Killah Priest - New Album out now!
home
news
wu-tang clan
bio's
media
store
blogs
forum
contact

Go Back   Wu-Tang Corp. - Official Site of the Wu-Tang Clan > The Lab > Temple Of Darts

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 03-20-2008, 11:26 AM   #1
i_ecca
H3nR1
 
i_ecca's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Sweden
Age: 33
Posts: 34
Rep Power: 0
i_ecca grasshopper
Send a message via MSN to i_ecca
Default i-ecca's notepad

8 bars:

Dim dark shadows sparking in the parks darkness
One part wants to embark the other part is heartless
Moody artless surround-sounds pounding my mind
and leaving it without any kind of grounding in time
An astounding fine wine are served through veins
I pass the glass untouched n let my words chew brains
Like two chains connected to eachother in both ends
i form a strong unshaped zero so I can coat trends

Last edited by i_ecca; 11-12-2009 at 04:28 AM. Reason: rules :D
i_ecca is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-20-2008, 02:13 PM   #2
PhD
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 64
Rep Power: 0
PhD grasshopper
Default

Nice, but I don't get it; which ain't necessarily a bad thing.
PhD is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-20-2008, 02:22 PM   #3
x.l.nc
Lyrical Don
 
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: The Big TK
Posts: 58
Rep Power: 0
x.l.nc grasshopper
Default

i was thinking the same^^ a bit warcloudy
__________________
Ol' Dirty Bastard swordplay, Dirt McGirt be pickin up skirts on 4th & Broadway, 70's b*tch be suckin ma di*k, Peurto Rican hoes be lickin ma split, California Mountain Snake on debate
be givin me head while I'm countin my cake, crushin up an 8th
of that snow white sh*t, in the Pu*sy Wagon - not hittin tha brakes.....
x.l.nc is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-23-2008, 07:53 PM   #4
i_ecca
H3nR1
 
i_ecca's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Sweden
Age: 33
Posts: 34
Rep Power: 0
i_ecca grasshopper
Send a message via MSN to i_ecca
Default

hehe thx guys
i_ecca is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-30-2008, 10:47 AM   #5
x.l.nc
Lyrical Don
 
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: The Big TK
Posts: 58
Rep Power: 0
x.l.nc grasshopper
Default

by the way being abit warcloudy wasnt supposed to be a bad thing - just deep - nameeen
__________________
Ol' Dirty Bastard swordplay, Dirt McGirt be pickin up skirts on 4th & Broadway, 70's b*tch be suckin ma di*k, Peurto Rican hoes be lickin ma split, California Mountain Snake on debate
be givin me head while I'm countin my cake, crushin up an 8th
of that snow white sh*t, in the Pu*sy Wagon - not hittin tha brakes.....
x.l.nc is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-30-2008, 11:58 AM   #6
Death the Kid
Hip-Hop infested Mind
 
Death the Kid's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 632
Rep Power: 0
Death the Kid shaolin monk
Send a message via Skype™ to Death the Kid
Default

Liked the 1st one better, dark and gloomy !
__________________
Death the Kid is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-01-2008, 10:34 PM   #7
Prototype
Hell Yeah Motherfucker!
 
Prototype's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 57
Rep Power: 0
Prototype shaolin monk
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by i_ecca View Post
8 bars:

Dim dark shadows sparking in the parks darkness
One part wants to embark the other part is heartless
Moody artless surround-sounds pounding my mind
and leaving it without any kind of grounding in time
An astounding fine wine are served through veins
I pass the glass untouched n let my words chew brains
Like two chains connected to eachother in both ends
i form a strong unshaped zero so I can coat trends

8 bars:

i am a crazy ill minded kid like the one
asian young hun from the crazy 88's
u spray the strays as i mace ur face
this aint ladys nites, u better take the gate
hit the road cuz u cant compare with my flow
sharp, it slits ur throat n i spit the dope
on tracks, whack cats gets bomb'd like iraq
laid back, i lay back, rest and stay phat

these 2 8's are not connected to each other ^^ just some rand lines i wrote. second one is kinda battle stylish but dunno. ill post more later.


