|06-05-2008, 07:53 AM||#1|
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VOTES NEEDED-Shizzah vs Eradicate
This is how it goes...1 round,32 lines. No family-based insults... I'm dropping the first:
Better read well when I write my tomes
In one of the paragraphs,I'ma break your bones
Coming with this battle sharp as a knife
I'm not a dick,but I will fuck up your life
You can drop a bomb,but I can't dismantle
With my hands numb,there is nothing I can't handle
Leave your limbs to dangle in a 90 degree angle
Pick up your pen,drop your rhymes
Watch me destroy you with one line
Decline, rewind see what's fucked with your mind
I hope your fun lasted,my rhyme mastered
I know you're not a gun,but you're blasted
You're destroyed by the wounds I dealt you
After I finish with you, God won't help you
With simple paragraphs I melt you
Watch as I do voodoo,and kill you slow
I stick my dick in a river to fuck your flow
You just developed a style and tried to hone it
Watch it as I erase it in a single moment
This is legendary status here near ya ear
You have a grim reaper in your avy,yet you die of fear
Lets get this clear,I'm on top,and you're nowhere near
This battle is over, and you're the past
Better take your nikey's,cuz you gotta run fast
If your rhymes are sick, go see a diagnostician
Find out whats wrong,and take a close listen
You can be up on a space mission
And still higher I have risen
They call me Confucius cuz I drop wisdom
Keep your distance,and you could end up livin
Take the chance you have been given
Give up, surrender and live to see another day
Listen what I say,there is no other way
By this moment your bones are probably decayed
People won't wonder how I beat Eradicate
People will say how my rap was great
So I understand you're in enormous pain
But leave like dirt when I let you down the drain
|06-07-2008, 03:23 AM||#3|
why you came at me, was wrong, damn-it-dawg,
when I'm done with you, you wont stand corrected, you wont STAND-at-all(nope)
I got a huge gun, and a couple-of-G's,
you aint stabbin' noone, only thing you've ever cut-was-the-cheese
gay, but scared to admit it, before any of us,
Shi been in the closet so long, he knew the Boogieman existed before ANY of us
not made-for-this-place, a shameful-disgrace,
so ugly, karma'll comeback to bite him in the ass - and aim-for-his-face
and your verse, I would of named it "suck and choke",
you should of 'ended your post with HAHAHA', 'cuz it was a fuckin' joke
I'm gunnin' for the clown,
Shi only ROFL when him and Rakim are cuddlin' on the ground.
you on my dick, sit down, damn
put one middle finger in the air, grab my crotch and crush shizzah with ONE hand
|06-07-2008, 05:35 AM||#5|
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Flow - Shizz...
Punches - Shizz....
Vocabs - Shizz...
Creativity - Shizz....
Well, shizz came up with 32 barz, and it seems he formed his verse, punches very good. Eradicte, I have read few of your battles here, and saw u r very good lyricist, so those 14 barz r just too far from ur level, and I can see clearly that u wrte them in like 10 mins, so shizz took this one!
|06-07-2008, 03:27 PM||#7|
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Flow ~ Sizzah
Punches ~ Eradicate
Vocabulary ~ Shizzah
Creativity ~ Shizzah
Eradicate..."ROFL" is not a good look in my opinion in a battle.
But I did like the punchlines...in the closet was pretty dope.
But Shizzah came with a steady and colossal ryhme...
|06-12-2008, 09:42 PM||#11|
tie, but i give the slight edge to Shizz, because he seemed more focus and to the throat....good shit on both sides though.....good battle, ill close thread tomoro