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Old 08-23-2005, 02:53 PM   #1
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Hate made me hate myself
I'm filled with anger
Less than 30 years ago
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Sane, I'm productive
Insane, I'm a banger

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They label me a danger
Kidnapped to this land as a stranger
Hate made me hate myself
I'm filled with anger
Less than 30 years ago
a noose was my hanger
Sane, I'm productive
Insane, I'm a banger

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Hate made me hate myself
I'm filled with anger
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Insane, I'm a banger
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Old 08-23-2005, 04:32 PM   #2
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ok i swear i didn't bit this off you, i figured i would bring it to your attention
before anyone else runs their fingers, but i did something similar to your
chorus thing..

me
"you lone ranger/ i look at you like a hostile stranger/ steppin' in my
direction is heading into danger/ don't anger the headless horseman"

we did it in the same day and it's pretty strange aye?

word n nice verses dun

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Old 08-23-2005, 10:56 PM   #3
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born ruler...some serious fire ....

oh and Idiom didnt bite before people start hate
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Old 08-24-2005, 08:06 AM   #4
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Your flow and lyrical content seems to be based on the rhyme of the verse. You have to make it flow with the rhyme you have in mind (that's how this verse appears like). You have a certain rhythm which you worked with from the start of the verse and tried to keep it till the end of the verse. And you lyrical content needs to improve- but with this verse you can almost get away with it cause fo the title you gave it.Work on you style though.

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Old 08-24-2005, 10:37 AM   #5
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nice verse son u killeed tha whole thing
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