Eric Unseen Vs Vernakula ( Eric WINS ) - Wu-Tang Corp. - Official Site of the Wu-Tang Clan

Visionz · 09-10-2005, 09:03 PM

2 verses, first to five explained votes take it. I'll start it off

Mike Tyson at 20, I'll smash any competitor
Your shit is garbage, you need a ghostwriter and an editor
Stepping up is a real bad decision
Bout to get a beatdown like a nazi in an all-black prison
You won't make it out alive of my verbal cell block
Shanked in gut as soon as the gates unlocked
Then hang you from the rafters with your own intestines
Intense lesson for anyone that holds my skills in question
Then I cut the cord to watch ur fake-ass splatter
No ones fuckin with my ill-gray matter
You little roach, you scatter when the light comes on
Run for the bomb-shelter, this is rap Armagedeon
Puttin an end to you, ya poser MC
Laughin while you perish at a thousand degrees

Grim Reapa · 09-10-2005, 09:18 PM

You mike Tyson at 20 fuck u him at thirty/
Your oblique blows dont hit that hard when u say they hurt me/
U say u'll hang me by my intestines fuck i'll hang u by ur entrails/
In great detail, ur whack rhymes i will derail/
And I will prevaile, choke u till ur eyes roll back and ur faces pale/
Cuz rhymin me is mutha fuckin futile/
Ur rhymes are whack child obcenity a Geoffrey Dahmer type petefile/
U think u can but u cant match a great mindz style/
Get ur shit together for the next verse oblideration/
I'll jus turn u in to a statistical # scientific notation/

nice verse 1

Grim Reapa · 09-10-2005, 09:24 PM

sry to be a downer but i can only do 1 round right now + 2 rounders r horrible no1 votes c'mon

Visionz · 09-10-2005, 09:33 PM

I wanted a chance to reply to a verse, fuck it if no1 votes, I like the competition. Feel you thou

Grim Reapa · 09-10-2005, 09:35 PM

whatever man i don tink it'll matter cuz urs was tight as hell but it aint worth it really i've been in the same boat homieu can change ur verse tho

Visionz · 09-10-2005, 10:07 PM

Scientific notation?
I'm an atom-smasher, prepare for scientific disenagration
I'll crush you to particles smaller than molecules
Just to prove that no MC is an obstacle
I'll hop over you like a track star does hurdles
You make me sick to my stomach like when everclear makes the milk curdle
You said Dahmer but I'm more like Charles Manson
I'm the mastermind of murderous expansions
I'll stab a pitchfork thru you're stomach like you lived in that mansion
Then they'll post your death on the evening news
Scaring your whole family permantely like a shitty tatoo.
Hell, even I'll pour some liquor in memory of you.
Tombstone reads "Masta Genius, unwise in which battles to choose"

Respect homie, I know you can come with it.

Grim Reapa · 09-10-2005, 10:18 PM

Your rap mentallity dont fuckin scare me at all/
Cuz rappin against you is like rappin against a whiter version of Paul Wall/
scientific desinagration? Now ur speaking verbak diarreaha dysentary/
Next time look scientific notation in a scientific dictionary/
Charles Manson? u dont even speak well rounded rhymes/
Fuck it I'm Helter Skelter jus lyrically stabbed u 55 times/ (get it?)
U might be droppin dimes i be droppin dollars so a penny u might wanna pench/
u have a mansion now? Ur rhymes dont even make fuckin cents/ (i liked that one)

good battle homie

Visionz · 09-10-2005, 10:36 PM

good battle indeed. much respect due. peace

Sicka than aidZ · 09-10-2005, 10:40 PM

i think eric unseen took it cuz his flow was on point the whole way. the last verses from both of yall was tighht an even but masta's 1st verse was pretty shitty. it wasnt prepared well.
eric unseen's punches put u down masta.

vote=eric

Grim Reapa · 09-10-2005, 10:42 PM

sicka tell me what oblique means?

Grim Reapa · 09-10-2005, 10:47 PM

jus playin but ur right sicka wasn't prepared well its says verbak in it

Sicka than aidZ · 09-10-2005, 11:09 PM

i never said he was any good, i think you coulda both done better, you did better than me man, both of you. be sure to peep me verse teknickle or somthin. ill type it up now. peace

TeknicelStylez · 09-10-2005, 11:31 PM

Vote goes to Eric, masta you held shit down but I dont think you reached full potential. Not in the mood today?

Grim Reapa · 09-10-2005, 11:34 PM

not feelin enrgy homie lol not feelin my usual flow

I jus didn't wanna get embarrased is all

TeknicelStylez · 09-10-2005, 11:37 PM

Lol sall good we all got them days, the verse I wrote to sicka I was half asleep. I havent slept in about 46 hours now....

09-10-2005, 09:03 PM	#1
Visionz The People's Champ Join Date: Sep 2005 Age: 34 Posts: 13,663 Rep Power: 48	Eric Unseen Vs Vernakula ( Eric WINS ) 2 verses, first to five explained votes take it. I'll start it off Mike Tyson at 20, I'll smash any competitor Your shit is garbage, you need a ghostwriter and an editor Stepping up is a real bad decision Bout to get a beatdown like a nazi in an all-black prison You won't make it out alive of my verbal cell block Shanked in gut as soon as the gates unlocked Then hang you from the rafters with your own intestines Intense lesson for anyone that holds my skills in question Then I cut the cord to watch ur fake-ass splatter No ones fuckin with my ill-gray matter You little roach, you scatter when the light comes on Run for the bomb-shelter, this is rap Armagedeon Puttin an end to you, ya poser MC Laughin while you perish at a thousand degrees

