Mad Thinkaz (spok3n masta genius)

[Grim Reapa]

[chorus]

Supreme mathematix, follow the ways,

None illa then theze remember for the rest of your day



Masta Genius, if you guessed already im a Genius sim-pil-ly/

I cast a spell on my foes and they cease to be/

I'm the new president of the wu corp....its time for my innogoration/

Settin mics on fire......my style of verbals is a sensation/

But nobody can read my shit.......unless its in ebonics/

25 year olds with 4th grade reading levels......time for hooked on phonics/ (sicka!)

but im real to the core........except for my verbal education/

Supreme MAthematix 2nd to none.....no conselation/

There is no acception for fake mc's who wanna try me/

Dont look at my verbals much or it'll mess up your sight b/

cant believe that these punks cant start a battle right/

Watchin there battles is like watching 2 chickens in a cock fight/



[chorus]

Supreme mathematix, follow the ways,

None illa then theze remember for the rest of your day

(spok3n)
Success when I say the words, and blaze a verse with greater terms
You clamin' firm, but taking turns on dissing dudes we named "the herb"
The Famous Werdz, coming to take over your whole screen
hang over on those teens, make over your whole team
Make soldiers and hoes lean, i'm so mean? well, most seem
to know you "sucking" off "AL" is the only way you "blow green"
The crowds grow with anticipation cus i pass the scene with this
To blast your team, and crash it, speak with Masta Genius
Sicka Den Aidz, Surreal, when I rip on a page
INFEK is sicker than your best work, so witness the plague
The day comes, when your face is scarred, arms will sting you
While spitting more graphics in arenas than what Ron'll bring you
All you suckers are shitty heads, spitting, but you ain't really def.
Cus I'm always over what you drop like my lyrics in a sticky thread
P.I.R. stands behind enemy lines, to strike when you dudes talk
You ain't a crip just because you have attended the Blue Cross
So who's lost? Do you dare step to the team slashin' faggets
All you fags drop inferior science, we're Supreme Mathematics
Beyond your shit, in fact, we're beyond what your future holds
We're the reason why you forgot the shit that you used to know
We'll bruise your soul, until your spirits crippled and fracutred
Instrumentals can't hold my weight, that why they shrivelin' faster
Spoken is back in effect, so you now you know we speak
Or else we'll kill ya, and send ya to start a cypher with ODB

[White N Dangerous]

Honestly, i was feelin it, but masta could have had more lines. but other then that, wordplay and flow was decent and i appreciate that kinda stuff. 9/10 stay up

[Grim Reapa]

FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[PsYkOsUs]

some honest feedback..?

[Grim Reapa]

sure w/e good bad ugly psy i aint gonna hate on u ur aight

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[BlaK FuRYaN]

Decen tflow....i like certain punch linesin spokes verse....i dont know why he did a collab wid some one less lyrical....

Its like hearing warcloud on the track then christ bearer spits after......

anyway....movin along swiftly.......................

[PsYkOsUs]

no doubt... to be both honest, and blunt: i thought your verse was garbage... and the chorus was horrid, i mean really, really awful... it was lazy as hell, start investin' some real time into your verses, 'cause it reads like you wrote it in thirty seconds... it was so lazy, that it didn't really rhyme right at all, for example:

'inauguration' and 'sensation' do not rhyme, a four year old can rhyme "..ation", you say you read the dictionary in your profile... if you do, you should have a very solid vocabulary, but your verse didn't do that statement any justice... practice usin' words and combinations of words that really do rhyme:

combos and words that rhyme well:

abomination : and bomb a nation
evolution : revolution
intelligence : irrelevance
sentenced to the bing and it's gritty : sent him to the king of the city

combos and words that don't rhyme, or someone might say rhyme if they're wack or lazy:

complication : replication
relic : skeptic
doom : true
Barrel : squirrel

and as far as your content goes: it's very basic.. been there, seen and done that, don't-care-anymore-kind-of-shit, y'know..? hopefully you can see where i'm comin' from when i tell you that you need to think outside the box... you shouldn't write shit just for the sake of writin' shit, write when you really have somethin' to say... if you do that, you may improve... just don't read this and write twice as much thinkin' that you'll improve with quantity, you improve by writin' quality material, somethin' that's real and has substance... put some real blood, sweat and tears into this shit and improve... if you're from Queens, then you got tons of material at your finger tips: use your heart and mind to reach out into your environment and grab hold of somethin' real, and just let it flow...

PEACE

PSY

[PsYkOsUs]

Originally Posted by BlaK FuRYaN

Decen tflow....i like certain punch linesin spokes verse....i dont know why he did a collab wid some one less lyrical....

Its like hearing warcloud on the track then christ bearer spits after......

anyway....movin along swiftly.......................

exactly what i was thinkin' too...

PEACE

PSY

[Grim Reapa]

aight i told u i wouldn't hatethe chorus was lazy and my rhymes not my best
but i didn't have much time and psy thankyou ppl dont give you enough credit but you do shed some serious insight on rhymes and also help people out peace

[PsYkOsUs]

no doubt... i definitely respect that you can take harsh constructive criticism that well... happy to help...

PEACE

PSY

[Grim Reapa]

Originally Posted by PsYkOsUs

no doubt... i definitely respect that you can take harsh constructive criticism that well... happy to help...

PEACE

PSY

UR 1 OF THE BEST PEOPLE I'VE EVER SEEN ON THIS FORUM.......THAT WASN'T MY BEST STUFF RIGHT???????

[MASTER PAI MEI]

This has a look and feel to it as if it was patched together
the verses really dont go together...

PEaCE and Keep building!!