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Old 08-09-2005, 09:07 AM   #1
Mr SimplistiC
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Default YEAH yeah yeah - im sleepy

now im just having fun
close my eyes - touch the sun
cool as the clouds
floating killer sounds
aztecs in the background of the ballroom
spilling blood on the dancefloor - sliding upto the prettiest girl

recite ancient retro verse
the sounds that revolve around the earth
magnetic birth - positive to the powerful -
negative to the nacent -
indecent descent -

shoplifters will be prostituted

and no-one will be prosecuted - danger - slamming swords - you may be executed

cute girl - you may be prostituted - play game like pro = whats your name?
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Old 08-09-2005, 09:18 AM   #2
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Default Re: YEAH yeah yeah - im sleepy

... very simple but its nice, i like it... descriptions are good, work on the flow a little, but overall, nice... keep writing...
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