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Old 09-14-2006, 05:47 PM   #91
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Yeah thats what a story verse is to me too. I'm just sayin thats whats my battle shit looks like, like two line storys mixed in wit the "i'm this and that" battle format shit. like

These first two lines is like the "you can't do this" type shit:

Yo Electrical techinical specticales can't see me in a wire
Medical assistance need by the opposin foes, trapped in fire

Then the last two adds some kind of quick two line story:

So put down that desire because death will transpire hastley
Hire niggas to sell saphires, them switchin liars try to waste me
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Old 10-13-2006, 09:12 PM   #92
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check it, homey this aint the a-town/
i dont lean wit it rock wit it/
im mean wit it pop wit it/
i chiefed it then copped it/
feens need it i shopped it/
hot off the block dropped it/
top dis, shot missed/
got ya stocks pissed/
away, investments astray/
reflecting ya thoughts either way/
homey its redemption today/


lil different but i was just listenin to mona lisa and i started rappin 2 it.
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Old 11-16-2006, 08:27 PM   #93
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here comes the pain ima bring it real sick nasty/
just like ma nigga used to spit it named shappy/
bustin beats on the textbooks and lunch tables/
spittin flames shock ya nerves like jump cables/
listen to the gun fable, aint drop no bodies yet/
my bats the only thing i need to get ya body wet/
soaked in pools of ya own blood and piss/
i got tools that flood ya lil brain wit Kris/
yea thats ma name nigga dont stomp on it/
kridigis in jiberish so i flaunt on it/
cant raech the level of my skills so niggas wanna chomp on it/
well u can bite this mother fucker i boss ma shit/
go head try and spit it how i spit it, u get lossed on the shit/
get crossed up like i was the answer(Iverson) and u the problem/
aint no mathematical equation to ur loss for u to start solvin/

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Old 12-29-2006, 02:00 PM   #94
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i been spittin on everyone elses threads lately but heres one for my own

today was the day, atleast it seemed so/
lil negro was ready for the game of his life/
now hes followin the way of the lite/
his soul never LEFT cuz his body was RIGHT/
his heart is always present thru the day and the nite/
didnt deserve wut he got but god butted in/
shot on the block at the spot the rocks flooded in/
head in the sewer lil niggas family started runnin in/
cops never got the suspect they just threw it in/
the garbage can filled wit unsolved crimes and sins/
this is the life of coke lines, doorags and tims/
push rock to stay alive in the times of kin/
kind of family that let u down when ya lives are shit/
everyones eyes are split, from up and down not east to west/
only see the narrow vision, unnoticed to the kids who finally released there breath/
cuz its the last one there lungs are ever gonna take/
when the fuck are these people ever gonna wake/
to the nonsense replacin logical decisions i wont wait/
willin to take action for wuts rite not just the sake/


peep dat shit
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Old 12-29-2006, 02:04 PM   #95
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hell yeah nice lil drop right here fasure! feelin it, but still room for elevation! keep droppin in ya thread and i'll keep readin thme and tellin ya wats wat. stay up keep blessin
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Old 12-29-2006, 05:40 PM   #96
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good looks kid, ima re post some verses from other threads, so i cant get some feeback.
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Old 12-29-2006, 05:44 PM   #97
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just another day on the grind in the city/
skipped school, fuck it gotta get it on ma grizzly/
thought i take a trip to canal street/
need some new kicks n discounts lookin sweet/
homey got his ipod bangin as i walk with that swagger of oneself/
seen some fly as honeys i thought i drop some knowledge bout ma wealth/
soon as i step up i hear a roar from a far, closes in now people steppin out from they cars/
what the fuck is that people started shoutin/
bitches started screamin and niggas started crowdin/
moment of silence as the masses stood still/
fuck me if the sound of a blast could kill/
if u ever seen a airplane crash into a hill/
u seen a magic show, cuz the shits not real/
the whole fuckin thing disappeared in a flash/
the remnants that remained were only fire and ash/
after all the confusion and tension another plane hit/
i figured wat was goin on and said motherfuck this shit/
death and misery arose from the scene/
chaos took over and everybody fleed/
i was out of the panic now, runnin for my life/
tellin people book it to the rite/
see canal street runs east and west/
the plane hit down south when i released my breath/
took 1 break atleast to rest/
coughs comin deep from my chest/
couldnt look back as im swarmed by strangers/
a cloud of ash rose and released more danger/
i wanna go back and help but im not that person/
im gettin the fuck out as the situation worsens/
cant find ma nigga where the fuck did he go/
looked up real quick and that nigga merked it down the road/
in the clear now expectin another attack to explode/
paranoid in the middle of a battlefield let the ghats unload/
experiencin that makes other shit seem so little/
unimportant or fragile, meaningless and brittle/
how the fuck can u compare that shit to another/
nothin else ever brought me closer to ma brother/
six years later and it still seems like yesterday/
close ones deceased, its christmas and i cant get no rest today/
they'll forever be remembered say a prayer this way/
bless osama as that bitch hides in his mother fuckin cave/
i hope him and his whole family gets takin out by a mother fuckin wave/



wrote this on the spot, peace
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Old 12-29-2006, 05:47 PM   #98
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this is a verse about Kramer and his little slip up



can u believe the ignorance of some to say some shit/
callin out niggas like its lunch time then play dumb, shit/
i step on stage and let him now wut im workin wit/
death by mic chord and seinfeld never even noticed it/
dam ma dude, i remember how u used to walk around like a cokehead/
always slammed the door shut like the popo was patrollin it/
now a fofo is inevitably shown and aint no controllin it/
see a nigga holdin thick and u aint livin for another moment bitch/
nah chill, i aint even mad at this incompetent wash up/
the whole world need its cleanin. but he still gon get knocked up/
atleast he had the balls to come out speak his voice/
americas so fucked up his next book gonna win the readers choice/
im so sorry fans, i really never ment to hurt you/
but these niggas keep on takin all of ma commercials/
affirmative action is in place and u cant stop it/
it aint there fault ur act died but u still cant drop it/
ya shit is whack son, unemployed and equivelant to black sons/
u cant even represent white people and u gonna fite against the black ones/


