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You da man Notik!!!
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Finally, some cats replied lol...I scoped this the first night you were makin the thread, some serious heat in there....not surprising its cats form the audio booth commenting though, I guess the kids in this text forum ain't ready for real lyrics
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Fuck The Law.
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hell yea...goodLooks. peace to the true.
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Believe me…
I’ve been gone awhile. But reading the evening, is easy Cuz in the dark I see a meeting – Clash. Ebony matter …Ivory One against the other - though together strength is binding What ever how ever through any weather….timeless! Violence… streaked across the air laced in velvet… Soft touches of deaths glare encased the hell sent Images made to create thoughts, visions an dreams… Separating the friendship of adults, kids’n teens – So crystal clean yet pissed’n mean, were the flicks of light Struggling for the chance to be fixed within the sights Of child that’s colorblind though he has an eye for the sky… An will never grasp the concept of a coloring book – But he’s enchanted by the darkness a star can provide The spark in his mind, leaded him to stare at the war That waged between two colors on the step of gods door It’s so effortless, fall…downward comes a tear from the night But as it hit’s his palm it forms into a bird and takes flight Back into a life in the clouds…safe upon heavens nest Now it looks down in hopes to see the children blessed But yet…all I see is frowns, encased in hopeful wishing Stargazing into midnight reaching for blissful teaching Handed down from a castaway god, lost was the meaning Of the sky and the stars, entities who fought to be featured In the skyline, limelight, high rise into color…. Ever wonder why the night’s sky is black and the stars resemble each other? It was the struggle…battle, the darkness black…was shackled Left to stand alone and hoist the stars upon its back, a hassle… Bestowed upon by those so bright, gods touch - a flame of white The king to some but devil to many, resting on a blanket night… So tell me now, oh fair child…who does the sky belong to? The slaves that hold it up or the stars that shine upon you… Make a wish and shot the star, then crush its blackened heart And you might witness a shooting star piercing through the dark – Was it our lord’s choice to start a war? Before Africans and Irish god created a star… Before Mexicans and Asians Jesus slept for our scorn… So why did this battle of races get waged on steps of there home? The sky so black and stars shine white – master commanding a slave… Make a wish my son and go to sleep…so this battle can end in day.
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dat whole scroll is sick^ but these lines are mu fav,
its like every thing contrdicts its self, man, thats good writting man! shits banannas sun! 1 Quote:
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Droppin Heat Rocks On These Fucks
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I am Heaven.
If all of us bleed, some kind of emotion for life I guarantee I wouldn’t always be tokin’ the pipe Just to get away – step away – fade into midnight With a with weathered gaze spit thunder an let light Spread forth a sound that fills the mind of an unknown Corrupt soul it’s what though – bullshit or just flow?? FUCK NO – it’s evolution of one whole Body and mind elevate into the hallways of time Speaking with gods yelling FOLLOW ME CHRIST b/c if all us die please lord let me borrow a dime or a dollar cuz my thoughts go up in price all of the time (to speak of such evil drives one mad) Well I am, my blood brews from Lucifer’s caldron On my right stands god but his crucifix callin’ On my shoulder rests an angel with a look so appalling And in my hand holds a cloud that prevents her from fallin’ JUST LET ME GO – if I gotta than I’ll pick desert cove Hide behind a mirage and weave sandstorms with my flow Incredible those who mold un-edible souls that hold The strength of a titan in my heart where it’s bestowed The dark cherubs who roam for larks, heralds and hoes Get shot down from the art of a cocked bow and arrow Magnificent – those with narrow minds listen quick Confess emotions efficient or be on my demission list Incisions hit the skin of many, children play in pools of blood Cuz the water of our earth is to be used by those who love... Freedom, life, and memories of our time – Not the treason, strife and enemies of our kind Though deadly is the rhyme my medley beats your mind Control is hopeless and one must seek brilliance just to find Heaven – in a physical form cuz where were living is hell So when you get up at dawn please let ya spirit rebel’ Against any faith you have and believe in your self Because we don’t need wings to fly, heavens here on the ground Look at me…
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ayo its I exquisite, tidal flow rhyme precision
the wild style chemist with vials of pure sickness... I perform exhibits deliver the bone twitching - skin to bone rippin the click an you drop quick bitch raw wild, I shape planets they all round till the stars collide an the sun burns'em - all down we strong family kick in the door bloaw with a blunt dro check it son, hydroponic flow rap geromio hunting for his only god an soul deep inside a hole covered by dynamite set to blow I am illness times a million the realness inside a sealent sign an sell it i'm the feeling you get when the vibe is illing let'em know, style of destruction breaking the mold if you listen to the radio maybe you better go... I sit on a pedestal on my level is pure greatness a rebel born to meddle with devils ignore satan destruction for the nation, take a stand an live dont be patient for the taken is anything that you give i'll pleasently crack ya ribs, you pop first you hang neck broke up in the stairwell looking like hussein I grip the mic deranged apocalyptic explode lyricism slam the system while searing ya central nodes no fear in my essence though my spirit a sentinal sent to tear up any foe while i script the intagible
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What a crazy lyricist here!