09-10-2005, 09:18 PM	#2
Grim Reapa Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIAMI Posts: 941 Rep Power: 0	Re: Takin' on whoever..... You mike Tyson at 20 fuck u him at thirty/ Your oblique blows dont hit that hard when u say they hurt me/ U say u'll hang me by my intestines fuck i'll hang u by ur entrails/ In great detail, ur whack rhymes i will derail/ And I will prevaile, choke u till ur eyes roll back and ur faces pale/ Cuz rhymin me is mutha fuckin futile/ Ur rhymes are whack child obcenity a Geoffrey Dahmer type petefile/ U think u can but u cant match a great mindz style/ Get ur shit together for the next verse oblideration/ I'll jus turn u in to a statistical # scientific notation/ nice verse 1

09-10-2005, 09:24 PM	#3
Grim Reapa Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIAMI Posts: 941 Rep Power: 0	Re: Takin' on whoever..... sry to be a downer but i can only do 1 round right now + 2 rounders r horrible no1 votes c'mon

09-10-2005, 09:33 PM	#4
Visionz The People's Champ Join Date: Sep 2005 Age: 34 Posts: 13,663 Rep Power: 48	Re: Takin' on whoever..... I wanted a chance to reply to a verse, fuck it if no1 votes, I like the competition. Feel you thou

09-10-2005, 09:35 PM	#5
Grim Reapa Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIAMI Posts: 941 Rep Power: 0	Re: Takin' on whoever..... whatever man i don tink it'll matter cuz urs was tight as hell but it aint worth it really i've been in the same boat homieu can change ur verse tho

09-10-2005, 10:07 PM	#6
Visionz The People's Champ Join Date: Sep 2005 Age: 34 Posts: 13,663 Rep Power: 48	Re: Takin' on whoever..... Scientific notation? I'm an atom-smasher, prepare for scientific disenagration I'll crush you to particles smaller than molecules Just to prove that no MC is an obstacle I'll hop over you like a track star does hurdles You make me sick to my stomach like when everclear makes the milk curdle You said Dahmer but I'm more like Charles Manson I'm the mastermind of murderous expansions I'll stab a pitchfork thru you're stomach like you lived in that mansion Then they'll post your death on the evening news Scaring your whole family permantely like a shitty tatoo. Hell, even I'll pour some liquor in memory of you. Tombstone reads "Masta Genius, unwise in which battles to choose" Respect homie, I know you can come with it.

09-10-2005, 10:18 PM	#7
Grim Reapa Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIAMI Posts: 941 Rep Power: 0	Re: Takin' on whoever..... Your rap mentallity dont fuckin scare me at all/ Cuz rappin against you is like rappin against a whiter version of Paul Wall/ scientific desinagration? Now ur speaking verbak diarreaha dysentary/ Next time look scientific notation in a scientific dictionary/ Charles Manson? u dont even speak well rounded rhymes/ Fuck it I'm Helter Skelter jus lyrically stabbed u 55 times/ (get it?) U might be droppin dimes i be droppin dollars so a penny u might wanna pench/ u have a mansion now? Ur rhymes dont even make fuckin cents/ (i liked that one) good battle homie

09-10-2005, 10:36 PM	#8
Visionz The People's Champ Join Date: Sep 2005 Age: 34 Posts: 13,663 Rep Power: 48	Re: Takin' on whoever..... good battle indeed. much respect due. peace

09-10-2005, 10:40 PM	#9
Sicka than aidZ JOKER FAM Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Westside connected (westcoast) Age: 33 Posts: 15,267 Rep Power: 41	Re: Takin' on whoever..... i think eric unseen took it cuz his flow was on point the whole way. the last verses from both of yall was tighht an even but masta's 1st verse was pretty shitty. it wasnt prepared well. eric unseen's punches put u down masta. vote=eric __________________ "BACK TO FUKIN WERK 1 OF YOUR THREADZ JUST GOT DUSTED" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxb9kvJpE4w

09-10-2005, 10:42 PM	#10
Grim Reapa Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIAMI Posts: 941 Rep Power: 0	Re: Takin' on whoever..... sicka tell me what oblique means?

09-10-2005, 10:47 PM	#11
Grim Reapa Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIAMI Posts: 941 Rep Power: 0	Re: Takin' on whoever..... jus playin but ur right sicka wasn't prepared well its says verbak in it

09-10-2005, 11:09 PM	#12
Sicka than aidZ JOKER FAM Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Westside connected (westcoast) Age: 33 Posts: 15,267 Rep Power: 41	Re: Takin' on whoever..... i never said he was any good, i think you coulda both done better, you did better than me man, both of you. be sure to peep me verse teknickle or somthin. ill type it up now. peace __________________ "BACK TO FUKIN WERK 1 OF YOUR THREADZ JUST GOT DUSTED" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxb9kvJpE4w

09-10-2005, 11:31 PM	#13
TeknicelStylez I'll Fuck You Up Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: New Jeruz Age: 27 Posts: 9,913 Rep Power: 31	Re: Takin' on whoever..... Vote goes to Eric, masta you held shit down but I dont think you reached full potential. Not in the mood today?

09-10-2005, 11:34 PM	#14
Grim Reapa Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIAMI Posts: 941 Rep Power: 0	Re: Takin' on whoever..... not feelin enrgy homie lol not feelin my usual flow I jus didn't wanna get embarrased is all

09-10-2005, 11:37 PM	#15
TeknicelStylez I'll Fuck You Up Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: New Jeruz Age: 27 Posts: 9,913 Rep Power: 31	Re: Takin' on whoever..... Lol sall good we all got them days, the verse I wrote to sicka I was half asleep. I havent slept in about 46 hours now....

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