daliff89 -vs- Dusk (Winner) - Wu-Tang Corp. - Official Site of the Wu-Tang Clan

daliff89 · 11-04-2008, 11:04 PM

ummm

we'll do 16 lines i guess....

you drop first or i will, regardless, second dude doesn't feed on first dude's verse......

DVSK · 11-05-2008, 09:35 AM

ill go first, but im going to school now, then work, so if u want to go first, by all means...so this battle doesnt take forever.

Havok · 11-05-2008, 11:11 AM

i thought u didnt go to school 2day cuz u no ... the sickness

daliff89 · 11-05-2008, 11:58 AM

the dinner bell is ringing, i'm starving, i'll eat you like pad thai...
easily leavin' him bleedin' even if his maxi pad's dry...

i smack guys 'til hats fly from their head to their steps...
holdin' boulders, throw 'em, show him the REAL deadliest catch...

measure your neck with piano wire, death is heavily repped...
from dusk 'til dawn, beatin' this pussy up, somethin' i'll never forget...

forever the best, the exalted one, i talk, you run...
i strike swifty, aggrevated assault with tongues...

i cough, you're done, flows are plague ridden...
i write your twilight, sun setting on your vague existence...

resistence is forbidden, if you forget, i'll take a horrible angle...
all your dickriding boys get mangled when i 'war with angels'...

a gory 'stranger', minus the masks, i refuse to quit...
the rude shit from these two lips leaves school kids with bruised ribs...

i'm too sick, this dude's bitch, nothing but a pathological lair...
break his dome with Satan's throne, then throw some logs on the fire...

DVSK · 11-05-2008, 07:28 PM

you and me, my methods inscrutable, humanly
unfathomable attack ya mourners via Beautiful eulogy
radical fluid spat, youll have to take a sabbatical
since the inhuman's usually content; his paddle ball complex
has u attached to constantly bounce jaws
off my south paw, leave with palm prints as i pronounce ya'll
gone since my mouth roared, Daliff is an anomaly
difference in anatomy has em witnessin atrocities
ill hit em with a battery, while spittin my philosophy
detach his knees, take advantage and practice gynaecology
Maverick like John McCain, elbow drop on your brain
beggin for life like u was on the train,
hit u with lil kicks like im Elaine, benis, the dentist,
relentless when he's spittin like Llamas, a menace
to yo mama's, u better put the lifts in your loafers
giving odors, it aint over til Daliff is a gopher

underground son..eloels.

Drunken Monk · 11-06-2008, 07:28 AM

i vote for dusk

THE MASON · 11-06-2008, 11:00 AM

Dusk

wasnt really feelin daliff's style but still a nice verse

dusks was just easier to flo and had better punches

Ritter · 11-06-2008, 11:25 AM

Vote - Dusk

daliff was fresh but if he expanded his verse to more than just 8 punchlines, it would've been better. It feels as if he wrote shit on pieces of paper, line for line on different occasions and just threw them together.

Dusk had better vocabulary and was far more creative, the flow was kinda better, so there you have it.

daliff is fresh though.

DVSK · 11-06-2008, 07:16 PM

guys, major props, but in all fairness, Drunken Monk needs to elaborate.

adedwutang · 11-07-2008, 03:01 PM

daliff had a nice verse and props for that, but i think dusk puts another one under his belt with this one, the flow the vocab and punches were on point, but respect to ya homie stay up and keep battlin.
-peace

Drunken Monk · 11-08-2008, 05:19 AM

dusk are u mc? or just write verses

DVSK · 11-08-2008, 11:16 AM

MC before anything^^ i got a mixtape, ep, and another tape in the works.

Ritter · 11-08-2008, 11:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dusk

MC before anything^^ i got a mixtape, ep, and another tape in the works.

Can I find them in the Audio Booth?

DVSK · 11-08-2008, 11:39 AM

no^^ but i think our old (our being my group) has some stuff on myspace..

www.myspace.com/justicelegion

DVSK · 11-08-2008, 03:40 PM

ok guys, good one, thanks alot daliff, i havent been as consitent as of late, but i appreciate the battle.....thanks to voters aswell...closing thread.

