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Old 11-27-2007, 07:31 AM   #16
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ryt my internet is fucked so its hard getting 5mins on other peoples computers, il have it within a week hopefully.
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Old 11-27-2007, 08:10 AM   #17
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shit bro jus drop a verse man...my last verse took me 20 miniutes to create..lets get this battle over G
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Old 11-27-2007, 10:16 PM   #18
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you made the Bleach reference so i had to change the sig early....
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Old 11-29-2007, 04:30 PM   #19
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intro....

Infiltrate then delegate their system with unique renaissance precision
Risen dead breaking the souls of shaking patients- patient with my hatred
Facing this caveman with tools of a chinese nation- tasting their heart racing
put mase in their face-then, place their membrane in shattered papers, creating mental lamens

4 down...

fuck sinatra, least the teams got daliff, im taking his mind apart like a mental baliff
pencil creating doom to strangers- you took 20mins for that battle? I read the first line and lost patience *1
give your brain a facelift, fucking ignorant hater- cool guy killer? i saw you sweating like a rapist *2
Face it your a wasted faking gangster- pranking on the net, excited like a strangled wanker

8 more? nah 4 more will do...

Vengeance from the psyche of hamlet- pending death for sinatra and daliff delivered from a border rambler *3
stamp-ya skull through your fucking appendix- this is your fuckin experience like hendrix *4
geordie bastard blasting american spitters? stop lukin in the mirror and switch to see whats sicker

bored? me 2

im done, round 1 was won by wasted breath... but your cousin will jump genes tonight and face death *5


explanation of sum punches that ppl might not get....

*1- sinatra said before in this topic that it took him 20mins to do his battle.
*2- sweating like a rapist is a brit term fvor sum1 very sweaty cos rapists sweat...lol simple?
*3- this is for ne1 outside the uk really...a border rambler is sum1 hu lives near/on the border of england and scotland like me. (not scottish tho)!
*4- jimi hendrix experience was hendrix band
*5- there were a couple of lax, suspect votes on our last battle, like they didnt wanna waste breath in explaining and they say sleep is the cousin of death.


cheers for the battle lads.
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Old 11-29-2007, 05:52 PM   #20
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*1- sinatra said before in this topic that it took him 20mins to do his battle.

uhhhhhh...that was me.......anyway

we gonna get any votes on this? (shit took long)
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Old 11-29-2007, 06:03 PM   #21
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lmao, i got u mixed up with sleep sinatra
my bad
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Old 11-29-2007, 10:17 PM   #22
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iam the cousin of death nigga.....lol jk good shit yall i think we startin 2 get this subforum live again



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Old 11-30-2007, 07:40 AM   #23
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lmao, i got u mixed up with sleep sinatra
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lol..

Can we have some votes on this ppl

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Old 12-03-2007, 07:29 AM   #24
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cmon now ppl fuckin......VOTES.....godammit
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Old 12-04-2007, 09:03 PM   #25
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gotta b i lil more into detail then that homie, uppin for REAL votes ...goddammit
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Old 12-06-2007, 04:29 PM   #26
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this was pointless....
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Old 12-07-2007, 03:27 AM   #27
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The Winner is.............


Sleep and Kitana.


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Old 12-14-2007, 11:23 AM   #28
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I think both of you need an immediate change in partners. Sleep ripped his verse up, and Katana didn't deliver.

Katana's verse had boring word play and the bars were stretched and flowed terribly.

Sleep's verse was a tight wrap, had moderately complex multi's and a over all follow through on the flow.

As far as Daliff and Jack go, Daliff clearly carried their team.

Daliffs verse was on point, once again a tight wrap nothing stretched, decent multi's and good word play.

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remove the face of a pacifist with my acid spits...
sadomasicist, Leatherface was half as sick...
and sick imagery, definitely a vicious assault.

Jack on the other hand... what beat were you writing on? Are you operating in 2/3 rhythm, I never seen bars so stretched out in my life. You have sections where like 10 syllables without one rhyme.

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pencil creating doom to strangers- you took 20mins for that battle? I read the first line and lost patience *1
You thought that sounded ill enough to make long sentenced explanations and line break shit talking? Come on, try spitting your shit after you write it so you know how it sounds, this is hip hop. You're an MC, a slave to rhythm, not an author that is only concerned with words.

The best verse in this match was Daliff's dart.


But this is a tag match, so it's based on 2 people working together. Based on that, I feel the strength of sleeps verse with the at least halfway decent poor verse from Katana, beat the combined force of Daliff and Jack's verse.

My vote, Sleep and Katana
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Old 12-14-2007, 04:46 PM   #29
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I obviously read it differently in my head, I reckon if the lines were broken up better for the flow of it, it would work. You talk about 'spitting it' but its a fucking text battle. Its going to read differently to different people. Obviously for the majority im-a have to break it up! Thanks for taking the time to read it and vote anyways, much appreciated.
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Old 12-14-2007, 11:16 PM   #30
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you guys DO know that the teams were me and Sleep -vs- Jack and Katana, right??
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