Shizzah VS. Drunken Monk RD. 1

[Eradicate]

Im going to try this tournament with a poll, even though it doesn't really make any difference. Every vote has to be WELL explained, and should abide by these categories:

Punchlines
Personals
Flow
Creativity
Nameplay

for close calls or nailbiters, additional categories should be considered:

Multis
Wordplay
Vocab


If you feel a vote is unjust or biased let me or Dusk know and we will throw it out accordingly.

For every battle it will be the first to five,
or 3-0 will be considered a KO
and 4-1 will be considered a TKO

To move things along quickly, I think there should only be one verse and NO feeding.
It's not fair if one person get's to feed and the other not.

Every verse should consist of 16 lines.

*Everyone should have 2 days from the time they check-in there battle to drop there verse or they are DQ'd.

[Eradicate]

* I have received no verses for this battle.

[Drunken Monk]

ok today u will receive

[Drunken Monk]

im waiting shizzah he starts

[Ritter]

I'll write it today, in a few hours perhaps

[Drunken Monk]

my round


yo sittin here, spitting raps was my last past time
used to cruise da streetz, bumpin eazy from da alpine/

how fine, are tha words im spit, n neva hesitate
cuz they got sooo much shine that you niggas always hate/

neva phase, me, because im a fuckin famtastic monk, i can handle this
growin with shaolin disciples, where ugly niggas go straight scandelous/
started blowing trees, and spitting dope rhymes, that shine more than gold mines
put the greens slowed me down, so rakced up some coke lines/

so im back at it, wit bad habits, like a monk too drunken
call your moma soon, too late, the last cup is taken/


english isnt my first language

[Ritter]

My calm before the storm leaves families in mourn
Take a picture, develop images of limbs torn
Incinerate the mental state, hand you encephalitis
This is power, but even Flava Flav couldn't fight this
Been a long time since I wrote my last rhyme
Accelerate like enzymes I'm still sublime
Rhyme construction tighter than liposuction
Smack the shit out you, compromise your brain functions
Section nine, the nine circles of hell
The swarm, we makin our presence felt
Already got a few victories under my belt
I throw darts, the Temple throws them back to me
I got more dope lines than a cocaine factory
Fuck a drunken monk I came here to slam dunk
Play ball until the last man falls
Sorry monk, but this is the last call

[Ritter]

Sorry I didn't drop the vote in your e-mail or private inbox Erad, I thought since Drunk dropped his here, I should too.

[beautifulrock]

Everyting: Shizzah, he just runs circles around this dude

[DVSK]

try that vote again

[DVSK]

Punchlines - shizzah
Personals-shizzah (by default)
Flow-shizzah
creativity-tie


big ups to monk tho for going out of his comfort zone in a different language. vote-Shiz

[beautifulrock]

Originally Posted by Dusk

try that vote again

why moron, you don't understand fucking english? Do i really have to write the whole thing out? You know what the fuck i meant faggot.

[Eradicate]

well we all know you don't understand instructions very well.

you must vote in complete cat's, and/or explain your vote.

I know this is probably a hard concept for you to grasp, and I know reading isn't your strong point. But give it shot!

[beautifulrock]

Originally Posted by Eradicate

well we all know you don't understand instructions very well.

you must vote in complete cat's, and/or explain your vote.

I know this is probably a hard concept for you to grasp, and I know reading isn't your strong point. But give it shot!

Listen faggot, i'm not going to sit there and critique the whole thing, or explain myself in any way. To me, that's fucking swaying. What do you want me to say? This dude won because the other dude can't speak English? That would be fucked, kinda like this so-called competition is.

[Drunken Monk]

ahhahahahhaah beatifull rock is stoned stfu
shut ur mouth
thank u dusk