The Official Poetry Thread

[GuardianOne]

Unresolved

" Was misled by the lying honesty, the faith that was given to, theirs was all fake, no one told anyone, as they just left one to the misguided way, to them it was all fun, distroying anothers life, which was no help, for one mistake, that seemed too simple to be done, was performed by one who didn't have knowledge of it, they left their cause with no purpose, thats whats been bringing down, all those amongst, less priviledges for they where not helped accordingly from the beginning".

[Qwiffersniffer]

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/1/quartense_music.htm

[Dae Ja Nae]

Originally Posted by blackwisdom

How can a woman containing en-richened melanin eyes
Become so brainwashed and Europeanized
I’m mesmerized at how much the zombie effect has spread
My people walk these streets, mostly, spiritually dead
I dread talking to my peeps about mind elevation
Because it becomes such a one sided conversation
With no knowledge shared, cause it’s just me schooling
But they ain’t listening so who am I fooling
They think it sounds cool and yeah he reads lots of books
But I’m viewed as thief when only as a child I was a crook
Stealing comic books and candy trying to live the american dream
When in actuality Africa should always be my only theme
We played war as children instead of building a nation
With parents absent, working, we tuned into our tell-lie-vision stations
To replace the love and care, that’s why we blast up our music
To rock us to sleep, without the rhythm I would loose it
But I just vibe and try to assist others to thrive only to get hurt
Living the life that I lead will always require ample work
But I’m willing to die for what I believe and give you my life
So never tell me that what I’m striving for isn’t right
When all I want is the jewels and to shed a bit of light
All I ask is that my Creator assists me to shine like a pipe
Blowing “away” the fog of the lies that have been accepted as the truth
When I pass I pray that people will remember me for loving the youth

peace

You know I gots ta keep it "Dae" lol ... I will, in time, drop some feed on all these beautiful jewels, but I thought I would start with this one first. Black this piece was on some minds eye elevation, no doubt. You always come across to me as a warrior, always fighting for truth and righteousness. You and your words always leave me with a strong, deep feeing of pride. Keep ringing the bells of truth my brother, and I will stay forever rocking.


Peace and One Luv

[Dae Ja Nae]

Originally Posted by bigben

Alright after reading G's poem I think we need a Poetry thread in the Temple

I'll start off with this



ever see birds fly at night?? birds teethered together.. ever see the sky at night?? words turned to vapor outfield player errors and favors major league movements made with in layers.. distractions tailored a 3 piece suits' the Savior?? compound fractures litter the foundation we cater.. gestating raider relations lattitude and longitude activate the station.. missle launch gravity distorting magnetic bursts never rehearsed.. served up asthetics work horses disperse with blinders a pigeons purring chirp sirens sound crackers and cookies the ensueing visions hurt alligator skin with a velvet plush curse an albino absorbing the worse exposing sun suicide residue and rickety rides diping they dive straight shooter not an aimer but a hooter get the subwoofer lavishly subdue ya.. fuck ya'll laws microsoft computers rule ya'll.. diamond bits centered they drill right through ya.. grab the ruler an measure your line physical space magnified through my eyes spiritual fools are hypnotized ..God is in you open ya eyes or be defined to stand on one side and defend and fight blindly as the 4 corners close in on your mind failed strategy and design a tragedy of your crime..

Damn Ben, this shit was like ... amazin'. It's like you open up your mouth and pure fire just comes blazing out. I'm always like whoa after reading something like this from you. You stay on some revolutionary type shit. Big ups to you homie for always holding it down.

Peace

[Dae Ja Nae]

