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Old 10-12-2005, 12:31 AM   #151
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Prevailed

" What had to bring, duties remained as many by-passed, those able to glance upon, restrictions gone to normal stances observed, how reflection cast its own signal, with somethings not fully magnifined, stretched toward the lengthened limit, yet most escaped as communities differed, just in pattern for accomodated through the environment, less tactics to conserve distributed powers within the system, all this having to be noticed, analysed still while factions retreated, distant features which related their own history, where had one begun from, and similarities at hand, the types which deserved their motion, rapid revolts and others that witnessed, heard many talents acted out of departure, that was not accepted, yet was the points access, while some watched as if manifested truths, even continuous when desperate folds maintained its own, difficult measures but had to listen to all eventualities, just for simple instances, known of what had come for, positions chanced to gain better advantage".
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Old 10-12-2005, 12:46 AM   #152
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Old 10-12-2005, 05:07 AM   #153
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behold - sat the knowing eye
that sight foundation upon high
granting support - though seem to sway
placating and leaning through varying arrays of actions
noticeable the ascribing relations of factions
in the due course of summer the bees come out
as the pendulum scales time the birds fly south
gesturing the vapor humidifying marine aqua
letting loose the adamah's terra firma cotta
booning wishes pleas cries and joy in life
while amidst stocking death with faith hopes grief and strife
considers no rationing for deals with impartialities
extracts due accord when integrity of justice is called
has neither heart nor head that's to be charmed
turning unders and rounding overs leaves lessons still unlearned
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Old 10-12-2005, 04:18 PM   #154
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I need a Queen
Who's sweet in the streets
and a Freak in the sheets
but only for me
cuz she's beautiful, smart, nice and clean
Need her at the lonely times, nahmean
She amazes me with her eyes
never stares at other guys
cuz its me for her and her for me
we can just lie down, chill, watch TV
I don't take her out to eat, I cook for her
Because I dont want other guys to look at her
But that's not jealousy, thats just preventing
because I've been hurt before
and I don't need pain no more
I just want to start a family
don't wanna cheat and party
Because she's the realest girl I ever met
And she's the only girl who's jokes I get
So I'm just sitting, waiting, wanting, longing
for my beautiful, nice, smart, independent woman
I need her now, well soon I mean
I'm waiting for my queen

Still waiting 4 my queen
My first real attempt at writing poetry, what u guys think?
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Old 10-12-2005, 04:33 PM   #155
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2nd poem/rap on here check it


im dreaming, of cases of m-16's, the smell is clean like listorine
lazer sites locked non stop atomic bombs rock the roof tops
of underground dwellings, above the ground shellings
theres no telling how many will come, ill empty the drum
on my tommy gun, ill bomb some, from robotic remote control
im 3000 years old, 5000 lies told, to keep the young growing old
Im folding space and time in rhyme to decline the advancing line
of marauders, my width is broader, im deeper water,
gaurd your sons keep your daughters, watch your borders
await your orders, the angels will not leave us, believe us
they use angles to decieve us, the attempt is needless,
they try to breed us and keep us, fattened up
beaten and battered up, tenderized, slenderized
were like fries at mc donalds to them, another franchise
im lookin for riders, not drivers, im not Fahrvegnuegen
you far-from-groovin, I stop the stars-from-movin
like a black hole, im redefining gravity, like-newton
define reality like poor people in new-orleans-lootin
like more people in venezuela coo'in, political ruin
is insuing, somethings brewing, religous war is the distraction
for alien factions, they want to make us into rations
to feed there hunger, and passions, transmitting from there mansions
they bring us under with veils and lies, controlled by scary lulabies
the revolution will not be televised, youve been advised, to rise
devise a movement, make improvements to your defenses
lay out the mines and razor fences, raise your senses
dont be defenseless, theyll be relentless,
dont scream they are not listeners,
youll be hospitilized and cant have no visitors
Im the new public enemy and I take no prisoners
this isnt an exercise or a drill, its time to fufill your destiny
open-sesse-me, your DNA is your weaponry
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Old 10-13-2005, 01:00 AM   #156
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Practices


" Each able to be made a culture or religion, as it went further, distinct discussions while concerntrated, the types centred by their truths, whilst dreams that snake-bite attcks as in its accordance, yet recessed factors claimed the worth, how many were to experience, though was with a deciteful companion, as family concerns where of those alive, not involved amidst the dead, motives changed which signalled the end, now for the ones to depart, what seemed complete, already if others had witnessed, bygones set at prepared refusals, was to remind that received and heard all, operations planned against someones agreement, nor forced strides to fix it again, there where medicine women that wanted ones services, with first rituals that had to bath in blood, of a certain totem or animal, vivid reflections of their kind, offered businesses yet unable to persue for traditions altered its types pattern, but many went to try and change the cycles, through its self distruction, as we honour all energies and life, those set on different tasks, while pressures made less effort accorded by the purpose, how much had restrained, encouragements placed the methods which others insisted, for was portrayed amongst true essence".
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Old 10-13-2005, 02:24 AM   #157
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audio comin' soon...


