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Old 12-14-2007, 05:55 PM   #1
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are you up for that?

15 lines max
best of 3 wins, nice and short
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battles have to be in within a week.....21st december.
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Old 12-14-2007, 08:01 PM   #2
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Yea I'm up for it, but weekends are a bit hectic so drop and I'll get to it when I can, probably sunday or monday.
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Old 12-15-2007, 07:53 PM   #3
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aye same here, im off work 2mz so il drop then :P!
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Old 12-15-2007, 09:01 PM   #4
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beat?

my heart triggers figures, listen to my war fiction
depiction of death, eyes glisten through crystal meth

thistled breath leaves crippled pests with the kiss of death
brittle chest crumpled by little strength- humbled by middle men

big ben anarchist- strapped with canibus- slapping the over analyst
acid hits on my battleship- catalyst of war and the darkened abyss

another cartman pissed- listen to my lyrics, an alcohlolic on the brink
frolics in pink- blood in the sink- destroying mentalist's hood and the inc.

weakest link- robinson wit- a mixture of hip hop and pop cultures 40 licks
courtney couldnt slaughter this prince- drink till im caught in the mix

fraudian slip when i talk of this prick- antagonist caught in the bigger blitz
chordian riffs stretches his eduardian spits- leaving behind his head boiled in bits....

was fairly blitzed when writing this, any quesions just ask!
thanks for the battle, look forward to seeing yours!
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Old 12-15-2007, 09:32 PM   #5
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hmm....
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Old 12-15-2007, 10:06 PM   #6
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That verse was alot better than the other one you had.

I'll respond when I get some herbs in my system.
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Old 12-16-2007, 07:12 AM   #7
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can see ive lost dusk vote already, might as well chalk that one up ;-)! cheers tek, luk forward to hearing from u!
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Old 12-16-2007, 11:49 AM   #8
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stop feenin.....i wont vote then.
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Old 12-16-2007, 05:28 PM   #9
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lol im not, dont worry about, if u submit a good constructed vote there is no problem!
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Old 12-16-2007, 11:19 PM   #10
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*COUGH*

I may be peaceful, but I ain't no Bhudist
Stupid, get Shot and Shop for New Hips
Foolish I'm a Duelist your a Nudist
Watch Jack Tip Toe Threw the Tulips
Look Too Hard can't read the Cue Cards
A select fight and only a Few Spar
Think about how much of a Bitch You Are
I'm skinny but I'll still Hit you Hard
Knock you out and let you Kiss the Stars
9 holes through I couldn't Miss the Par
Drive by your Strip than Ditch the Car
Teach you rap and make you List the Bars
Sixteen not Thirty Two no Further Due
You write Paragraghs like Words is New
The Nerd of Crews no one Heard of You
I'm SICK this Kid Is Takin Thermaflu
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Old 12-17-2007, 12:19 PM   #11
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Old 12-17-2007, 02:11 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by JackOfHearts View Post
beat?

my heart triggers figures, listen to my war fiction
depiction of death, eyes glisten through crystal meth

thistled breath leaves crippled pests with the kiss of death
brittle chest crumpled by little strength- humbled by middle men

big ben anarchist- strapped with canibus- slapping the over analyst
acid hits on my battleship- catalyst of war and the darkened abyss

another cartman pissed- listen to my lyrics, an alcohlolic on the brink
frolics in pink- blood in the sink- destroying mentalist's hood and the inc.

weakest link- robinson wit- a mixture of hip hop and pop cultures 40 licks
courtney couldnt slaughter this prince- drink till im caught in the mix

fraudian slip when i talk of this prick- antagonist caught in the bigger blitz
chordian riffs stretches his eduardian spits- leaving behind his head boiled in bits....
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*COUGH*

I may be peaceful, but I ain't no Bhudist
Stupid, get Shot and Shop for New Hips
Foolish I'm a Duelist your a Nudist
Watch Jack Tip Toe Threw the Tulips
Look Too Hard can't read the Cue Cards
A select fight and only a Few Spar
Think about how much of a Bitch You Are
I'm skinny but I'll still Hit you Hard
Knock you out and let you Kiss the Stars
9 holes through I couldn't Miss the Par
Drive by your Strip than Ditch the Car
Teach you rap and make you List the Bars
Sixteen not Thirty Two no Further Due
You write Paragraghs like Words is New
The Nerd of Crews no one Heard of You
I'm SICK this Kid Is Takin Thermaflu
Im gonna have to vote Jack Of Hearts.

The use of wordplay was better in my opinion although I didn't like the part were it goes "weakest link- robinson wit- a mixture of hip hop and pop cultures 40 licks
courtney couldnt slaughter this prince- drink till im caught in the mix" but other than that it was tight.

Tek started of strong but this part "Think about how much of a Bitch You Are
I'm skinny but I'll still Hit you Hard
Knock you out and let you Kiss the Stars" I found a bit too corny for my likeing, good attempt but after that verse Tek never really recovered.
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Old 12-17-2007, 02:51 PM   #13
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do you even rap tauro?
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Old 12-17-2007, 03:05 PM   #14
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Old 12-17-2007, 03:15 PM   #15
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Thanks for the vote Tauro, 1-0 my way.
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