Muslimah and noel411 collab - Wu-Tang Corp. - Official Site of the Wu-Tang Clan

noel411 · 09-14-2005, 04:45 AM

I'm the white boy, and Muslimah is green with envy.

It seems absurd to record every thought on occurrence,
do we only learn from thoughts stored with permanence?
I use words to create and relate an advertisement,
to those who search, but hasten to learn too quick,
planned lies derived through words pertaining to myth,
analyse each page before you start turning it,
light a flame and contain it, before burning a bridge,
find your "facts" don't exist, like a virgin with kids,
my tongue growing a cyst, so it hurts when I spit,
but my words must be heard to deter ignorance,
sheep herds will disperse when I'm finished with this,
the pretence they rely on diminishing quick,
the blind live their lives behind tenement brick,
while ascribed power players are perfecting their script,
the law is inclined to protecting the rich,
mans fall and decline a perpetual itch,
forget the past over time, but the residue sticks,
our neglect of the truth clouds our view like a mist,
who will lead me to a place better than this,
and reveal what I need to achieve eventual bliss?

I'm in the clutches of Satan, and it's got me debating,
what am I contemplating, and for what am I waiting?

Aspiring to be wise I strive for the ultimate prize
pierce cries advise my truths survive on lies
I arise and revise constantly fearing my demise
With each page I find eternal bliss refines my mind
Is it blind, should I rewind, to what am I confined? /
Find ignorance is entwined with the nucleus of humankind
Limited by time- essentials wait in line behind temporal highs
The waters rise- fires multiply- and winds intensify
We fortify devastation mortified only by an oil price rise
Is this bliss? Or is the world amiss? /
Satan has me in his grips n my hearts forever eclipsed
Debate my failure to outline the scripts
Collapse into pits of decaying stiffs and reminisce
Hear the hiss of a life lost in the world’s deadly mist
For what am I waiting? Does the answer exist? /
Children slit their wrists seeking an existence better than this
Get pissed and hit their heads against bricks as a fix
Transfixed- from birth locked into the money mix
Eternally I seek bliss in a world afflicted with conflict

Two wise minds, but don't see eye to eye,
build a clock side by side, but can't agree on the time,
truth may rise, between the lines we devise,
guilt has locked pride inside, find the key in my mind.

martyr · 09-14-2005, 04:05 PM

...muslimah...

BlaK FuRYaN · 09-14-2005, 04:11 PM

[QUOTE=noel411]I'm the white boy, and Muslimah is green with envy.

It seems absurd to record every thought on occurrence,
do we only learn from thoughts stored with permanence?
I use words to create and relate an advertisement,
to those who search, but hasten to learn too quick,
planned lies derived through words pertaining to myth,
analyse each page before you start turning it,
light a flame and contain it, before burning a bridge,
find your "facts" don't exist, like a virgin with kids,
my tongue growing a cyst, so it hurts when I spit,
but my words must be heard to deter ignorance,
sheep herds will disperse when I'm finished with this,
the pretence they rely on diminishing quick,
the blind live their lives behind tenement brick,
while ascribed power players are perfecting their script,
the law is inclined to protecting the rich,
mans fall and decline a perpetual itch,
forget the past over time, but the residue sticks,
our neglect of the truth clouds our view like a mist,
who will lead me to a place better than this,
and reveal what I need to achieve eventual bliss?

I'm in the clutches of Satan, and it's got me debating,
what am I contemplating, and for what am I waiting?