Originally Posted by SpOk3N

The Rendition of apocalypse...No more superstitions or hypothesis

The final minutes weren't vital, witness religion in the populous

Decisions of marriage were vicious, apparently finishin the obvious

Extinction of parents, incisions u carried, is sickenin' the ominous

My wishes of knowledge has been banned-from-the-mind's-plains

Reality would sicken it, and leave me amped-up-in-crime-rates

No more praying, no more hope, not even 1 hand-up-to-rhyme-great

Was Focused on finishin my life, cause she passed-up-from-my-date

Whether it was my sense of humor, or sarcasm i carried inside me

Never da love I sent to woo her, i start laughin from various IVs

Tryin to hide the pain, denial would nearly cause me to end it

Cryin inside my veins; cenile and clearly lost in my sentence

Slicing open my arms, n entertained by the red goo that slips out

Writing poems at dark, as yesterday wasn't yet too enriched now

Rememberin that heart break'll cause me to go insane and collapse

Forever will my arms make me claw at the open vein, and alas

Love isn't for da weak at heart n time has made me learn da lesson

But wishes never needed smarts to try n make me earn my essence

Curiosity never killed the adolescence, that only made me realize

Pure philosophy isn't real w/o a message, my own mistakes keep me alive

So therefore, I found out that livin isn't really a true option

Declare war; the loud sounds are listened when a city regroups often

Is Life worth it? To live thru each day and admit that its a De-Ja-Vu

Tonites purpose: Admit your cliche', and insist that its a made-up view

Who's to blame for the hypocrisy? Commercialism and your goverment...

Fusing claims with any property- Observin wisdom for the fuck of it...

The church is slowly gainin' control of your minds, not worth the ambitions

You'll learn your phony, aimin ur soul after mines, the words of magicians...

Very deep read Spoken. I always look forward to seeing one overcome the various obstacles placed before them along this journey we all call life. You give off such a strong vibe through your writing. You're a very admirable Poet. Your youth stays well hidden behind the veil of your writing ... if only more could see through eyes, they would be a lot better off cuz I tell ya ... you are truly something special. As always I'd like to say, keep your head up and stick with this craft, because you do it a great justice.


Peace

[Dae Ja Nae]

Originally Posted by james

Scarred (hood Life)

Thought you were set free, unaware slaves controlled by tha powers that be watchin' me
Dollar signs tha god of society, it imprisons us mentally
eyes see materials as the way out, don't you know fads play out
Sometimes i stay out on tha block, watching the seeds runnin' their mouths
About the money, hoes, and cars their so far from reality
Next month i read about one of them in the obituary
It scars me to think our seeds are becoming extinct
Gone in tha blink of an eye, why? Theyv'e been fed lies
No matter how hard i try some seem impossible to reach
With no fathers to teach them the trials of manhood
They end up down, and out up to no damn good
in the hood it seems to be positive is to be soft
Our babies are lost lookin' for love theyv'e never received
The same tainted theme, so they indulge in pussy, liquior, and weed
A high to overcome the depression, a role model's what they need
Claiming a street they don't own, in out of jail until theyr'e gone
Mothers mourn then move on, i tell em' stay strong
How long will the seeds suffer and nothings being done
To fix this crisis poverty's paradise we stuck in tha slums
Every night justs gets worse, another casket in tha dirt
I work to make ends meet and to provide for my family
and live out the path allah has planned for me

Raw truth my brotha ... raw truth. I share your vision homie. This reads like it could have come from me. We are all so quick to turn a blind eye to all that is truly meaningful in this life, being foolishly mislead by all the materialistic bullshit that is laid before us. It saddens me greatly, to say the least, to know that we as a people have fallen victim to such a corrupt society ... maybe one day we'll all rise above.

Who knows ...........


Peace

[Dae Ja Nae]

Originally Posted by SurreaL

When it's time for you to go, how would you feel?
Would you kneel down and pray to god?
or would you keep it real, and give the nod.
Paintin' the picture, I emphasis death in the scripture,
My soul is sold, Once secured like a fixture.
But since death is at the doorway, no need to keep him waiting,
open the door, felt a sudden chill, followed by my mind fading.
Dream's past, vision's so real, it distorted my reality,
then shortly followed by the ever dramatic fatality.
Is there a heaven or hell?, I don't really know where i'm going,
without guidance, I'll drift into limbo without even knowing.
Follow me on this journey, through the vision's to come,
I've seen death through my own eye's, and it's yet to even begun.
Seen heaven and hell, everyone has, but no need for praying,
just burn out my candle, and prepare my after life before the decaying.

Rather than comment, I thought I would just build on your post ...