11-04-2008, 11:04 PM	#1
daliff89 The Lyrical Anomaly Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Beckley, WV Posts: 176 Rep Power: 0	daliff89 -vs- Dusk (Winner) ummm we'll do 16 lines i guess.... you drop first or i will, regardless, second dude doesn't feed on first dude's verse...... __________________ http://www.youtube.com/BackPorchBernie

11-05-2008, 09:35 AM	#2
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	ill go first, but im going to school now, then work, so if u want to go first, by all means...so this battle doesnt take forever. __________________

11-05-2008, 11:11 AM	#3
Havok Saint Michael Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 101 Rep Power: 0	i thought u didnt go to school 2day cuz u no ... the sickness __________________ The War Angel

11-05-2008, 11:58 AM	#4
daliff89 The Lyrical Anomaly Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Beckley, WV Posts: 176 Rep Power: 0	the dinner bell is ringing, i'm starving, i'll eat you like pad thai... easily leavin' him bleedin' even if his maxi pad's dry... i smack guys 'til hats fly from their head to their steps... holdin' boulders, throw 'em, show him the REAL deadliest catch... measure your neck with piano wire, death is heavily repped... from dusk 'til dawn, beatin' this pussy up, somethin' i'll never forget... forever the best, the exalted one, i talk, you run... i strike swifty, aggrevated assault with tongues... i cough, you're done, flows are plague ridden... i write your twilight, sun setting on your vague existence... resistence is forbidden, if you forget, i'll take a horrible angle... all your dickriding boys get mangled when i 'war with angels'... a gory 'stranger', minus the masks, i refuse to quit... the rude shit from these two lips leaves school kids with bruised ribs... i'm too sick, this dude's bitch, nothing but a pathological lair... break his dome with Satan's throne, then throw some logs on the fire... __________________ http://www.youtube.com/BackPorchBernie

11-05-2008, 07:28 PM	#5
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	you and me, my methods inscrutable, humanly unfathomable attack ya mourners via Beautiful eulogy radical fluid spat, youll have to take a sabbatical since the inhuman's usually content; his paddle ball complex has u attached to constantly bounce jaws off my south paw, leave with palm prints as i pronounce ya'll gone since my mouth roared, Daliff is an anomaly difference in anatomy has em witnessin atrocities ill hit em with a battery, while spittin my philosophy detach his knees, take advantage and practice gynaecology Maverick like John McCain, elbow drop on your brain beggin for life like u was on the train, hit u with lil kicks like im Elaine, benis, the dentist, relentless when he's spittin like Llamas, a menace to yo mama's, u better put the lifts in your loafers giving odors, it aint over til Daliff is a gopher underground son..eloels. __________________

11-06-2008, 07:28 AM	#6
Drunken Monk Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 7,738 Rep Power: 41	i vote for dusk

11-06-2008, 11:00 AM	#7
THE MASON Winter is Coming Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: The North Posts: 11,998 Rep Power: 119	Dusk wasnt really feelin daliff's style but still a nice verse dusks was just easier to flo and had better punches __________________ Click 4 More Beats and Rhymes ELITE STATUS

11-06-2008, 11:25 AM	#8
Ritter 'Section 9' Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 5,073 Rep Power: 19	Vote - Dusk daliff was fresh but if he expanded his verse to more than just 8 punchlines, it would've been better. It feels as if he wrote shit on pieces of paper, line for line on different occasions and just threw them together. Dusk had better vocabulary and was far more creative, the flow was kinda better, so there you have it. daliff is fresh though.

11-06-2008, 07:16 PM	#9
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	guys, major props, but in all fairness, Drunken Monk needs to elaborate. __________________

11-07-2008, 03:01 PM	#10
adedwutang Rap Name: SkiLLs Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Mace Ave, BX, nYc cuzin Age: 23 Posts: 625 Rep Power: 9	daliff had a nice verse and props for that, but i think dusk puts another one under his belt with this one, the flow the vocab and punches were on point, but respect to ya homie stay up and keep battlin. -peace __________________ "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/ cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/" Follow me @SkiLLs456

11-08-2008, 05:19 AM	#11
Drunken Monk Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 7,738 Rep Power: 41	dusk are u mc? or just write verses

11-08-2008, 11:16 AM	#12
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	MC before anything^^ i got a mixtape, ep, and another tape in the works. __________________

11-08-2008, 11:39 AM	#14
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	no^^ but i think our old (our being my group) has some stuff on myspace.. www.myspace.com/justicelegion __________________

11-08-2008, 03:40 PM	#15
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	ok guys, good one, thanks alot daliff, i havent been as consitent as of late, but i appreciate the battle.....thanks to voters aswell...closing thread. __________________

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