced, from fear to weariness/ experiments wit bliss and death’s kiss near the abyss/ pains appear in my wrists, it’s too much cuz I got too little/ each day’s an unsolvable riddle against the devil wit no fiddle/ the middle of the Sahara, my soul arid from internal strife/ I courted death twice and since been sentenced to eternal life... Chorus: This here is passion in the midst of famine/ imagine dry air in yo lungs while you gaspin/ graspin handfuls of sand that's been thrashin/ ration water from the river life everlastin... 2nd: I can envision Eden risin upon the horizon like Oz/ I dodge Pharisees' lodge in camel-haired camoflauge/ I trod across this sod, approachin the utopian mirage/ just a demigod son of man lost inside the synagogue/ I got no entourage wit me to await my fiery chariot/ live life at the end of a lariat like I was Judas Iscariot/ nightly prayin--since the Son is comin, find me waitin/ timely patience wit temptations, get behind me, satan/ I wonder how His hurtin tore the temple curtain asunder/ murders at the hands of Boagernes, Sons of Thunder/ I rant and rave to raise Hebrew slaves from they graves/ I crave the initiative to act on my thoughts that’s brave/ forty days, forty nights, shake in fright while terror looms/ carry my burden in a land as barren as Sarah’s womb/ very soon I may be doomed, dead wit my head severed/ but never to be forgotten cuz my spirit speaks forever... 3rd: I’m Jeremiah, I’m Elijah, I’m Noah befo the flood/ reflect light like twin cateyes, I been baptized in blood/ I’ve swam in streams of solitude, now all I do is thirst/ I hunger for companionship, I’m damaged and I’m cursed/ banished from villages, fulfill prophecy in the wilderness/ I made a pilgrimage to hell and I fell to the villainous/ scorned by supercilious, beneath this cloak is brilliance/ I'm filled wit resilience, may my message reach millions/ I’m filled wit the Bread of life, but I fast to keep focus/ I curb the urge to splurge, swallow honey wit my locusts/ lay my head wit scorpions, sleep’s evasive, I’m forcin it/ fortunate odds from the God of dreams like Morpheus/ proportionate to my pain, I see Herodians wit guillotines/ warriors repeatin screams from prison corridors in my dreams/ a martyr machine, grieved, but I'll never ever shed tears/ faith versus fear, Jah revealed my purpose in these years/ cuz... ...this here is passion in the midst of famine/ imagine dry air in yo lungs while you gaspin/ graspin handfuls of sand while it's thrashin/ ration water from the river life everlastin... |
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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
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I riddle beats wit the disease of the middle east/
it’s called war and it’s the core of the city streets/ I pray for peace while the city sleeps on shitty sheets/ caged like a beast but I didn’t cease to shepherd many sheep/ dreams of leather seats in Regencies turned to revolution/ I worked on my execution and paid all my restitution/ I made my evolution and grew into a perfecter of units/ a trifecta of music, lyrics and spirits gets you into it/ intuitively I do it simply for the use of wisdom/ similes and metaphors, I take credit for euphemisms/ losin vision from the fumes arisen from many sorceries/ followed the course of leaves and fell pell mell and disorderly/ but still compelled my bolder seeds well into the ovaries/ cordially I wrote poetry, that I recorded accordingly/ quarterly–-many soldiers would then report to me/ any evidence of whore-mongering or forgery/ from those formerly informed of my earthly mission/ I thought my worse affliction was to curb my herb addiction/ hit the prison grounds and found that was the purest fiction/ I endured the friction once enrolled in a jury’s jurisdiction/ then I learned the difference between a need and a want/ beef from the front gate leads to days chiefin on blunts/ grievin for months, but once one realizes elevation of health/ rather than chasin the wealth I found a revelation of self... |
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^you the illest P-
i'm str8, no doubt, happily married to a beautiful brazilian woman, but i gotta say i'm on your jock right now- peace fam- keep writin and postin them jewelz- 1 |
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you serious, how dope is this guy?? damn
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Join Date: Aug 2005
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Damn that's dope... Can't wait to hear it recorded!
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The tires peeled on desire’s wheels Again he said, I can feel… The distance
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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
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Hex-Ray (verse two):
So many question marks but there’s hardly exclamations/ there’s no explanations for these excessive excavations/ too many excuses to exercise unwise experimentation/ pagans exchangin information to exit the exploitation/ recently I’ve exponentially exceeded all expectations/ I’ve exacted mad examinations wit such exhilaration/ may we exterminate hate and exhaustive exaggeration/ exhibit needed expedience in our tedious exhortations/ I excrete excellence, a Nephilim exhaling expletives/ my extreme execution’s labeled exceptionally executive/ expose excrement, oppose exorcists who never get the blame/ I can't explain these extremely insane thangs I exclaim/ I lived my life in exile, excommunicated from my lands/ made a exodus from Egypt to experience a new expanse/ got extradited and extracted from my original existence/ now I express my expertise wit such swift exquisiteness/ my every single excerpt's entirely exclusive and expensive/ you can't explore my music or exhume it, it's too extensive/ I exemplify extravagance and exude excitement in stanzas/ an expert til I expire, I perspire extraordinary extravaganzas/ exacerbate heathens, aggravate demons, exhort minds to think/ I'm exempt from explicity, you thought my kind was extinct/ I'm finna explode if I don't ever exert this extra energy/ I found a remedy for this excruciatin pain in my extremities/ take my hurtin on excursions, so far away I'm expellin it/ I learned to expend the external to expedite my exoskeleton/ I no longer exalt exterior criteria, or praise exotic exports/ that's excludin this example of extraterrestial rhymes I extort... |
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