The Official Poetry Thread

[GuardianOne]

Persued


" Getting worsened when knew the better, and was a moment not expressed, yet now had become actions, those forgotten with their death having been early, where they to deserve the title hero, did not know even though had to not try, as having to replace but was the same, many accepting the pattern, yet was not the type, realizing what had done, and persue only in ones path, each that determined the difference, how activities had become used of, those going to what they expected and the methods continued to separate, all bearing this in mind, not having to rush trying to explain but now all is within ones procedings, with each revealing all its secrets that where too much, what got wanted obstructing the proper flow, exerted with a better centre at its own strength, cultivating the natural purpose of the cause, questions that seemed to need to ask, just leaving them going by loss, and had taken a human stance and fell out, for there was no effort anymore, the beings upon all the activities, whilst humanity delapidated".

[nut_end]

just dotes to note

i say intellectuals are factual

not ones to speak of status quo

for not about the haves and nots

just the smarts to enliven ones lot

once upon a plane called brain

there was an outpouring of rain

destined to refresh at best the mind

the happenstance of conscience in time

to heed the workings of ghost

the inner speaking playing host

a choice its not much about

stilled in silence need not to shout

there was a step off the earth

where one should go to perch

neither above nor below as it go

just much to consider about so and so

its proven that really need one woman

a ladyesque feminine in the blooming

where head and heart are always persuant

for wisdom's work is never consummate

its deep as the questions of life

and as shallow as political strife

where mirrors are emminent quicksilver

intro and extro convorted define the sliver

their ago in time is common sense

desicive in the split of mice and men

though for are want to gut instinct

far removed from ones wanting to think

me stepping off the face is a fall into space, trying to follow is their drop from grace

[GuardianOne]

Just dotes to notes - that was a good verse, nut_end.

Peace

[GuardianOne]

Final

Retaining the effect once thought, other times sensed with that always effect, yet there is that one of the opposite, taking different talents now noticing that all was a procession of what was to occur, for started upon their own, all was not mentioned, but did not have to show change, as the average actions only possessed, what many soon compared, suppose encouraged by anothers purpose, just for all to know, how the reactions showed trying to define ones patterns, but there are to reflect on other moments, those given paths to their own flourishment, so must progress, many would only notice, returning remembered that of past, yet can be recalled , types in tempretures rate tell of a similar cycle, did not want to attempt such proceedings, and should not lead to a destructive pattern, most lost for had participated, with not much to be told, though could only understand that had been done, departures had no meaning to anyone, they did not try but had to be brought to mind of all that lived accross the surface, while was within its domain, with others that thrieve together, seeming as though was intense, yet later would be thought of, past notions that could not be reversed, all must continue in its cultivation towards new deciplines, yes and it was grand with its vast challenges, that each one could develop in".

[nut_end]

thank you.

[Queen Of Poetry]

MIND SEX

QOP

With no penetration
Just mental relations
Seductively sexing your mind
Your body temperature rises in no time
With steamy verbal intercourse
The sex has greater worth
Making your knees go weak
From these words I speak
Intellectual talks
While we walk
In the aura of your mentality
Is your true sexuality
Not how your physique is viewed
But how your mind is used
That’s what turns me on
And I have desired for so long
I’m feeling your vibe
And want to take the time
To get to know what’s on your mind
Your passions and desires
What it takes to set your heart on fire
Verbal foreplay
In the words we say
Subliminal injections
Of melodic erections
Light some incense
This could get intense


Blackwisdom

We mentally kiss
our verbals destroy the need for defense
as the walls come down we get a glimps of each other's eyes
it's your mind not just your titties and thighs
are you surprised that we can bond on this level
other's intentions mirror that of the devil
a thief in the night trying to rob your treadures
but we're as natural as weather
feel the breeze as I talk to you with silent words
i'm on my knees to lower myself to be heard
i stroak your hand feeling it's warm
i want to kiss you and I'm caught in your storm
eyes are like magnets with opposite ends
irresistable there's no need to pretend
lets touch and allow our wild side to show
but first lets earn respect before i walk through your do'
I love you and with love comes respect
I think I'm calm now but what can we really do next

[blackwisdom]

Thanks for bringing some goodness out of me Queen. A real beautiful mind.

Peace

[Queen Of Poetry]

U made it what it is.......I am honored for u to add on to my pieces anytime.......

[Razorsharp]

dope shiiit from the both of you.. QOP u got that banner working yet....

PEACE

[blackwisdom]

I’m in the room with demons
And what makes it worse is the season
My eyes are bleeding
Thinking that this alliance is treason
Against everything I’m fighting for
But I’ve opened the door
And my hands are tied
Oh God knows I’ve tried
But I just can’t escape
If so they’ll seal my fate
And that of those around me
I almost feel as if God’s not around me
Cause I’ve deceived my family
And everyone that can stand me
But the secret’s too deep
I can’t sleep
Cause there’s just one picture in my brain
I have one thought in my frame
One shame
And one name
But I will die with it
You think I’m gifted
But I’m more so tormented and cold
But that story will never be told
Because it dies with the ones involved
I sit still and watch the world continue to revolve

Just some stray thoughts.

Peace

[GuardianOne]

Originally Posted by blackwisdom

Just some stray thoughts.

Peace

Hey is that part of the verse or just an explanation?
Anyway nice verse, and also Mind Sex was good from the noth of you. But i think its was mischievous , Queen Of Poetry and Blackwisdom nice verses.

Peace

[GuardianOne]

Passage


" That has upon, now chased what should have been doing, matters had their own equivalent, with the nature of all things given their choice, how had come to not notice what was within, manifested with each ones own things, is wanted most, as those that chose what they passed, with many having their naughty actions which they rather to tell another, but if wanted did fully know the procedures to attempt, with the surroundings placed its own, many tried to obtain yet the originals had taken root, watched with daunted eyes, for their process had begun long before, was just communicated between in that state of mind, knowing what has to be done, a sort of protection reveals all that perpetrate the covered zones, a form of boundaries and is only left to those authorized, yes and can attain much within its vast source, still get drawn towards its works, would not need to get entangled, all must know their proper part, as can be sustained with the gradual change that time brings, most survived just for the sake, thought had been, not at all with only its construction being distroyed naturally, for was distructed whilst humans inhabited, now back to its simple purpose".

[nut_end]

the world as the trip

of a lifetime in blips

each step a day ripped

the page tells to answer

past future winner loser

the turn like the screw

in and up to over and out

a journey take end to mind

each place in sight to find

with end encompass all such

from the one square to where

know no where by now here

the end and in of by for all

the macro micro eye balls

embrace each day like the first but grace each day like the last

[nut_end]

how i be what are am

when as is was to will

where in ex id formed ego

mine of self know a else

my facet me about super see

quint the sense loft relent

fiber airs aura in vibe moral

with aesthetic mind's ethic

sow forged gold a thread's mold

fiber needle's silver line eye

knit waxed wits of hay stick wicks

stringing pearls the mother unfurl

i conscious of d conscience makes full of id the it

[nut_end]

life inter sex course rest in u al

being held down by love

while raised up from passion

for set straight by rapture

when pushed ahead from ecstasy

knowing backed up by bliss

where at ease from understanding

know how engage with peace