Aspiring to be wise I strive for the ultimate prize
pierce cries advise my truths survive on lies
I arise and revise constantly fearing my demise
With each page I find eternal bliss refines my mind
Is it blind, should I rewind, to what am I confined? /
Find ignorance is entwined with the nucleus of humankind
Limited by time- essentials wait in line behind temporal highs
The waters rise- fires multiply- and winds intensify
We fortify devastation mortified only by an oil price rise
Is this bliss? Or is the world amiss? /
Satan has me in his grips n my hearts forever eclipsed
Debate my failure to outline the scripts
Collapse into pits of decaying stiffs and reminisce
Hear the hiss of a life lost in the world’s deadly mist
For what am I waiting? Does the answer exist? /
Children slit their wrists seeking an existence better than this
Get pissed and hit their heads against bricks as a fix
Transfixed- from birth locked into the money mix
Eternally I seek bliss in a world afflicted with conflict

Two wise minds, but don't see eye to eye,
build a clock side by side, but can't agree on the time,
truth may rise, between the lines we devise,
guilt has locked pride inside, find the key in my mind.[/QUOTE]

First of all sup Noel...n...Muslimah

This kollab was definately tight and full of messages...
Noel's verse had quite a few jewls which i highlighted up....the content of this verse made me think "yeah thats true"

Muslimah's verse also had some messages i felt which i highlighted...she also desplayed some decent wordplay towards the end...

I was definately feelling the chorus at the end...because i know you two have different perspectives but can connect through the power of reason, therfore zoning alike....

peace

BLAK

noel411 · 09-14-2005, 04:43 PM

Many thanks for the feed, Furyan. I thought you'd probably like this one. And uh, thanks Martyr, I guess......haha.

White N Dangerous · 09-14-2005, 04:52 PM

fa sho, this shit was tight, messages were deep and wordplay was percise. im loving this shit
stay up

Muslimah · 09-15-2005, 04:14 AM

ignoring the envy comment

haha

thankyou to everybody who has replied. I haven't written in a blue moon and a half so im really flattered by ur comments

keep the replies coming...

XCAPEE · 09-15-2005, 05:27 AM

heavy collab....nice creativity,nice flow

Dae Ja Nae · 09-15-2005, 07:41 AM

I think I remember this one ... beautifully written ... it's amazing how this piece can relates to the recent disasters and political blunders that took place, even though it was written a while ago. That says a lot about the level of social consciousness and compassion you both have, as well as the depth of your mind state. This piece ... IMO ... is a timeless classic, that showcases the great talent you both possess.

Peace
???

Ronin · 09-15-2005, 08:08 AM

good stuff, both pretty rhymatic and had good vocabulary

havnt seen muslimah write in ages

nice drop with a message

Big Bad Man · 09-15-2005, 12:45 PM

Liked it a lot. 2 diff mindsets on 1 level. Like yin and yang

Liked the use of multis in yer work sza. Peace.

MASTER PAI MEI · 09-15-2005, 12:58 PM

definitely a good read!!!

PeacEcaeP

noel411 · 09-15-2005, 05:11 PM

Many thanks to all who replied. Much appreciated. And Dae, we only wrote this one recently. That one I showed you back in the day was an older one. It had a similar vibe though.

Dae Ja Nae · 09-15-2005, 09:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by noel411

Many thanks to all who replied. Much appreciated. And Dae, we only wrote this one recently. That one I showed you back in the day was an older one. It had a similar vibe though.

Oops ... my bad

... I really wasn't sure, but I'm still feelin' it though.

Peace
???

Muslimah · 09-16-2005, 01:14 AM

thankyou everybody. This got more of a response then i expected

haha- dae, i rarely write, it takes noel411 to force me into a collab. That last collab was the last time i wrote something before this... that was prob a year ago now... they are quite diff though, but considering that it was done by noel411 and I as well, there are, not surprisingly, some similarities...

anyways, thanx again!

