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06-15-2008, 04:53 PM
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WINNER (ERAD)-Makaveli Da Killah Vs. Eradicate
Yo man, wanna do this shyt..?! It's first time to challenge u....
 1 round, 16 barz and as always, I will drop first..?!!! So.....................????!!! Peace man.............. |
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06-16-2008, 12:00 AM
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go ahead...
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06-16-2008, 04:49 AM
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Here it is:
Aiyo, they shitted bout my vocabs, and how I rap normally, but they were wrong, my rhymes r dope, I'm lyrical anomaly! If my style is deadly venom, ur is fuckin toy, My rhymes killin u, my punches kill ur joy. I'm diggin u more deeper, into core of da Earth, My mentals r blessed since the first day of birth. My style is so deadly, killin every ray of optimism Fakers droppin shyt, counterfeitin my liricism. Tryin to get attention by fakin my joints, but my verses r pure bangers, classics worth tons of gold coins cuz many niggaz from here to LA still like licking cunts, we, real hip-hop headz, spit rhymes and roll blunts. And u r one of fakers, ur style is wack like heaven, Me, I'm like Dirt Dog, straight from 97! And I'm a beast on mic, I bring the ruckus, make mess, And here is the final line, it's over, I kicked ur fuckin ass!! Yo that's 16 lines. Hope that I improved my vocabs than in previus battles...!!! It's your turn man...... Drop them whenever u like...! Peace............. |
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06-17-2008, 03:51 PM
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*bump*
Yo man, wutz up...??!!? Gonna drop some shyt...??!! Peace................... -suuuuuu/// |
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06-18-2008, 01:28 AM
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i'll have you runnin' on a certain path while ya ponderin' rhyme
'chute' makeveli down so quick he'll leave my laundry behind its been over from the first bar, if i lose ya'll hatin on the dude but i'll make this duke a 'handi-cap' like a fitted waitin to be used the shows over, runnin by you... but i think i'll pull over its apparent why ya wack cause with constructive criticism, i'd need a bulldozer i'll hurt ya pride, ruin ya life cause you a lonely prick punches'll push you back to when the Dead Sea was only sick you'll be dead when my mans pulls the snub.. beautys on the inside?..shit, he'll just look like a handful of slugs next time before you attack, find a set flow cause these punches'll make your chest 'cave in'..till it echos You puttin guns on me? That means the scope is on the god Son you in a 1 man crew and you still aint the dopest of the squad Shoulda said hell no to this battle, fuck weak.. E'll leave you on a suck streak I put my money where my mouth is, this chump smiles with buck teeth Last edited by Eradicate; 06-18-2008 at 01:30 AM. Reason: suck my penis |
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06-18-2008, 01:57 AM
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Flow - Tie
Vocab - Mak Creativity - Eradicate Punches - Eradicate Congrats to Erad on this. I really liked the '1-man-squad' line. Makaveli, I liked your verse, but you need less 'me' 'my', and really need more diverse punches, really punches. Just like the above mentioned line. PEACE to both y'all |
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06-19-2008, 12:57 PM
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^^ Yo man, thanks for voting..
So now, 1-0 for Erad... Nice verse man, I hope it's gonna be hell of a battle!!!!!! Peace guyz!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -suuuuuuuuuuuuu/// |
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06-20-2008, 12:15 PM
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Flow - Eradicate
Multis - Eradicate Vocab - Makaveli Personals - None Punches - Eradicate Vote - Eradicate I put my money where my mouth is, this chump smiles with buck teeth dat line wuz monster, cuda ben even betta am tinkin wit slightly betta wordin |
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06-21-2008, 06:20 PM
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^^ Thanx 4 voting.............
__________________________________________________ __ Yo famz, keep droppin votes................ Peace..................... -suuuuuuuuu/// |
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07-01-2008, 10:06 AM
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*bump*
C'mon ppl, please keep droppin ur votes..... Thanx............. Peace.................. -suuuuuuuu/// |
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07-07-2008, 11:09 PM
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Thank you Novakaine and Shizzah.. Again wow already 2 votes not bad...
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07-26-2008, 06:26 PM
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*bump*
Vote please! |
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09-04-2008, 01:38 AM
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Vote bitches, so i don't have to come back to this site anymore..
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09-06-2008, 11:36 AM
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*bump*
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09-07-2008, 06:07 PM
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Flow - No one
Multis - Eradicate Vocab - Makaveli Personals - No one Punches - Eradicate Vote - Erad to me erad brought it more
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