|09-10-2007, 12:00 PM||#2|
The Lyrical Anomaly
Join Date: Jun 2004
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I'm qick with it,killa bee sword with it
Cut you open dart with it
So sick begin demented become waste fragment
In this battle love is deleted comment
Complex design your fucking remain
Don't say anything just pain
Put your*back Lex Lethor WWE shit
I have the whole beretta lit
Go war with you please,watch me fack put nigga to ease
demented already had this battle delay watch football
Attack you digitally style moongod Allah
Face the amazing been training
Mattlocka rocking,bell ringing
Put this as a classic second round knock out
Glock strip to my guess jeans,pull them up is what you girl say
Greeted it blast harder get slay
|09-10-2007, 04:02 PM||#3|
Join Date: May 2007
Posts: 712Rep Power: 8
approach me and end up fried like my poultry
like bodies in the club the heat stay close to me
make a mockery outta you, slap shot harder then Canadian's
rob your ass leaving you innocent killer, partin' relations
then stick your ass in the projects building ducts
thats the only time you in the PJ's, good night lil' fuck
see I lean back like Ali Foreman then start gunning back
you a retarded player the way you running back
sticking it to you, start calling you Nancy Kerrigan
ain't got the hunger, first of the month and barely collectin'
bring ya bitch for support, the crews, mine just rape her
tearing lines apart like writing them down on lined paper
edit - Votes
|09-10-2007, 04:44 PM||#4|
A Threat to the State
alright my votes goin to demented.. mattlocka i remember you being alot better than that, like barely any of it rhymed and i couldnt pick out any punchlines so i dunno where you were going with that verse. demented your stuff is alright, definately had your flow on-point, but your punches could've been harder it almost seemed like you were holding back.
no offense mattlocka (cuz i know you can rhyme no doubt) but if you spit that in front of a crowd youd get booed off stage
vote : demented
|09-10-2007, 05:12 PM||#5|
Next God of War
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Mount Olympus
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matt's verse sucked, bad. (no offense man)
demented, you stepped it up since i peeped your last battle.
threw some multis on.
but you need to work on that consistency & those hard-hittin' punchlines.
there was bragging, filler, etcc.
but not as bad as before man.
vote - demented
Classic - "Disciple of Ares"