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*feel free 2 add on
I’m the Nike checkmark spit fire carnage Flows never seem to leave enough wreckage/ Call me Hurricane Chaos by the way I display odds I don’t need to have the ego of A-Rod to succeed in this world/ Just give me dope beats, enough trees to create a forest And enough girls to pack six FORD Tarsus/ Emcees don’t want it wit Mr. Technical etch a sketch a few Get cha brain skewed by various political views/ Now you want to meet the press after the lunch I stay bright as a dark cloud over a cloudy sky/ Don’t even wonder why I never finish my metaphors I write them down just so I can score them next to yours/ Spit flows that sound like lion roars While y’all are just wild boars/ Do I need to explain myself? When I just want to believe like The X-Files Movie/ This is more than just another dart It’s a work of art, its work from the heart Take that in your piece pipe and smoke it
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High energy fire man, heavy with vocab and punches to keep my reading until the end. Caught the wu influence and cracked a smile at a few of the one-liners, the rhyme scheme was there too. Enjoyable reading.
Keep posting.
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God Of WAr
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Enough trees to create a forest like that dart there!
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Winter is Coming
Join Date: Jul 2008
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if im still aloud to add on like it said if not just delete my shit, i was really feelin that joint. hope this is good enough to match
More then just another dart, aim it right for your heart, it was over from the start/, part seas like moses, shadows cover the hopeless, sleepless, we restless,/ cuz its hard to sleep,cant even count sheep, they out causin chaos, needin a shepard,/ and cops be like leapords, spraying the pepper,/ think it gonna quell the riots, streets are never quiet, when i speak i create violence, no silence,/ and as governments conspire, im becomin a messiah,/ still sleepin on my techniques, im bronze feet, who walks and put holes in concrete,/ perfection,/ two deadly weapons, meditation in tibetan temples, sheepish the lord of chaos and bronze feet invade your mental |
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Who want to flips flows
Like gymnastics when we in this/ Spit it potent like smoke Clouding up the whole booth/ Watch me transform from the norm to super Raise the bar high so you can’t fly in the friendly skies/ Best check off my knucks when I buckle up ready for a crash test But I ain’t no dummy playing jin rummy with mummies/ Heads get separated from shoulders when I rock microphones Domes get blown like stereo systems and speakers/ Reach through the phone and smash you up like Mario Bros. My flow knows no bounds after you get surround by my clones/ Multiple cyber space quotable checking hands that’s foldable My flow is always toting AK with 47 bars in e’m/ Jack the beats you speak over with no substance Making me metal gear when I say solid like a changeling/ Y’all sucker emcees be paging me like it is 1990 Deep space grinding board minding anthem rising/ I got bars that get found like “where’s waldo” Asking me if I got flows with the hollows/ You ghost be shallow as widow’s peak My speech be thick with too much words in it/ Give me limits I break them like gimmicks All you cats tend to mimic without a second thought given too it/ So save me the critics and watch me pick them off Like a shooting gallery I’m crack shot Like Marty McFly in Back to the Future/
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Hardcore sticking up department stores, clothes donated to hooker whores
Mc's get tennis ball served, my hall of fame spots reserved Victim of the ghetto war, noone was saved by the lord pastors dropped to the floor, pissing they pants running through doors locked the close exit, jewels i drop 5% respected I'm a leader only religons packing heaters, and boning divas So cold niggas think my home is freezers, robbed Tweeters with tweezers Cold world rage, fatalities pay, and humble the unbelievers I get sky-high but never passed out from the cheeba You elves keeblar, horoscope readers, begging the weedman for cuffed reefa My seeds the future, live from the shelter, food, and clothing for the greeters Get off the speed speeder, your baby raps fit for 2 seaters Me and Chaos the truth, were wack emcee deleters drastic flow sulfur acid, rat-killer, rodent slayer masters you get owned, hard rock stoned, half-sliced, half-split while i spit until the next solar eclipse
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Winter is Coming
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Yo you cats making me step my game up, gonna have to try and come harder then those
Moons block sunlight, in the dark of night/ one man creates fright and fear, with one snear, explodes your heart in one glare/ fragile and frail, pail lookin like you seen a ghost boost the most, host to artifical beings/ use my mind for seeing, blind to your eyes, 360 vision view all directions/ i watch my own back, so watch where you steppin, im a rhino that bust threw your whole pack/ infectious yet the most delicious, leave you searching for your precious/ green goblin, robbin, bitches slobbin, throw grenades, exploding razor blades/ I rain reform to mist, rearrange your shit with a cletched fist/ evapourate and seal your fate, chop off you arm and use it for bait/ escape from alcatraz, left inside a body bag, rose in three days, blew up Fort Brag/ you step on stage and everyone left, came to show n' prove and didnt even write the test |
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I Already Won
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Shaolin South
Age: 27
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More Than Just Another Dart // This Battle Mark? // More Than Just Another Scar
Cops Scopin From Another Type'a Far // Crosshairs Right On Top of Ya Car Moonlights spent Husslin N Musclin // Money Made Viciouslly N Unvisciously Got Damn I Bet Da Block Iz Missin Me // Itz Constantly Hauntin N Watcin Me Fuck it Tho // A Hussle Iz Duckin P.O // Stayin off Papers But Cops Own their Patrol Watchin Thru Globes // Telescopes // Night Vision Mode or Holdin The Window Ova They Nose Usin the Crib? Be Carefull // Theyll Move In Across The Street N Cop Cable This Aint a Fable // Youll Get Stabbed In The Back By Those In Ya Own Stable Keep Those Around You Close // Most Wanna See You Carried By Cloaks Laid To Rest In'a Hole // Dead Before You 24 Or DRaped In COrrectional Clothes Wickidness Breeds Wickidness // So of course My Son'll See The Sick In Him Reapin The Benefits Of Beefin Menacin // Wreckin Microphones N Usin Em Like Deadly Weapons Is Hollowing out Those Slugs // Another Young Thug Die Meaningless Cutting up Those Drugs // Another Young Addict O'D's on His Fix From The Suburbs 2 Tha Barios // Tha Ghettos And Tha Facilities Word 2 My Killa Beez // Droppin These Lyrically Monstrocity Feloniez
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But The Stove Was Off...