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yo Notik u got serious skill homie, the depth and pure lyricism in ya shit is ILL, i'd like 2 hear some solo stuff from u tho , not baggin on ya crew or nuthin i just would really like 2 hear somethin solo from u , respect homie word up
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Fuck The Law.
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no doubt Sleep. I got the solo joint on the way, just collecting beats right now. thanks....
check My soul was scorned… Many years before, I peered through doors’n seared the floor With such fiery intent…my lion’s heart fizzled beneath the roar Asleep was all, the people? Gone…nobody home to hear my screams So I coaxed a fearless dream which toked the air i breathed… And this is where I’d seen careless scenes, of people dead’n gone then i retreated to waking life to spread the words of the once born I preached so often… Set your own path no matter how hideous the walk is… Never put a pause on life – there is no fucking video game option. Always stand tall and proud but remain grounded in modesty… Whether you’re a kid in the park, or a pre - destined model teen A freshman tackling varsity or the big man on the court… Every move you make ultimately alters the future we forge… Yet it’s either destiny set with exceptions – Or manifest destiny blessed with no intervention. That allows a person to neglect the bad things and strive for acceptance. We walk our own path Only you can decide… Whether you want my dreams Or be yourself on the outside
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Leak.
Leave Everyone....Anyone....Killed his heart was pierced - twin darts harped the air... the once mighty warrior... now walks with fear. hand in hand with the devils daughter, while land and man were left for slaughter.. fallen soldiers accepted the demons offer; neglected the father and stepped into horror rejecting apostles then leapt into sorrow... after agreeing to bring death to tomorrow. day one. now an adult, returning from wars long won the child matures with every step chasing the sun... embracing the young - greeting the old... hateful to some...on his way home, the scene would unfold crossing the land of crosses, axes, battles and bones... magical knomes surronded the man - not giving much room while elven archers peered down perched atop mushrooms... ogres and goblins guarded the inn... so tired yet so hopeful he started to pardon his way in. but he did so to his own demise...behold the cries of boastful lives controled to die by souless binds... THERE WORLD IS MINE... night falls after getting used to the darkening sound... our hero begins to quietly settle down. a goblet of honey ale nestles gently in his hand as he onlooks the company that begins to stare... thoughts of wonder, pondered... raced across his mind "do they recognize me?" or think of ways i can die. wearing a shroud of black mystery, a dwarf approaches weaving in an out of peasents - the nights sound was boastful as he sat, the warrior grasped at his chest.. revealing the small medallion bearing his family crest; now the dwarf, stern in tone.. asked his name and rank but suddenly stood in suprise, "sorry sire...i must be frank" but of course..."i thought you had died in the last battle campaign" the warrior laughed and locked hands with the burly brute... announcing he has returned to his land and is ready to rule. "SUCH GREAT NEWS" day two. rise my devils an demons and ride into troublesome evenings now is the time to stop hiding and find all the lovers and heathens.. kill the souls of many and hold the roads bestowing on plenty the same horrible ending...you once recieved, hunt the dreams of childrens sleep and fill the street with shrills an screams... AND WITH THERE BLOOD I WILL FEAST overlooking the valley where he once played as a kid... our warrior smiles... then suddenly begins to worry and shakes his head in denile; as 2000 troops of the dead march towards the land of no sin. lead by a wizard thought to be dead.. hell bent on killing women an children, until his bloodlust was fed the warrior turned now, taking on the role of king and leader.. forests' burned down, all his soldiers gathered in grievence. doubting there courage...the last battle took many men 20 against 2000 doesnt provide a very good chance... "sire..what do you bid of us?" WE FIGHT UNTIL THE END...ONLY TO HEAVEN WE WILL RUN night falls with passion they ran, into the valley with swords raised... only to meet an enemy that would surely deploy pain; the "great" battle lasted all of 30 seconds... the wizards legions smirked as they attacked them with vengace.. this time they would not lose...the town now - gone up in flames as the once mighty warrior seemed to run away. leaking blood from his chest deserting his people... accepting his fate - cuz on this night good didnt perish evil.
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I’ll gash open my forearm and sail through epiphanies
Specifically, through an ordinary but striking occurrence… I’ll spit the breeze on lighting and ride through the current Enticing the sea, but listen…my life’s no deterrent As I’m guided through this empty pot just dying to stir it Aligning my courage, guided through fires a furnace Burns deep within my soul - along with a lion… Who purrs when its roars been solemnly silenced In time I’m a servant, never crying but violently searching Counting away the seconds as my essence retires its purpose… Reside in the hurt when, my island is corrupted by sirens Singing songs of simple spells, succulent seductive to eye lids. But words from a demon can never hold this poet back I’ll plant stems that store water as my utopia overflows in the cracks…
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some ill writtens notik
crazy shit in that last piece Quote:
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