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Old 05-15-2008, 09:05 AM   #1
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Your a boat on the surface, I'm submarine deep,
You just cant keep pace your outta this race,
Outta place shoes unlaced your stumbling,
Over you words your mumbling,
To be heard and I'm comin in lika a kamikaze,
Nothing to loose its hard for you to be,
Stepping into these giant shoes your confused,
You've lit the fuse of a bomb,
A depth charge to strong that travels too long,
Coming unravelled your gone, sinking without a trace,
My steps a path to success,
At the side of the road mics lay a wreck,
Wit a treasure chest filled with gold from long ago,
Below radar I creep to slay stars,
Lost don't know where you are,
And the cost of going to far you've fallen into the dark.



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Old 05-20-2008, 07:08 AM   #2
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