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Old 10-22-2014, 04:48 PM   #1
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Overseer in orbit, central star body enormous/
My power generated, children below absorb it/
Sustaining all life with simple energy emitted/
All powerful father, sight even resists to glimpse this/
Sole controller of the system, egocentric as ever/
Attempt to get close to me, I commence as a shredder/
Clever with any endeavor deadly defense calculated/
The propensity of my intensity is non debated/
Bully foremen inflicts torment on servants of Mother Nature/
Laugh at comedic tries to water the surface while I all day burn/
When will they learn I destroy plant matter at midday/
Yet few nourish prior to my arrival and assist in the slay/
Witness dismay as the frail Mother takes a lengthy beating/
And tries to use less of my energy just aren't succeeding/
With interweaving of gadgets held vital to civilization/
My micro selves managing the screens that they gaze in/
Perpetuating a cycle they swore never to continue/
But my genetics multiplied into beings is more than they can attend to/
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Old 10-22-2014, 06:29 PM   #2
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Witness dismay as the frail Mother takes a lengthy beating/
And tries to use less of my energy just aren't succeeding/
With interweaving of gadgets held vital to civilization/
My micro selves managing the screens that they gaze in/
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Old 10-22-2014, 07:30 PM   #3
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Old 10-27-2014, 02:49 PM   #4
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Old 10-28-2014, 07:30 AM   #5
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