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Old 01-02-2007, 06:07 PM   #99
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bumpin
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Old 01-20-2007, 01:44 PM   #100
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lemme bless the stage wit a earth shatterin performance/
bass blasts in ya eardrum, lookin for a worthiness opponent/
my brain cells filled with chambers of 36, missin a component/
RZA sprinkle some production on ma rhymes cuz this nigga earned it/
give props to the fam that stimulated my very train of thought/
flow is handed down and adapted to the game i brought/
the same name i sought wound up becomin a rap star/
so i switched up my style down to the very last bar/
this nigga got more multies then a 4th grade times table/
live life like im the reason the crime rates stable/
believe or not, the pigs round here shuttin shit down real tight/
but they cant lock up my words cuz im ready for the inevitable fight/
my heats so deadly it brings dark to the shade, who the fuck needs a light/
different from the crowd, cuz in a gloomy place everyones flow looks bright/
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Old 01-20-2007, 02:30 PM   #101
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lemme bless the stage wit a earth shatterin performance/
bass blasts in ya eardrum, lookin for a worthiness opponent/
^^^
(good opening bar, 8/10)

my brain cells filled with chambers of 36, missin a component/
RZA sprinkle some production on ma rhymes cuz this nigga earned it/
^^^
Didn't rhyme perfectly but, the flow is striaghtm lyrics is descent, (7/10)

give props to the fam that stimulated my very train of thought/
flow is handed down and adapted to the game i brought/
^^^
(nice multi, perfect flow, above average lyrics, 8.8)

the same name i sought wound up becomin a rap star/
so i switched up my style down to the very last bar/
^^^
(Good job at stickin to ur topic, another descent mulit, 8/10)

this nigga got more multies then a 4th grade times table/
live life like im the reason the crime rates stable/
^^^
(Best bar so far lyrically, pretty good metaphor, 9/10)

believe or not, the pigs round here shuttin shit down real tight/
but they cant lock up my words cuz im ready for the inevitable fight/
^^^
(ok bar, descent lyrics, ok flow, 7/10
my heats so deadly it brings dark to the shade, who the fuck needs a light/
different from the crowd, cuz in a gloomy place everyones flow looks bright/
^^^
(think u should of thrown a multi here, with needs a light, stretched lines, good lyrics, 7.5/10)

Overall-8, This verse is good for a quick one, keep up at that shit.
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Old 01-20-2007, 03:18 PM   #102
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good looks kid, thanx for takin the time to break it down
peace
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Old 03-03-2007, 01:32 PM   #103
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woow my shit fell wayyy off, ima up wit some lyrics

check it, fuck a beat kid, my rhymes bring they own base and trebble/
i raised the level to a place that can never be settled/
resurectin revolutionary rebels/
this kid got lyrics braided into a metal/
i revolve around time like the diamonds on a bezel/
blazed out the earth from my ravenous flow/
hit you with a thousand blasphemus bows/
rackin up doe's breakin backs of ma foe's/
stackin bricks in the dresser cuz ma closets packed full of clothes/
and one time 2 many i let a nigga slide on my watch/
no more hidin from cops cuz they the niggas supplyin the blocks/
police escort for drug dealers payin out they ass/
officer look the other way cuz they crazy bout that cash/
well my crazy bout to blast, legit business get pension for workin in the past/
fuck the game man im dyin to drop out the city/
makes some moves and my apartment soon to resemble that of diddy's/
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Old 05-31-2007, 11:15 PM   #104
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so can u blame me, do what i gotta do for the money/
get dropped dunny, not funny no jokes not sunny/
serial killer cuz im seriously read to squeaze heaters/
life and death seperated by mere millimeters/
i fear neither cuz i resurect simply bein near the lever/
liver bust turn ya blood to a black shadowy rust/
never trust a nigga wit a mouth like a battery thrust/
assault and battery plus, black mask fuck ya little bitch ass up/
a medieval soul, im the kenievel to the lyrical sphere filled wit evil/
really no equal to the retrieval of minds that i take wit no question/
previous proffession i was blessed wit the spirit of a revrend/
just to learn my lesson, some people not made to that type of essence/
my lyrical presence is a menace to a any ear that aint ready/
honorable mention wit no announcement, fuck u spaghetti/
say u got an impala but never seen a chevy b, bitch was a betty but only back in 1970/
messin wit a seventeen,nigga only type of green u seen is cold hard celery/
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Old 06-04-2007, 06:28 PM   #105
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call me el nino the notorious lyrical downpour/
floodin all systems wen my imperial clouds soar/
hear ma sound roar blowin out ya ear drums/
supernova bars, ma lines they b fearsome/
the fierce one i am, nigga im the son and the sam/
u can feel ma presence like the sun to your hand/
im the diamond in the rough, u the shells in the sand/
i done figured out the plan, i keep spittin and one day ill b herd/
recongnized as a great another master with his words/
my bars stay on point, aint never been curved/
i spit flames and im still better cold wen served/
cuz ma cold winds burn, acknowledge wut i earned/
ma knowlegde done turned, from a kid to a killa/
livin off nickels and dimes now im gettin that scrilla/
who u kno that b illa, this nigga got skills/
my mic made me money so this nigga got wheels/
playboy mother fucker, all ya bitches cop feels/
pimpin aint easy wen u knock shoes boots and heels/
im that nigga that takes and u that nigga that steals/

some old shit, get at me
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