|
|
|
#1 |
|
D.O.P.E
|
yoh! bcuz u think u rock chains,ice,4uck bitches and puff L's/
brother, dat means u not superb/ i see u wretched,poor,miserable,blind and naked/ all u do is wicked/ repent! u dont need 2 be stupid/ niggas wivout attitude end their lives in da dark b4 dey see tha light/ i wonder wat hiphop has changed/ if not addin to crime,beef,guns and hate/ only wat sum mcees relate with/ so we came here 2 change it/ u dont need to emulate their ways to change/ wont give up lyk cronite and masta ace who already gave tha fight up/ instead of helping to build these young kurupt mcees up/ wat do u gain in da street fights, tha beefs and tha homocides?/ hip hop was GODs eye/ given to mcees in form of a light/ so we pollute tha light and extinguished tha light/ no wonder,NAS said hiphop is dead/ so wat do you do to revive it back?/
__________________
"I deal with tha truth and build with the youth" Last edited by d22; 05-10-2008 at 11:41 PM. Reason: Sum things needs to be changed in hiphop. |
|
|
|
|
|
#2 |
|
☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀☀
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: ⌛
Posts: 7,866
Rep Power: 35 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
why do you use '/' at the end of every line. do you write your rhymes like this -
up jump the funk then fill a bucket with junk/rhymes flying out my mouth like sooper dooper spunk/ya feelin me, ya seeing me so ya''ll believin me/Now watch as I pee on your moms setee/ then split it into lines like this - up jump the funk then fill a bucket with junk/ rhymes flying out my mouth like sooper dooper spunk/ ya feelin me, ya seeing me so ya''ll believin me/ Now watch as I pee on your moms setee/ I aint taking the pis bro, i was just wondernig cos i've seen a few people use '/' and i was'nt sure why...so maybe you can enlighten me
__________________
![]() |
|
|
|
![]() |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|