09-14-2005, 04:45 AM	#1
noel411 aka Loc Daddy Supreme Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Australia Age: 30 Posts: 2,959 Rep Power: 24	Muslimah and noel411 collab I'm the white boy, and Muslimah is green with envy. It seems absurd to record every thought on occurrence, do we only learn from thoughts stored with permanence? I use words to create and relate an advertisement, to those who search, but hasten to learn too quick, planned lies derived through words pertaining to myth, analyse each page before you start turning it, light a flame and contain it, before burning a bridge, find your "facts" don't exist, like a virgin with kids, my tongue growing a cyst, so it hurts when I spit, but my words must be heard to deter ignorance, sheep herds will disperse when I'm finished with this, the pretence they rely on diminishing quick, the blind live their lives behind tenement brick, while ascribed power players are perfecting their script, the law is inclined to protecting the rich, mans fall and decline a perpetual itch, forget the past over time, but the residue sticks, our neglect of the truth clouds our view like a mist, who will lead me to a place better than this, and reveal what I need to achieve eventual bliss? I'm in the clutches of Satan, and it's got me debating, what am I contemplating, and for what am I waiting? Aspiring to be wise I strive for the ultimate prize pierce cries advise my truths survive on lies I arise and revise constantly fearing my demise With each page I find eternal bliss refines my mind Is it blind, should I rewind, to what am I confined? / Find ignorance is entwined with the nucleus of humankind Limited by time- essentials wait in line behind temporal highs The waters rise- fires multiply- and winds intensify We fortify devastation mortified only by an oil price rise Is this bliss? Or is the world amiss? / Satan has me in his grips n my hearts forever eclipsed Debate my failure to outline the scripts Collapse into pits of decaying stiffs and reminisce Hear the hiss of a life lost in the world’s deadly mist For what am I waiting? Does the answer exist? / Children slit their wrists seeking an existence better than this Get pissed and hit their heads against bricks as a fix Transfixed- from birth locked into the money mix Eternally I seek bliss in a world afflicted with conflict Two wise minds, but don't see eye to eye, build a clock side by side, but can't agree on the time, truth may rise, between the lines we devise, guilt has locked pride inside, find the key in my mind. __________________

09-14-2005, 04:05 PM	#2
martyr the illuminated orator Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 141 Rep Power: 0	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab ...muslimah... __________________ http://www.flying101.org

09-14-2005, 04:11 PM	#3
BlaK FuRYaN MaN-ov-WaR Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 808 Rep Power: 9	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab [QUOTE=noel411]I'm the white boy, and Muslimah is green with envy. It seems absurd to record every thought on occurrence, do we only learn from thoughts stored with permanence? I use words to create and relate an advertisement, to those who search, but hasten to learn too quick, planned lies derived through words pertaining to myth, analyse each page before you start turning it, light a flame and contain it, before burning a bridge, find your "facts" don't exist, like a virgin with kids, my tongue growing a cyst, so it hurts when I spit, but my words must be heard to deter ignorance, sheep herds will disperse when I'm finished with this, the pretence they rely on diminishing quick, the blind live their lives behind tenement brick, while ascribed power players are perfecting their script, the law is inclined to protecting the rich, mans fall and decline a perpetual itch, forget the past over time, but the residue sticks, our neglect of the truth clouds our view like a mist, who will lead me to a place better than this, and reveal what I need to achieve eventual bliss? I'm in the clutches of Satan, and it's got me debating, what am I contemplating, and for what am I waiting? Aspiring to be wise I strive for the ultimate prize pierce cries advise my truths survive on lies I arise and revise constantly fearing my demise With each page I find eternal bliss refines my mind Is it blind, should I rewind, to what am I confined? / Find ignorance is entwined with the nucleus of humankind Limited by time- essentials wait in line behind temporal highs The waters rise- fires multiply- and winds intensify We fortify devastation mortified only by an oil price rise Is this bliss? Or is the world amiss? / Satan has me in his grips n my hearts forever eclipsed Debate my failure to outline the scripts Collapse into pits of decaying stiffs and reminisce Hear the hiss of a life lost in the world’s deadly mist For what am I waiting? Does the answer exist? / Children slit their wrists seeking an existence better than this Get pissed and hit their heads against bricks as a fix Transfixed- from birth locked into the money mix Eternally I seek bliss in a world afflicted with conflict Two wise minds, but don't see eye to eye, build a clock side by side, but can't agree on the time, truth may rise, between the lines we devise, guilt has locked pride inside, find the key in my mind.[/QUOTE] First of all sup Noel...n...Muslimah This kollab was definately tight and full of messages... Noel's verse had quite a few jewls which i highlighted up....the content of this verse made me think "yeah thats true" Muslimah's verse also had some messages i felt which i highlighted...she also desplayed some decent wordplay towards the end... I was definately feelling the chorus at the end...because i know you two have different perspectives but can connect through the power of reason, therfore zoning alike.... peace BLAK __________________ ORPHANS OF CUSH OUT SOON

