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Old 09-10-2005, 06:14 PM   #1
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Ive never posted lyrics on here but I write time to time. I think im allright but check this out and let me know what yall think...

yo this freestyle is for u fake MC wannabees,
ill match ur eyes to my black and blue wallabees,
haha liked that didnt you,
i only drop hot lines like the wu,
so u 50 rhymers better hold ur tounge,
cuz i havnt even begun to stung,
so next time bring sum real lyrics,
dont steal shit, do it on ur own merit,
but it really dont matter,
cuz my rhymes are phatter,
yours is straight bladder,
im sick of cleanin up shit on the battle floor,
peckerface killah aka MC janitor,
taming weak mc's like a matador
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Old 09-10-2005, 06:27 PM   #2
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the flow was kind of awkward and the rhyme scheme was really quite borin, u only rhymed at the end of the lines and only multied single words with other compatible words
some of the punch lines was ok but "i only drop hot lines like the wu" was weak as hell mayne

keep at it mayne
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