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Old 08-19-2005, 03:15 PM   #1
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This is solid, gimme some fair criticism
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Old 08-19-2005, 04:15 PM   #2
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i dont like how u chang ur voice when u rap
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Old 08-19-2005, 04:55 PM   #3
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what do you mean? my inflection?
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yea the hook u sound normal but when ur verse hits u change ur voice like ur trying to obtain the hardcore sound like jedi mind tricks or somthing ..u know...i mean hey do what u want..im just saying what i think........

but keep donig ur thing...lets see what others have to say
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like I said dude, criticism is what I wanted here, I know you're not hatin on it. you're right too, I do sound too gravely, and it does kinda remind me of what vinnie paz goes for.
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Old 08-19-2005, 11:26 PM   #6
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Pretty Good!
Work on the delivery some more and you got it.
You can tell who has heart!
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Old 08-21-2005, 04:54 AM   #7
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just relax with your spittin , your goin for the pissed off sound that's aight , but just chill a bit , might be just me but i really wasn't feelin the hook and the beat needs a bigger bassline , the atmosphere is aight for an aggressive tune but i think it could probably use a bit of "juicin" up .
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