09-14-2005, 04:43 PM	#4
noel411 aka Loc Daddy Supreme Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Australia Age: 30 Posts: 2,959 Rep Power: 24	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab Many thanks for the feed, Furyan. I thought you'd probably like this one. And uh, thanks Martyr, I guess......haha. __________________

09-14-2005, 04:52 PM	#5
White N Dangerous LyRiCaL sHiNoBi Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Las Vegas Age: 24 Posts: 1,897 Rep Power: 12	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab fa sho, this shit was tight, messages were deep and wordplay was percise. im loving this shit stay up __________________ Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

09-15-2005, 04:14 AM	#6
Muslimah Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Sydney Posts: 175 Rep Power: 0	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab ignoring the envy comment haha thankyou to everybody who has replied. I haven't written in a blue moon and a half so im really flattered by ur comments keep the replies coming... __________________

09-15-2005, 05:27 AM	#7
XCAPEE Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Age: 25 Posts: 6 Rep Power: 0	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab heavy collab....nice creativity,nice flow

09-15-2005, 07:41 AM	#8
Dae Ja Nae Priceless:The Modern IsIs Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Norfolk, VA Posts: 815 Rep Power: 12	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab I think I remember this one ... beautifully written ... it's amazing how this piece can relates to the recent disasters and political blunders that took place, even though it was written a while ago. That says a lot about the level of social consciousness and compassion you both have, as well as the depth of your mind state. This piece ... IMO ... is a timeless classic, that showcases the great talent you both possess. Peace ??? __________________ *I sew...* beautiful seeds that sprout flowers that’s deeply rooted your weak style-diluted with concepts that’s so polluted my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ... *-- Dae Ja Nae* http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503

09-15-2005, 08:08 AM	#9
Ronin WC LEGEND Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: BIRMINGHAM Age: 28 Posts: 1,061 Rep Power: 13	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab good stuff, both pretty rhymatic and had good vocabulary havnt seen muslimah write in ages nice drop with a message __________________

09-15-2005, 12:45 PM	#10
Big Bad Man Mr Wuniverse Join Date: May 2004 Location: Glasgow, Scotland Age: 30 Posts: 2,705 Rep Power: 14	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab Liked it a lot. 2 diff mindsets on 1 level. Like yin and yang Liked the use of multis in yer work sza. Peace. __________________ Peace!

09-15-2005, 12:58 PM	#11
MASTER PAI MEI Are you aware I kill at will? Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: The Depths of Shaolin Posts: 7,722,355 Blog Entries: 1 Rep Power: 10	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab definitely a good read!!! PeacEcaeP __________________

09-15-2005, 05:11 PM	#12
noel411 aka Loc Daddy Supreme Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Australia Age: 30 Posts: 2,959 Rep Power: 24	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab Many thanks to all who replied. Much appreciated. And Dae, we only wrote this one recently. That one I showed you back in the day was an older one. It had a similar vibe though. __________________

09-16-2005, 01:14 AM	#14
Muslimah Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Sydney Posts: 175 Rep Power: 0	Re: Muslimah and noel411 collab thankyou everybody. This got more of a response then i expected haha- dae, i rarely write, it takes noel411 to force me into a collab. That last collab was the last time i wrote something before this... that was prob a year ago now... they are quite diff though, but considering that it was done by noel411 and I as well, there are, not surprisingly, some similarities... anyways, thanx again! __________________

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