OK. the first 8 was good. Nice vocab, etc. Only problem is that you tried to hard to make it deep, which made some of it not make sense.
The second half is blah. Simple, played out gangster lines. Not being a bitch just giving criticism. It's like..you can't just go from "Wine served through veins" to "bomb like iraq, i be phat blah ba blah". But yes, I liked first one.


Oh, and hit up my shit. Need some advice. My verses in Temple of Darts I mean.
Prototype is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-02-2008, 01:57 PM   #8
i_ecca
H3nR1
 
i_ecca's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Sweden
Age: 33
Posts: 34
Rep Power: 0
i_ecca grasshopper
Send a message via MSN to i_ecca
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Prototype View Post
OK. the first 8 was good. Nice vocab, etc. Only problem is that you tried to hard to make it deep, which made some of it not make sense.
The second half is blah. Simple, played out gangster lines. Not being a bitch just giving criticism. It's like..you can't just go from "Wine served through veins" to "bomb like iraq, i be phat blah ba blah". But yes, I liked first one.


Oh, and hit up my shit. Need some advice. My verses in Temple of Darts I mean.
well thx. first of all, first one makes sense! and yes first 8 are more worked tru then second one. second one was more of an keystyle verse. kinda played out yeah^^if u dont get my verse ask instead of saying "nah doesnt make sense" hehe but thx as i said. ill check ur shit out!
i_ecca is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-08-2008, 10:10 PM   #9
i_ecca
H3nR1
 
i_ecca's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Sweden
Age: 33
Posts: 34
Rep Power: 0
i_ecca grasshopper
Send a message via MSN to i_ecca
Default

the necromancer, words amp like cancer
murderous, slay all the background dancers
revive, always murder twice, roam the skies
hope to die, venus to pluto distance
laser guided missions, its substance sharp
incognito darts, client offensive pencil
under, behind, formed, shaped, a torn face
left tellus jealous, all it left was a soar maze
cordless, unconnectable, feelings feelings
ordered madness, it was swedens meanest
creepy beings, travel like shadows, unseen
never glance, surroundings feels seen, unreal

new one ^^

Last edited by i_ecca; 04-09-2008 at 01:31 AM.
i_ecca is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-08-2008, 11:01 PM   #10
i_ecca
H3nR1
 
i_ecca's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Sweden
Age: 33
Posts: 34
Rep Power: 0
i_ecca grasshopper
Send a message via MSN to i_ecca
Default

her eyes displayed it all, she was never old
never told, untold, one call grabbed her soul
the slopes she fought on made her weary n grey
i swear to this day, she had it but couldn't stay
to many hours without daylight, all the fights
roped her tight to the point her sight went blind
she tried but not for a long time, it ended fast
a relentless mass made by men polluted by cash
minced her pipes, to this day i remember her eyes
when i watch the stars falling in the sky i can see cindy cry

new one again ^^ some good beats iam listening to made me write these 2 verses.

Last edited by i_ecca; 04-09-2008 at 01:01 PM.
i_ecca is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-09-2008, 01:16 PM   #11
i_ecca
H3nR1
 
i_ecca's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Sweden
Age: 33
Posts: 34
Rep Power: 0
i_ecca grasshopper
Send a message via MSN to i_ecca
Default

pt.1 (security codes)

security codes insecurely handled, i call it false
hold your horse, a ball rolls with yall next fall
the wall fell but did it really fall, be not sure
links, data gathered, smugglers behind the laws
security codes, security codes inside the building
a offensive firewall in the dark heart screaming
the image painted by these thief's i can not handle
dismantled planet, gold n silver left us rusty panels

pt.2 (
outcome, a fatality)

