*Verses In* daliff89 VS. beautifulrock RD. 1

[Eradicate]

Im going to try this tournament with a poll, even though it doesn't really make any difference. Every vote has to be WELL explained, and should abide by these categories:

Punchlines
Personals
Flow
Creativity
Nameplay

for close calls or nailbiters, additional categories should be considered:

Multis
Wordplay
Vocab


If you feel a vote is unjust or biased let me or Dusk know and we will throw it out accordingly.

For every battle it will be the first to five,
or 3-0 will be considered a KO
and 4-1 will be considered a TKO

To move things along quickly, I think there should only be one verse and NO feeding.
It's not fair if one person get's to feed and the other not.

Every verse should consist of 16 lines.

*Everyone should have 2 days from the time they check-in there battle to drop there verse or they are DQ'd.

[Eradicate]

daliff89's verse:

don't have to read his verse to know it's things he's not gon do to me...
my shit has him falling quick, like Universal dropping Lumidee...

honestly, i've read the Section 9 rhymes, y'all need to stop dude, it's weak...
it gets ugly when i turn your dark days to bright nights, i rock beautifully...

light up the evening sky like sunsets, if he thinks i've begun yet...
i'll have to get on some loud shit, disembowelment with these foul spits...

this proud mick will leave the ground split, somebody tell this joke it's over...
how you gonna match a mountaineer with a musket against a golden gopher???

he'll see his shadow, cause every time i spit, you folks should know it's colder...
barely hittin' with his writtens, my freestyle punches explode his shoulder...

you shoulda sold your soul ta Satan in fact, the way i'm rapin' this cat...
his career is finished, looking like he played for the Raiders, in black...

i'm Bo Jackson, there's no relaxin', because i'm layin' him flat...
faithful men battle The Hand of God, send only athiests back...

after he gives up praying, he's gon have to hate the boy...
pulled a bad first round, better go argue with Eradicate some more.

[Eradicate]

beautifulrock's verse:

halfway through your first verse you say shit I gotta begin again
While your fans throw rocks at you like pissed off palestinians

and then again, maybe your hands are like Brian Finneran
the way you squeeze a mic like a cock, don't act all innocent

Don't get incensed, pay the rent like a good tenant's been
Bend the laws of physics when my tongue twists and spins again

thirty four indents of your forehead from the ill villain
You're pining over Boyz II Men? a Phillie is your only friend?

and to that end, you never buckled my spirit, didn't make a dent
Even Edison ain't got shit on the lines as i'm inventin' 'em

you're strugglin' as I'm drinkin' Guiness down at Bennigan's
Like a crazy Irishman, I'm tired of your shenanigans

time for a banana man, Avid Killing thirty-seven ten
I fire blindly on innocents, like a coked up African

[beautifulrock]

I misremembered the rules and thought it was more than one verse per customer. You dropped the wrong one but whatever

[Visionz]

So you sent two verses and prefer the other one?^

[beautifulrock]

The other one mentions my opponent by name and since it's only 1 verse it's kind of a waste but I'm cool with whatever. Don't wanna be reneging or something. Hats off to my opponent for a nice verse and good luck.

[Eradicate]

I really don't know if i can change it so late, didn't know you wrote two home-skillet.
and your 2 lines short on that verse, i suppose you can add two more lines to it since noones voted yet

[Visionz]

Daliff had the bettter verse with the harder hitting punches that got personal with it, Brock dropped a good verse but it wasn't personal enough seems like something you could say to anybody. If either of yall would like to get some more feedback both positive and negative pm me for an honest opinion, I don't wanna say too much hear to avoid swaying things one way or the other. peace to both yall

[Eradicate]

This battle is done. VOTE away...

[Visionz]

Originally Posted by Eradicate

I really don't know if i can change it so late, didn't know you wrote two home-skillet.
and your 2 lines short on that verse, i suppose you can add two more lines to it since noones voted yet

I can wait if yall want before I acutally cast but I've read 'em over each three or four times. I don't see two lines changing how feel regardless of how dope they are (I look line by line but also the verse as a whole as well)

[Eradicate]

ya go ahead vote, he knew he was suppose to write 16 anyways.. if he wants to add it ill add it later, but ya vote and strike the poll.. think i might like the poll

Punchlines - daliff89
Personals - daliff89
Flow - tie
Creativity - tie
Nameplay - daliff89
Multis - daliff89
Wordplay - beautifulrock
Vocab - beautifulrock

Vote : daliff89

[DVSK]

Punchlines - daliff
Personals - Daliff
Flow - brock
Creativity - daliff
close one but, daliff's was a bit more agressive, also..as far as personals...we know brocks wasnt at all cuz he sent the wrong verse..eloels. good shit.
Nameplay

[daliff89]

i came in to say good luck.....

but if 3-0 is a KO......

good battle though.

[Visionz]

Originally Posted by daliff89

i came in to say good luck.....

but if 3-0 is a KO......

good battle though.

record timing for votes in here I'm sure but are we going simple majority or what? don't think the guidelines there where ever established but if 16 people are voting seems like it'd take more than 3 for the W

[Eradicate]

I don't see anything wrong with the votes..

so i don't think he would?

you know these battles are going to get votes so much faster now


guidelines are established

i predicted not everyone was going to vote, but if people that want to keep voting maybe we'll higher the number of people for a win.