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Old 08-30-2005, 04:10 AM   #1
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Old 08-30-2005, 04:36 AM   #2
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that shit's tha bomb man.....r u gonna go audio.....the hook is unreal!
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Old 08-30-2005, 04:40 AM   #3
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Old 08-30-2005, 07:29 AM   #4
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i like the rhyme for real homie, the only bad thing i can say is to stay away from rhyming lines with "brain" and "pain" like in the 1st few lines of the 2nd verse, its just been done too often, and u got a hell of a lot of words in your vocab so i say stay away from simple rhymes that have been oversaturating songs for too long now, anyways good shit homie
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Old 08-30-2005, 11:54 AM   #5
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Old 08-30-2005, 12:08 PM   #6
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that shit was dope man It was like watching a movie- except in the movie you were an egyptian on a pyrimid in egypt and you were battling an Aztec warrior atop a pyrimid in South America and ryhmes were causing wars and weather ruckus like two wizards battling across continents- peace
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Old 08-30-2005, 12:12 PM   #7
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Old 08-30-2005, 12:20 PM   #8
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that was tight man, always feelin' ya rhymes stay up, two fingers!
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Old 08-30-2005, 12:28 PM   #9
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Cheers for all the feedback sofar.
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Old 08-30-2005, 03:51 PM   #10
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dope shizz my man

flow was solid
vocab is nice

good imagery with the second verse

cant fault it any way homie

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Old 08-30-2005, 06:19 PM   #11
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Well written, flow seemed to be on point, good use of rhyme schemes. I wasn't feeling the content though, and at times it seemed like you might be forcing big words. All in all a good piece though.
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Old 08-30-2005, 11:59 PM   #12
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Cheers to both for the feedback, Noel and 83.
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Old 08-31-2005, 12:00 PM   #13
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Old 08-31-2005, 03:39 PM   #14
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Yo my nigga shit be tight rollen up piece on dubs what?!?!
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