public security, insecure public, a moshpit
the desk inside the office, sleeping coffins
humans, cyborgs cry wars and humans die for
heads over, heads held a well shut dutch door
molded mentality floats far from reality
controlled brain surgery, outcome, a fatality
casualties, its all over, a stone born clover
to clever never, a severed age still working

pt.3 (chaos at the railway junction)

i travel behind my sky, always marvel
i see a child playing with rolling marbles
store the charges, vintage luggage, iam thinking
sink my teeth in, a sinking ceiling never sleeping
the creepy parts born from start, a scart cable
connects my heart, lost its plating around mars
muted stars constantly appear, the graphic symbol
out of function, chaos at the railway junction

pt.4 (
seconds rapidly sprouting)

disorder in the upper case, confusion in the lower
a flame set way back burned the fuses in the storage
yet the flame contains a spark yelling, fire fire
from inside the broken dryer, soon it might retire
a demonic liar hurting itself searching for fuel
trapped like neon, this demon buried the jewels
scared of loosing, scared of rules, behind the truth
dwells a secret fountain, seconds rapidly sprouting

[writing like a madman atm.]
[pt.1 & pt.2 sees light]
[pt.3 takes on a new turn.]
[pt.4 the end.]
[title: chaos in a system]




Last edited by i_ecca; 04-09-2008 at 04:05 PM.
i_ecca is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2008, 02:18 PM   #12
BornPower
SiferBorn
 
BornPower's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Souf CHIolin
Age: 32
Posts: 1,248
Blog Entries: 27
Rep Power: 15
BornPower five deadly venomsBornPower five deadly venomsBornPower five deadly venomsBornPower five deadly venomsBornPower five deadly venomsBornPower five deadly venomsBornPower five deadly venomsBornPower five deadly venomsBornPower five deadly venomsBornPower five deadly venoms
Default

i was really feelin the first eight you posted. good imagery.
__________________
weep for lost babylon,
the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
bordered by a sea of faults,
fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
screaming shots, police and chalk,
wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...

-.5Kut
BornPower is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-20-2008, 12:50 AM   #13
SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
AKA THE PROTO-CHAOS
 
SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Section 9 HQ
Posts: 9,230
Blog Entries: 1
Rep Power: 53
SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS Iron Lungs (Fists of Legend)
Default

yo u got some deep lyricism you put allot of thought in ur writing and i can appreciate that. you have great imagery and your rhyme style is slightly borrowed from warcloud & abstract ghostface which is something that can be to an advantage if you truely study the style then i think you could be really entertaining.
__________________

NON IGNORANT...





SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-30-2008, 01:13 PM   #14
i_ecca
H3nR1
 
i_ecca's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Sweden
Age: 33
Posts: 34
Rep Power: 0
i_ecca grasshopper
Send a message via MSN to i_ecca
Default

well thx but ive been writing for many years, long before i heard warcloud. thou i cant say he didnt inspired me so ur prolly right

Last edited by i_ecca; 11-12-2009 at 04:29 AM.
i_ecca is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-23-2008, 04:04 PM   #15
i_ecca
H3nR1
 
i_ecca's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Sweden
Age: 33
Posts: 34
Rep Power: 0
i_ecca grasshopper
Send a message via MSN to i_ecca
Default

long time no see ^^ !

just wrote a 16 line freestylish thing, here u go.

the birds in the forest, i_crime like wallace
stand the tallest, hundred percent immortal
in mortal combat, not flawless only far beyond
megaton don, transform graphics like megatron
global audio opticom, enhanced data telecom
natures beast from the east, a wooden palm
strikes hard, nah cuz yall ain't ready yet
like who the fuck decapitated nessies head
me ofc! me ofc!
the optoelectric nuclear force
all stories told, the wooden horse
new age matrix soldier trojan war lord
score like a player but kid i ain't one
i am a saints son, the bible has its way
drink up youre chardonnay, the devil delay
mayflowers withered early at the masquerade
i_ecca is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 03:06 AM.


Copyright 2000 - 2013 The Wu-Tang Corp. & shift-one