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An art form is turning to dust or so it seems
We forgot the definition of pride and self-esteem Black, brown, and white be blinded by the green Come on, true flyers of the flag, let's intervene The average rapper, be going savage for the cabbage Pillagin' and ravagin', and causin' Hip-Hop damage and Infestin' people's brains, pollutin' minds of the masses Can't hold they own, and kissin' executives asses Two days ago, I heard that Jackie-O For reasons we all know had sex with her CEO So you got these tricks, promotin' fake tits And suckin' dick, all in an attempt to make it big Ok, getting carried away, back to the topic Promotin' the wrong message, yo please, my people, stop it We don't need fast cars, we don't need stacks or figures We need more rappers who know who Rakim is More sisters, mo' brothers, less niggaz More listeners, more peace, and less triggers Hip-Hop is ridin' slow in a hearse, sittin' on spinners Let's get rid of these losers, we a generation of winners
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Rappers get gone blasting through minds
Like villages, cities and country sides/ I’m the open river cold shiver Trip off acid my raps become synthetic like plastic/ I rapid fire hyper zoidnoid flow sicker than the typhoid virus Unscroll bars broken down in mysteries sectioned off in papyrus’/ Now you want to rhyme thinking I’m a drop dimes I knock minds out of orbit/ Try n absorb that knowledge Negro Please!!!!! My flow is tighter than track and field sprinters/ I leave beats cold and frozen over Like the temperature has risen below zero/ Don’t even call me your hero I’m a lyrical demon disguise as your best friend/ End cha statements with contractual negotiations I rebuff with flows higher than chip on the sphinx nose/ Do I have to come up with conceptual gems? Just to get the win/ I end it all without committing suicide Rewind the tape and you’ll hear me as white noise/ Take poise rappers rise and fall like the sunset Edit beats down to nothing but just drum tracks/ React actual facts begin to surface then submerge Try reading between the lines asking why before who, what, where and when/ So don’t think that ruse will fool even the most potent fool Thinking your cool cuz of Pascal spitting like a rascal thinking tattooing your face is cool/ Quit cha shark biting and start writing My mind is a planetary system revolving around nothing/
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But The Stove Was Off...
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^dope shit right there
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Winter is Coming
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Man Sheepish, your shit jus keeps gettin better and better
Warrior tribes, battling for wifes, plunder homes leaving nothing but bone/ as scribes, describe the battle inside, for power and control, only the royalty know/ each one fights for position to crush the opposition, this is just a symptom of greed and human nature/ i write my scriptures on paper, and when i write i become the creator, maker of all that is being/ flaming swords swinging, harbinger of death, angels start singing the pain im bringing, is just the beginning of the end/ my mind bends, alters time, rhymes liquid like snake regenerate, vampire techniques, grab your stake/ drive it threw my heart, realized you shoulda brought the silver dart/ energy absorbtion of the charts, stromin, reformin like hindus, rise like sun in the morning/ screamin "Good Morning Vietnam", GI's and Vietcong stomp villages, im king kong/ women walk with grenades in hats, blow your life of the map AK's snap and crack, bamboo carved into spiked traps/ standing at the tree line, push it back defend my bloodline, bombed with gasoline, napalm refined/ oil and economy run the army, if you think we disarmed hardly never put down our weapons, no matter what you step with/ me i blast verbal, like herbal, i go around a circle a cipher, step in and get struck by a viper/ venomous sniper, poison tips, enter hips, catchin my breath means im reloadin the clip/ poisoned your shit, heart pulling back flips |
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