((\\\::~ 3rd World America ~::///))


this punishment’s sinful if crime in Heaven blackens Christ

but governments dwindle if Nine-elevens happen twice

so you listened to a fool, who contrived election from Gore

whose religion was a tool to disguise intention for war

it laughed at feds, but more truthful: you lie and shed tears

Bin Laden’s dead, just more useful alive to spread fear

crash conspiracies, Anthrax, Weapons of Mass Destruction

fascist tyranny, hands clap, President’s last discussion

conquer nations, Apaches eat ‘em, as cobras slide over soil

Operation Iraqi Freedom, though soldiers died over oil

it coulda created democracy, we took the strongest coward

if Bush’s greatest hypocrisy’s we put Saddam in power

. . . .

rules alter our right’s precedence, in essence of legislation

schools offer us life-sentences instead of an education

faceless classism and Stalinism of systematic communities

racist fascism of politicians with diplomatic immunity

we know the Tuskeegee Project was preparation for AIDS

below it was greedy logic with reparations and graves

now we pray for assassination in this fervent murder story

and we’d slay for a vaccination in his urban purgatory

blasphemy killed a blame-scoffed atheist he aided betrayal

factories buildin’ brainwashed patriots, created to fail

War is peace, Freedom is slavery, and two plus two is five

sworn defeat, even in bravery, ‘cause truth was suicide

. . . .

Home of the Brave, how blessed this nation to let ‘em die

hope for the slaves, found gentrification and genocide

tanks roll through the streets over Molotov hand grenades

ranks rose to the feat of a holocaust, damned brigades

if hearts should fall, repeat fate, we fight to stop intrusion

it’s Martial law, police states rewrite The Constitution

sacred files, wars pushed, to see if our nation could wither

Satan’s Child, George Bush: a reincarnation of Hitler

American rebels praised if dead, shows no man’s impurity

our terrorist level raised to red, no Homeland security

why my breath of resolution is stifled and tried for treason

I cried: death or revolution, my rifle provides a reason





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Old 10-13-2005, 05:24 AM   #158
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partial of farce y'all
last man standing, surveying what's been happening
from the transgressions from laws, forcing regression to flaws
in making a race hog like rats, and another too dogged from that
playing up the politics to economics, splitting the hair blinding optics
believing make them illusions, running with cruising for bruising
roads be slow when picking and choosing, not wanting to be rocked from misusing
told in scrolls print press in molds, the struggle is by far epic and bold
generating generations in general, casted in sides to instate residuals
battling in fights for a war to strike, live dead or died living like birth right
to grow or go retro never neo, for duped to stoop their id as plastic placebos
a washed with waves that pave, the mentals left to the sentiments of slaves
backs with burdens making crossed with cursing, the little lie snowballing as worsen
for the world gets colder and seem slower, and time becomes a boulder never meant to shoulder
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Old 10-13-2005, 08:35 AM   #159
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Originally Posted by MefMan36
I need a Queen
Who's sweet in the streets
and a Freak in the sheets
but only for me
cuz she's beautiful, smart, nice and clean
Need her at the lonely times, nahmean
She amazes me with her eyes
never stares at other guys
cuz its me for her and her for me
we can just lie down, chill, watch TV
I don't take her out to eat, I cook for her
Because I dont want other guys to look at her
But that's not jealousy, thats just preventing
because I've been hurt before
and I don't need pain no more
I just want to start a family
don't wanna cheat and party
Because she's the realest girl I ever met
And she's the only girl who's jokes I get
So I'm just sitting, waiting, wanting, longing
for my beautiful, nice, smart, independent woman
I need her now, well soon I mean
I'm waiting for my queen

Still waiting 4 my queen
My first real attempt at writing poetry, what u guys think?
This was excellent.........I can feel exactly what u r talkin about (since we talk so much).........

