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Old 01-27-2009, 08:01 AM   #1
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Sup All ... been a while since ive put something 2gether, so little quick freestyle ... please let me know what u think. Peace !


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Vision of a Serpent
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Intro ...

Yo, Creation a big bang,
synchronized angle river dance
water in flow trance
separate .. the earth .. by the border of the atlas
leave man to find the balance ... but hah, NO CHANCE !


yo ! check"heard" ...
chess board battle play the economy teler~kinesis
countries fall, the king control the pillars, the marble pieces
re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus
and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus
then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us
then feed us, lies fried with blood of a swine stirred with a monkey spine
to force us to incline to the brain of reptile back to the pyramids of the Nile
slavery of the pheroes, no heroes or staffs to split the social murals
illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus
spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city of knowledge written on papyrus
replaced with tubes or photons bombed reflecting their corrupt views
etching images into the skull of the youth via shows and cartoons
truth to a minimal while falsehood subliminal
the horn of the devils penetrate the soul of the political criminal
pierce through their conscious, hands, feet and third eye temple
tie the strings to the orifices and watch then dance speeches to the masters cymbal
the symbol ? simple, left view float like a grape above the lips and the dimple
powered by the forces, rearrange natural sources in the form of miracle,
allude the cynical by rearranging the tables in the fusion of the periodics
new elements luminate the sight of the blind with vision of the aquatics
never still but full of ripples so u never see your true image as a reflection of the sermon
the mirror has been shattered, trapped in slit in the eye of the vision of a serpent !



Peace Out
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Old 01-28-2009, 03:23 PM   #2
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re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus
and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus
then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us

illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus
spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city of knowledge written on papyrus
replaced with tubes or photons bombed reflecting their corrupt views
etching images into the skull of the youth via shows and cartoons
truth to a minimal while falsehood subliminal
the horn of the devils penetrate the soul of the political criminal
pierce through their conscious, hands, feet and third eye temple
tie the strings to the orifices and watch then dance speeches to the masters cymbal
the symbol ? simple, left view float like a grape above the lips and the dimple
powered by the forces, rearrange natural sources in the form of miracle,
allude the cynical by rearranging the tables in the fusion of the periodics
new elements luminate the sight of the blind with vision of the aquatics
never still but full of ripples so u never see your true image as a reflection of the sermon
the mirror has been shattered, trapped in slit in the eye of the vision of a serpent !
I was gonna try to dissect this and just highlight the lines I like the most, but most of this is something I would call to anotherz attentiona as an example of greatness. THIS is ur freestyle? Get a thread up couzin and see the gods manifest with u.
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Old 01-29-2009, 06:35 AM   #3
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Sup 5KutSkeleton

Thanx for the feedback brother ... yeah its been about 5 years since i last wrote something. Felt like writing so just got on and thought id post something up 2 c ppls feedback/comments/criticisms, u know just 2 get back into the swing of things !

Once again, thanx for the heads up cuz, will definitely encourage me 2 get back into dropping some more rhymes

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Old 01-29-2009, 11:16 AM   #4
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synchronized angle river dance
water in flow trance
chess board battle play the economy teler~kinesis
countries fall, the king control the pillars, the marble pieces
re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus
and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus
then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us
then feed us, lies fried with blood of a swine stirred with a monkey spine
to force us to incline to the brain of reptile back to the pyramids of the Nile
slavery of the pheroes, no heroes or staffs to split the social murals
illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus
spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city


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Old 01-30-2009, 10:16 AM   #5
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Sup J.T.S

Thanx for the feedback. u picked alot of my fav lines

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Old 02-06-2009, 07:57 PM   #6
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No More feedback ??? man this forum has changes since 2003 ! ppl used 2 give both good and bad feedback to help one develop !
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Old 02-09-2009, 02:54 PM   #7
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not a lotta feed nowadayz sun. itz division in its longest form, chargin forward in this empty and lawless forum...
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the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
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fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
screaming shots, police and chalk,
wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...

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