I'm not sure where I stand, but I hope that life goes on
but I'm not foolish enough to believe that we are simply reborn,
I feel that we somehow pass on to an even greater existence
dwelling within a higher realm where the soul meets no resistance
devoid of self conflict, the purest state of elation
experiencing and unending reign of total exhilaration
a greater sense of understanding beyond the fathoming of natural man
like a unification of kindred spirits in a Zen state without demands
mingling amongst the stars in the form of raw energy
knowing real freedom for the first time, without constant threats from an enemy
reaching the pinnacle of perfection, if there really is such a thing
the completion of a full circle is what I hope the after life brings


Peace Surreal

[Dae Ja Nae]

Originally Posted by bigben

all my life I've looked to the skies,

all my life my tears have dried,
all my life I seek what I think is best
all my life I've repeatedly burned my nest,
all my life I've watched these viscious cycles,
all my life I've feared when the night falls,
lived in the slums projects and broken homes,
as I still strive to understand the unknowns,
take my money my shelter food and clothes,
but you'll never understand how family's love forever grows...

Our love for our families and one another is something they'll never be able to strip away. Beautifully articulated Ben.

Peace

[Dae Ja Nae]

Originally Posted by G...

General Jottings ~ World Of Havoc

What I see is a world of havoc, lacking the magic,
Thay my mind creates from plastic covering the realness, your actors,
In a fake script where you talk this nonsense that's purely non-relevant,
I'm an artist that's taking steps bigger than those of an elephant,
What I see is your hate-filled looks, but your covering up,
'Cause political correctness has you with news from such and such,
Now your warped, havoc's come, and now we lost all the magic,
Your actors in a cinema-scope screen, purely fabric.

This read more like a verse that a poem, but it was dope just the same. Being that rap and poetry go hand in hand, it's all good.

One Luv, and Peace

[Dae Ja Nae]

Gotta run for now ... but I'll be back to hit up the rest a little later on. I must say, Great work everyone, and ...


Peace

[GuardianOne]

Forgiveness

" Yes good things last for their given time, all takes its course, that which cannot be filled in will flow past, such not to be heard of, thats how real it is, for all must be in mind, so can dwell in pattern, as willed, it gives all orderness, and scattered humbly revealed its true character, that was which adopted, though must take part each slowlly gaining it for internal growth, matters seemed to end after, but remained by the so ever presentness, thus must take a bit of it, what has to happen, will be what it was, for still are proceeding".

[MASTER PAI MEI]

a random thought....

clusters of sores herpe infected whores with liverworst breath what the fuck is next?? a midget complex that fidgets during rigid snot sex mucous collected and bought as the infected are outlined in chalk muttering bastards lined up and shot digestive tracks in a shit knot exploding tummy's feces runny asses muddy oh well get a diaper buddy you're one of the lucky victims stuck with the ugly stick here take a taste and lick dine on designs made to get us sick televised stories chicken strips and bacon bits growth chemicals inserted they twist nature into anamolies turning off certain genomes stomping on freedoms marching mobs treason lost humanity and reason society's wrong survival season vile legions of denial increasing FEMA delays aide while scheming men behind closed doors are thinking while the focus on the the war continues receeding these venues of the bleeding while menu's served for corporate eating who's really cheating?? do you believe everything you're reading??

[MASTER PAI MEI]

PEaCE Dae elevated minds think alike strike and survive through rainy nights!!

Guardian your poems always make me think hard about what you're suggesting and expressing....

[MASTER PAI MEI]

slumber sometimes funny dumber and dumber they wonder and blunder days of thunder tom cruise is a bitch scientology in ya ass crack slit slobbering sluts can only wish as dopefiends kiss a spider infested pipe burning out the lights ticks fatten up from the bloody bite despite the rubbers worn in the night chiggers and fleas fight strike precise erradicating life leaving behind undescribable horror all in the name of order executive orders killing men women sons and daughters welcome to the farm feed on harm then slaughtered in the barn

[GuardianOne]

Explanations

" Continued discoveries have just blocked other activities, we must remain to ours, yes many things that would be, that had to be done, slowlly moving in the seen direction, it seems to be working, speeding will only give rigid efforts of perfection, and that which is complete hardly spoken, proceed ahead those others that had all their advantages, to comply with the truth they saw, yet can accept it, there are those occasions, where all is tested till its brink end, of nothing told, that silences the part with discreet depth".