I really enjoyed this!
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Old 10-13-2005, 11:30 AM   #160
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i flow for soul power as i devour writen lines
because in time i will fill the sky like shine
and rays of sun light as my plight reaches its peak
from the devines words i speak
never reak although i drip of nectar and syrup sweet words
a beautiful mind like a decoration of horderbs
if was a degree i be a threehundread and sixtyeth full n compleat
never runin out always on full not depleat
never spoken wit the heat just to parallel hands
like a sholin monk who can prophecize to any man
follow my own band, beat my own drum
sing my own victory song so i have my hum
and hynms, my lines lie between the uncunsious and the awake
never lookin back cause to the future i'm never late
but people still hate but i will continue my motion
and give the world the everlasting potion.
wat ya'll think?
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Old 10-13-2005, 12:01 PM   #161
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i liked it alot keep it up man!

everyone's poetry is very good im impressed!
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Old 10-13-2005, 12:40 PM   #162
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((\\\::~ 3rd World America ~::///))



this punishment’s sinful if crime in Heaven blackens Christ
but governments dwindle if Nine-elevens happen twice
so you listened to a fool, who contrived election from Gore
whose religion was a tool to disguise intention for war
it laughed at feds, but more truthful: you lie and shed tears
Bin Laden’s dead, just more useful alive to spread fear
crash conspiracies, Anthrax, Weapons of Mass Destruction
fascist tyranny, hands clap, President’s last discussion
conquer nations, Apaches eat ‘em, as cobras slide over soil
Operation Iraqi Freedom, though soldiers died over oil
it coulda created democracy, we took the strongest coward
if Bush’s greatest hypocrisy’s we put Saddam in power

. . . .

rules alter our right’s precedence, in essence of legislation
schools offer us life-sentences instead of an education
faceless classism and Stalinism of systematic communities
racist fascism of politicians with diplomatic immunity
we know the Tuskeegee Project was preparation for AIDS
below it was greedy logic with reparations and graves
now we pray for assassination in this fervent murder story
and we’d slay for a vaccination in his urban purgatory
blasphemy killed a blame-scoffed atheist he aided betrayal
factories buildin’ brainwashed patriots, created to fail
War is peace, Freedom is slavery, and two plus two is five
sworn defeat, even in bravery, ‘cause truth was suicide

. . . .

Home of the Brave, how blessed this nation to let ‘em die
hope for the slaves, found gentrification and genocide
tanks roll through the streets over Molotov hand grenades
ranks rose to the feat of a holocaust, damned brigades
if hearts should fall, repeat fate, we fight to stop intrusion
it’s Martial law, police states rewrite The Constitution
sacred files, wars pushed, to see if our nation could wither
Satan’s Child, George Bush: a reincarnation of Hitler
American rebels praised if dead, shows no man’s impurity
our terrorist level raised to red, no Homeland security
while a breath of resolution is stifled and tried for treason
I cried death or revolution, my rifle provides a reason



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Old 10-13-2005, 01:46 PM   #163
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Quote:
Originally Posted by RockD
i flow for soul power as i devour writen lines
because in time i will fill the sky like shine
and rays of sun light as my plight reaches its peak
from the devines words i speak
never reak although i drip of nectar and syrup sweet words
a beautiful mind like a decoration of horderbs
if was a degree i be a threehundread and sixtyeth full n compleat
never runin out always on full not depleat
never spoken wit the heat just to parallel hands
like a sholin monk who can prophecize to any man
follow my own band, beat my own drum
sing my own victory song so i have my hum
and hynms, my lines lie between the uncunsious and the awake
never lookin back cause to the future i'm never late
but people still hate but i will continue my motion
and give the world the everlasting potion.
wat ya'll think?
bery nice!!
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Old 10-13-2005, 08:27 PM   #164
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When i die
I take off with made height
flying over graveyards sacrificed to do right
flooded bodies rock the underbelly of illuminati
star struck
Fade on our eyes with third sight
Ray bans reaching out to my body
With one way to die inside a quarantined fire
its in the up turned dirt
the ground we played on at birth
Massive Supplier
We fuckin' up when we get down there kid
recess with resuscitation daily and vivid like dream
rest then recieve it like cream
forth coming of the never been seen
I hope your exoskeleton is clean
Cuz after every cover up the covered become more interviened
Mostly Spotted
Our rock takes hold your atmosphere
Engines can't fuck with discs from crystal clear
With a telegram A.K.A. signed off as mr. grey a headed straight for the milkyway
Pray, its our time the Hades clock ran up
The streets is flooded now the walking dead shall walk among us........

there is more but i thought of that years ago.
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Old 10-14-2005, 12:49 AM   #165
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Dismantled


" Would not have accepted, though confronted on a whole scale, if had known, the propulsion of existence, with those that get things done, while expected to control, misled conflicts returned toward the guideline, later involved with discreet intentions, wails then which continuously came, what was real was left so sould be mocked indeed when noticed, these trully than that went wrong, nor justification of where was to strike after, still revealed there was an abnormality between the relationship, as there was only non, certain acceptences prepared the types inplanted, further contributions attained things forgot, these suspended before its course, what heard later disbanded, the stolen sights while searched for another, parted efforts changed the positions to accomodate the inbalance, often tributes expelled what others thought not wise for the ones that died and some faced the rest plus taken cared of offsprings, situated in patterns which displayed articulated moves, though thorough through all mankind".
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