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Join Date: Aug 2005
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THIS IS A SHORT VERSE ABOUT A BROTHER I MET HE SAID HIS NAME WAS KEVIN/
HOW YOUNG/ COULDN'T BE 2 MONTHS OVER ELEVEN/ WE GOT TO TALKIN ABOUT HIS PARENTS AND THEN HE POINTED STRAIGHT TO THE HEAVENS/ THAT MADE ME SAD/ THAT I HAD SOMETHING THIS YOUNGSTER NEVER HAD/ SO THEN I STARTED TEACHING HIM THAT, LIFE GOES ON/ AFTER THAT I INTRODUCED HIM TO A LITTLE BOOK CALLED THE KORAN/ THEN SHORTLY AFTER I TAUGHT HIM ABOUT THE 120 QUESTIONS/ HE WAS AMAZED AT MY KNOWLEDGE, HAD A LOOK OF PERPLEXTION/ SO THIS VERSE ENDS WITH THE BOYS HEAD FILLED/ THE BOY SOON SOON HAD THE SELF MOTAVATION TO LEAD HIS LIFE FUFILLED/ |
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SupaSelekta
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interesting.. original content, nice message too. i didnt like the last 2 lines how it rhymed, other than that it was cool. peace.
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