My Rhymes

[Threyev]

Every time I open a verse I open my heart
And every time somebody dissed me, I broke em apart
Scribble my lyrics onto a canvas, my flow is an art
A few things I expect them lames to know from the start:
I expose fakers and the liars, make the haters all admire
Make rivals say "Fuck him. I can't wait till he retires"
I'm eminent, My epic downfall's their blatant desire
You say you're hot but then retreat once you're playing with fire
They wait for it to expire but food for thought is forever good
Verbal eloquence helps me make statements that you never would
Take a bite out of my rhymes and try to come with something better
I'll spot you a bar or two, don't steal every word and letter
My thoughts are non-restricted, I hate to be contradicted
Wanna dethrone me for this spot?..Mufucka come and get it
Making statements out of hatred, loser accept defeat
I know that battle left you in grief but quietly rest in peace

[Threyev]

all right, this next one is the beginning of a concept thing i'm working on. it'll have chapters and all that, and it's - at this point - getting epic. so, any feedback will be much appreciated, whether on the story or rhyming. thanks in advance.

CHAOS RISING



PROLOGUE
I awake...but that isn't right
I'm confused but there are other reactions to fight
There's darkness everywhere but it's more than the black of the night
This is what you get when there's an utter absence of light
I realize now, that I'm not supposed to be awakened
So I dwell in this darkness, totally embrace it
But suddenly it rushes away, it's scared of me probly
This is the moment that I become aware of the body
An ancient and immortal body, cast away from the dark it wanted
I send thoughts into it and slowly it's responsive
The heart begins pumping blood into aching limbs
The body drinks from that and my quest may begin
My consciousness descends into it, so nimbly
The flesh clothes me, encases me, is me
Now I no longer sense the dark, but feel it lurch at me
Rushes about and then past, on a course into eternity
It's frigid, and I shiver, something I can't control
This enrages me and I let that rage expand my soul
I use the rage to reach into the darkness, to call it and pull it
Warmth pours through my limbs but that's not all of it fully
All I can focus on is the battering darkness, and how it gave me my shiver
This dark flows around me, just like the waters of The River
My mind opens up now like the first time it receives a poem
The thought of the River echoes so loud through my mind I'm shocked that it's indeed my own
It opens my mind like a dam, which goes from a slug to centipede
Mind stretches out, releasing a flood of memories
Unable to move, unable to shrug
For what seems like hours I think of what I was capable of/
But more than that who I was, my identity
Chaos... my entire entity
Chaos... the exhumed slayer
Chaos... the embodiment of human fear, the core of human nature
I feel a smile crack my face, as the River gives me power
Now's the time to be reborn, now I can devour
Lift the lids of my eyes slowly, wish that I could look again
But instead light gathers where my pupils should have been
I let this process begin, making it seem like I'm heartless
Until my eyes create light that gleams through the darkness
The rings surround a hole in the void, make light brightly
This whole is lifeless, but it's through this I see
I lift my arm to shred aching muscles, feel something slide off my shoulder
I catch it instinctively before the River can take it over
Chains... brittle broken chains
My smile widens as I once more remove myself from broken pain
They were around me thousands of years before, to keep my stuck to the River floor
But couldn't hold me forever, that thought is kicked ashore
The magi who made them is gone, the binding as well
Now my ascension will mark the world's declining to hell
My time has come once more, it's all or nothing
The world begs for me, calls for suffering
I raise my arms out straight and make my command
The River bubbles and froths, the world lays in my hand
The River flows into me, absorbed into my body and mind
With this power my mortal shell is starting to rise
The water rushes about me as I depart this riverbed
A black shroud emanates from me and it sits in rest
I let it consume me as my body moves above the surface
I hover for a moment and then disappear, the River deserted




Any feed for THIS one????

[Threyev]

Damn it folks, peep the anecdote that your man just spoke
Demand his quotes that handle folks who get ate up like cantaloupe
This diatribe define the lines inside your mind till final times
I try to find the finest rhymes behind the times of mindless kinds
So clear the fracture, I rock a sentence hop some fences
No fear of capture, not to mention consequences
Inside my skull there's a thousand tomes that allow the poems
To come outta my mouth and roam to enlighten on sound alone
I don't own no kicks but my flow's so sick
Even though it's this backpack homo shit
Asking "Whose promo's this?" you best notice it
So hip and with more hop than pogo sticks
This freaking preacher unleashing ether through screeching speakers
Repeat the leader who keep the fever yet even sweeter
Till the sword is gone take a helping of hell and pour it on
You're in my mind now so welcome to Coruscant

[Threyev]

I'm like two emcees put together, some people's enemy
So put me into the equation, and I'll equal energy
The feeble envy me, and pretend their the best
But I tend to think of that as identity theft
You want beef? Fall back, or you'll regret it like Kennedy
When he took the limo instead of the SUV
I'm in a class by myself, so you can't sit next to me
My flows a disease, you can transmit sexually
Keep fucking you lyrically, can be considered rape
But you're the one who asked me on this dinner date
Thinking you could take all of the food off my plate
Not knowing doing so, would fuel and create
A monstrous beast, who ensues to cremate
Any so called rapper, whose music is fake
My rhymes show maturity, but still show some impurity
Cause my pen sin (pension) like social security
When I kill rappers, I splatter their brains on my shoes
So I can think on my feet, do I have to explain that to you?
Intoxicated on lyrics, so I can abstain from the booze
It ain't complicated physics, but you remain all confused
Don't get mad at me just because I put you out of business
But I still have many enemies that I've vowed to finish
I don't doubt my limits but the edges I'm still rough around
Don't put a crown on my head, instead put a mushroom cloud
That'll serve the function to stop those discussin who I am
I'm the same damn thing that caused destruction in Japan
The same man, responsible for the abduction of your fans
You couldn't stop my flow with a construction of a dam
To go on for this long, fuck it wasn't planned
But I ain't gunna stop, no reduction, I expand
Im gunna leave out nothing for the fans
Even if there only a few, but I have just began
I'm highly motivated, but I'm truly not inspired when
I see these wack ass rappers polluting our environment
The solution's not retirement, not gunna leave it alone
Instead Ill prove to everybody I'm in a league of my own